I'm not sure why im even bothering but someone has to i guess.
As description says, a 30 minute kinetic novel about a dude who comes to woman's home to help with some woodwork and other issues. If you want to rub one out, honestly this is a popular genre in adult videos and most of them are better so just do that. Obviously story barely exist.
I probably would leave it at 3 as something deeply mediocre but 3 things really bring this down. First of all is whatever is going on on MC head. The dead squirrel he wears on top of his noggin is super distracting. Second is that Mari looks TERRIFYING, you know the analogue horrors and creepypastas where people stretch the smiles to unreal proportion to make uncanny feeling stronger? Well i half expected it to become a horror due to how scary she looks.
And third, for the developer, i highly recommend to tone down the *laughs* *giggles* *winks* and all that stuff, i swear over half of the sentenses in this contain this crap. There are better ways to convey this and it should be used in moderation.
As description says, a 30 minute kinetic novel about a dude who comes to woman's home to help with some woodwork and other issues. If you want to rub one out, honestly this is a popular genre in adult videos and most of them are better so just do that. Obviously story barely exist.
I probably would leave it at 3 as something deeply mediocre but 3 things really bring this down. First of all is whatever is going on on MC head. The dead squirrel he wears on top of his noggin is super distracting. Second is that Mari looks TERRIFYING, you know the analogue horrors and creepypastas where people stretch the smiles to unreal proportion to make uncanny feeling stronger? Well i half expected it to become a horror due to how scary she looks.
And third, for the developer, i highly recommend to tone down the *laughs* *giggles* *winks* and all that stuff, i swear over half of the sentenses in this contain this crap. There are better ways to convey this and it should be used in moderation.