Yeah it seems that giving him the fish sticks bypasses the bug. Oh well, it was just a kiss scene anyway. When's the next update?
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Fixes will be uploaded throught the week, next content update is as soon as I can make it!
- Dec 10, 2018
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pretty good start hope it gets finished and i didnt kill another thing i interacted with x3
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Patched version can be downloaded through my itch.io, my internet sucks so I will be updating the links as soon as I wake up tomorrow, thanks for your patience!
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Thought about reviewing this but I think I'm going to wait a few updates. The opening sequence, outside the fact I don't really like being the lewd game standard isekai perv mc, surprised me a bit in that it's better than I thought it would be. Concept itself isn't new, but I enjoyed interacting with the goblin girl and thought the MC's actual dialogue with her was fine (don't care for his inner perv thoughts personally). More thought going into the world and characters than I thought there would be too.
The game loses me a bit with the sandbox. I love having the ability to freely explore and interact with NPCs at my leisure, hate having to spam gifts to raise an affection stat to make anything happen. It just isn't fun. Doubly so for gold grind, but I just used a save edit because I cannot be bothered. Problem I have with a lot of RenPy sandboxes in general, and why I think a lot of people dislike them, is that all the minigames/tasks and grind feel like pointless bloat that stop me from doing what I want to do: seeing actual events with the love interests. I'm having the same problem with this one.
I feel like this has potential, but those "systems" are pushing me away from it. Though I do understand it's all very early. Just putting some thoughts out there.
The game loses me a bit with the sandbox. I love having the ability to freely explore and interact with NPCs at my leisure, hate having to spam gifts to raise an affection stat to make anything happen. It just isn't fun. Doubly so for gold grind, but I just used a save edit because I cannot be bothered. Problem I have with a lot of RenPy sandboxes in general, and why I think a lot of people dislike them, is that all the minigames/tasks and grind feel like pointless bloat that stop me from doing what I want to do: seeing actual events with the love interests. I'm having the same problem with this one.
I feel like this has potential, but those "systems" are pushing me away from it. Though I do understand it's all very early. Just putting some thoughts out there.
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God please no, anything but being a league player.
On a serious note, the dialogue/grammar could use some work. I know it's a porn game and that's not the focus but who draws text faces in their journals? There was even one in a dialogue box with the... voice in your head thing. The stutter talking grates on my nerves with it's frequency too-
I didn't get too far, so I'll probably wait awhile longer on this one and see how it goes.
Anyway, I'll end up coming back for the trap content even if I'm simply mashing skip. Good luck dev.
On a serious note, the dialogue/grammar could use some work. I know it's a porn game and that's not the focus but who draws text faces in their journals? There was even one in a dialogue box with the... voice in your head thing. The stutter talking grates on my nerves with it's frequency too-
I didn't get too far, so I'll probably wait awhile longer on this one and see how it goes.
Anyway, I'll end up coming back for the trap content even if I'm simply mashing skip. Good luck dev.
- Aug 1, 2017
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Just going through the intro, 'darkenned' ain't right.
'Exactly, but except of the devil', that ain't right either. It would work better as 'Exactly, but instead of the devil'.
'don't worry I have the feeling', usually it's 'I have a feeling' or 'I think you'll like this deal'
'You need not to worry', 'to' is unneeded here.
'You will get to know more of me in the future', it's 'get to see more of me' or 'get to know me better'.
'Worst it could happen', it's 'The worst that could happen'.
'Exactly, but except of the devil', that ain't right either. It would work better as 'Exactly, but instead of the devil'.
'don't worry I have the feeling', usually it's 'I have a feeling' or 'I think you'll like this deal'
'You need not to worry', 'to' is unneeded here.
'You will get to know more of me in the future', it's 'get to see more of me' or 'get to know me better'.
'Worst it could happen', it's 'The worst that could happen'.
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Thanks kindly for all the comments, I might not reply but I'm taking notes! There's lot for me to polish up and the feedback really helps me out a lot, since I didn't have anyone to help me out (That even spoke English, at least lol). I'll try to go back to the grammar again, and again on the coming updates and try to be better.
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Thanks a lot for the feedback! My thought process when creating the sandbox part was to supplement my lack of writing skills with some sort of a "pause" so the players didn't come in and simply started fucking everyone. I don't really like sandboxes either, but when making the game I was all but confident on my writing, so I resorted to it. But if people don't like it, I might make the section shorter and just try new things out. Thanks again!
Tags tell you what content is in the game they don't tell you what's the main focus. It's why games get tagged with NTR even if it's one scene.
Is most of the art in this game that default forward facing pose that you see with most beginner artists?
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Sex scenes besides, the main bulk of the game is conversations with those poses!
If the sex scenes are different I guess I'll try it out but the arms out forward facing pose bland and boring to have on every character. The sex scene in the preview also looks like a modified front facing pose too so I'll have to check if there's any other angles.
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am i stupid or how do i get the scene with vexx do i need to cook for him? i dont know the recipe and im trying for like 10 minutes now xd (idea of the game and so is perfect im excited to see where this game goes)
(i finally got it) (Peak game)
(i finally got it) (Peak game)
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I'll add a questlog in the next version so it's clearer what to do. For those who are a bit lost, after getting the quest, you can talk with Liabella for some tips!
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i wont lie the sandbox part is really annoying to go all the fishing area fish pray rng just to get fish even with bait lose stamina in 3 tries if u get fish or even 2 or lose all your stamina after trying to do it 4 times rng with getting herbs there is no bag system so we cant see what items we have and no quest log to remember what we need to do/get
i like your art style it fits the style of the game just a few issues here and there hence vexx going back title screen but it seems like you already know and all sandbox stuff i said up there good luck on this game