VN - Ren'Py - Moving in with My Future Wife [v0.2.0] [Tasty soap Bubble's]

My Feedback:

• This game has been excellent so far.
• The personalities of both the MC and FMC have been great. The MC isn’t stupid/loser/pathetic, and he’s also not the typical alpha type (boring), he is an ordinary character with strengths and weaknesses, which is great.
• The FMC isn’t foolish and doesn’t cheat for simple reasons or out of pure lust (without going through a logical and relatively long corruption path). She genuinely loves the MC, and when it comes to her infidelity, there are justifiable reasons. even if you keep the "Mood" parameter high, she will always love you, and this deep love is essential for enhancing the enjoyment of both NTS and NTR.
• The story is great. Every moment is filled with tension, and it’s never boring. We’re dealing with a relationship-driven narrative.
• All the side characters are placed perfectly and have diverse personalities.
• The writing is good, although there are some repetitive sentences at times, but overall, it wasn’t boring. I read everything because it was enjoyable.
• The atmosphere is immersive, to the point that you’ll play through the entire update without stopping.
• The porn scene selections are very well done, with attention given to their relevance and fit within the context and story.
  
  
• Most importantly, the developer mentioned that NTR is avoidable, meaning the player can choose only the NTS path without being NTRed, which is fantastic. The atmosphere of this game is such that if NTR weren’t avoidable, it would harm the character/personality of both the MC and even the FMC (due to the personalities of the NPCs). But when NTR is avoidable, and the player/MC can choose that path for themselves, the problem disappears entirely because you can say, "I chose this path for my own pleasure."
• What happened in the club, I think, depends on whether you're already on the NTR path or the NTS path. I asked the developer on Patreon, and he said you can progress through the NTS path without fear of NTR:
• https://www.patreon.com/posts/progress-update-111844776
  
  
• This game has great potential for NTS. Imagine f***ing the FMC in front of the MC with his consent; that can be extremely hot.
• I hope the story continues to maintain its high level of logic and doesn’t fall into making the MC and FMC overly foolish like similar games.
• Perhaps the only flaw is that some of the choices aren’t very clear. Although this might not be a flaw, and it could be intentional to increase the tension, making it clear later on what those choices lead to.
  
  
• In conclusion, I highly recommend this game. It has been excellent so far.

[v0.2.0]

Well, it's the Nth rendition of the phone NTR genre. Even among this group, there are some differences in execution, so more specifically, this game follows the style of A Wife's Life quite closely. I am not comparing the two in terms of quality or bashing this for unoriginality. Just letting people know that this one is the more linear approach with minor variations like A Wife's Life, rather than being a convoluted branching mess like A Wife's Phone.

It's still quite early, but you have the usual situation. Some loser white boy. BBC antagonist. An asshole boss. Best friend fuckboy. Wife and mom. You get the picture. The writing is satisfactory for this type of cliche plot. The English is alright and the dialogues are natural enough. The chosen models are great, as well. The tension and build up is not bad. All in all, it's alright. But it's still early in the story. All the other NTR phone games had pretty good progression in the early stages, but most of them fall apart as it goes on. Let's hope this game pulls it off to the end.

The reason for 3* is mainly due to technical issues. The biggest annoyance is that you cannot click on the picture that is linked in a chat and zoom in. That is a grave sin when the majority of visual content of a phone NTR game happens on the phone's chat. I suppose this is an easy fix and it will be addressed in the future, surely.

Some minor gripes include the fact that this is pretty hardcoded to be that western cuckold mix of netorare and netorase. Basically, the MC is appalled that he is getting NTRed, but he gets confused boners and will eventually turn into a full on cuck, I guess. No distinct route separation for that, as far as I can tell. Also, while I try to rate this on its own merits, it follows its inspiration way too closely in terms of plot structure.

So far, so good; an interesting start to what seems will unfold into a conspiracy-style BNWO/cuck game (the black guy, GF's brother and GF's best friend working together to get the MC into accepting his inferior cuck role is where I feel the story is heading).

Besides, the choice of GF is quite good regarding the limitations of a real porn game, since there is a lot of material with the redhead chick from Blacked both in a girl next door role, as well as in more classical Interracial porn trope settings available.

The game is really great, but it feels like there’s a slight lack of sex scenes, which could be increased a bit. Other than that, it seems there’s no issue. For a first game development attempt, it’s really successful. Taking such a big risk and achieving success is amazing in my opinion. It truly deserves applause. Using real images in Ren'Py is more difficult than using regular assets or character assets, yet they’ve used real images very well. The video transitions and other elements give a strong signal that the game will be good. I hope it doesn’t end up forgotten like some other games. The only issue is that the NTR path isn’t very clear. If they could increase that a bit or at least guide or warn the player towards the NTR, would it be more enjoyable

Holy crap, this has turned into a shit sandwich.

Everyone has unnatural reactions in it. All the hallmark implausible "accidental" texts & texts from a mysterious stranger that drag these sort of games down. But the implausible reactions from MC just make it difficult to suspend any disbelief at all. Zero immersion can be had here even if you're into the kink scenarios unless your standards for engagement are so low you can be captivated by an electric shaver owners manual. There is no understanding of human interaction here whatsoever.

I swear, anyone fapping to this could get off to stick-figure drawings and a story written by their 12 year old autistic cousin as long as the words Interracial and NTR were involved.

I love this kind of story and it is executed very well. I especially wanted to give this 5 star rating because I feel the 1 star ratings are unfair (and maybe even fake). The releases give a decent amount of story time and I'm looking forward to upcoming updates. The story scratches that interracial ntr itch very well and i love the redhead actress Jia Lissa as the girlfriend. Keep up the great work!

its not nice to archive the same game in the game folder for double up the size !! its note even 500 mb !!! , its only 240mb !!!
pretty disappointed !!!

i dont understand people who post a 2 minutes gameplay.... there is NOTHING HERE... absolutely nothing !!!
such a shame

The game so far seems really amazing. While it doesn't have too much content now, the content that it has is really nice. Can't wait for more updates. Hope updates are coming sooner rather than later

So far it looks like an other ntr game where main antagonist hides behind distance, power or some other bullshit reason to be unreachable for protagonist and the main antagonist uses dumbest methods to corrupt wife or technically girlfriend in this case while boyfriend stays silent and takes it.
So yeah to me it looks like a poorly written reap off of a remake of a game that had some potential but have been abandoned and let this become the standard bullsit.

I'm not hard to please... I really like NTR interracial content, so as soon as I saw the cover of this and the tags I decided to give it a try... Plus I really like this kind of stuff when it has real porn. I really liked this first version, I consider it a good thing for a demo in terms of length and it also leaves with a good cliffhanger. I really liked that we could decide some things that I think are very hot, like for example to show that more "provocative" picture to Daril... Also the messages your girlfriend sends you are very hot, that is something very well done. And just the fact of Daril appearing makes my imagination fly, thinking about what can happen with him and your girlfriend. Also, then when we arrive at his apartment and hear how he exchanges number with your girlfriend is great too. It's a game that has all the features to please me and I look forward to a new version. I found some grammatical errors, but I hope the developer will see this review and not only feel motivated to keep working on the game, but also to fix those little mistakes
Keep the good work