Ti kanis, re..
Ok ok.. so I was wrong to assume about the Spanish thing, it just seemed like it, my mistake.
But the story thing remains. You seriously have to learn to use basic grammar and punctuation if you want to write proper stories.
The issue is not whether I get the gist of the story or not, the issue is that is very hard to read anything at all.
And from what I gather you say about the pictures, perhaps it's true, but I don't think random pics and gifs from the internet will do. You also need a consistent visual story made by an artist.
Good luck to you..