VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Moving Out [Day 9b] [APA]

Great scenes and nice renders but general script and writing is horible. Looks like dev doesnt know by himself about what and for who hes doing this game, it shows by bestiality vibes, ntr'ing mc by sister new friend who behind his back corrupts his innocent sister instead of himself, but dev presents it just like promised lesbian content. She even makes fun of mc about his ignorance about the fact that she fucked his sweet sister in the ass while he was just sleepeing in the living room. It was straightly disgraceful and humiliating in all possible means.

There is so many weird or bad plot decisions in this game... for example mc use blackmail to make revenge to his prudish mother, who by the plot is a villain who cockblocked mc all this years, by making her through her new boyfriend to accept anal sex and then hes just sit and watches through camera their sex like its somehow satisfying to see how your strict mother enjoy kinky sex which became possible only thanks to mc, yeah great revenge and totaly satisfying.

About mc, he is just pathetic. Story begins from him moving to new apartment and starting new life with his sisters and without his controling mother who cockblocked him for life. He already thinks about some action and fulfilling his lewd dreams, but then story begins and charachters start talking... Hes a total neckless, undecisive wimp. If girls want something they will do it or behave around mc like they want and he just accept it like normal thing and correct way to react to his sisters rudeness, quirks and whims. Contraversary to his own thoughts about how great to finally be free and not be cockblocked by his mother, mc still behave overly passive and unnecesary shy, to version 8b he didnt even once initiated or persuaded any girls into sex stuff. On the contrary its the girl WHO NEEDS TO PERSUADE HIM TO LET THEM DO STUFF WITH MC, by explaining to him thats fine and they want it and other justifying bs, but mc still need to excuse and justify himself before, every, fucking, action, towards, any, girl. Like for real mc have mentality of 12 old shy church girl, when his sister friend behave like actual man with balls and corrupt his sister behind his back when mc continue to live in his own world with rainbows and unicorns)

During whole playing I was irritated and butthurt by this level of mc patheticness mixed with all weirdness and bad writing about which I writed above and only great scenes made me to continue play this lucky simp simulator.

I'm giving 3 stars for fappablity. The renders are great and the animations are also stellar. So yes, it has very fappable content -- it's good pornography -- but I seriously think the games direction is going to blow up in the devs face.

He's acting on a lot of kinks that will be deal breakers for parts of his audience, and he just kind of throws them in there without warning or player choice.

So yeah, Dev is casting a wide net on the kinks, maybe hoping for a big audience but it's seriously not thought out well. It was only fappable to me cause I treated it like porn and fapped to the animations; but damn this game feels like it doesn't know what it's identity is.

Day 8

So far so perfect. Models are great. Good to see a goth-looking LI. She looks amazing.

Story-wise, I don't know what to make of it still. I just hope the whole streamer thing doesn't become streaming to strangers with one of the girls. Not so sure about the Angel and Devil thing, hopefully that's not too important in the story.

All in all, perfect so far. To the point I wish I had a TARDIS just to play more.

Unique art if a bit on the loli side and MC looks like a gooper but animations are stellar. Not only are the scenes well animated but so many small details with the anatomy changing based what's happening or what's getting filled.

And you just know anal sex is coming or I'd be extremly disappointed.

Overall just great animation and very hot throat scenes so far. Only thing that could make it better is animated orgasm scenes instead of that flashing light shit. I don't know why so few animaters opt out of it. And maybe scale down the dick a little to be it slightly more believeable that the girls wouldn't physically die doing what they do.

This is one of my favorite games ever. The English is not perfect, but it's still well-written, funny and super sexy. The MC is not a douche, but not a dullard either. The progression rate is perfect -- slow enough to build anticipation for the next scene but not so slow you get bored. The renders are great and the H-scenes are some of the best on this website. Highly recommend to give it a chance if it hits any of your fetishes and consider supporting the dev. It would truly be a shame if he abandoned this project due to lack of support.

Just finished 7b and to start with the ending: I liked the almost cliffhanger ending where you're "hung" on whether Luna will visit the MC during the night

Girl models are very cute while I'm surprised the MC's face is visible which is most uncommon.

One thing that puzzles me is their ( siblings ) financial situation, MC says everything's fine and he pays rent and whatnots but neither of them are at school or working except for Starr who's a struggling streamer with little or no income.
MC seems to be quite handy when it comes to hacking/coding and may have struck at least silver with digital currency otherwise their apartment would have been a luxury chalet in the suburbs.

There's some quirky humor both in writing and renders. The Harley Quinn cop and Starrs shenanigans under the bed are amusing.
Sometimes though the dialogue is on idle engine especially when the characters are thinking and during the conversations with "the guardian angel/devil".

I'm eagerly looking forward for the next update where hopefully some questionmarks will be straightend out.
I give it a 4 since I can almost smell what's to come later on and if my hunch is correct it's a borderline 5.

Excellent renders and animations, definitely some of the best on here imo. Also enjoying the story quite a bit, and especially all the available girls. Quite excited to see what else is coming in the future.

This preview is for Day7b.
2/5 - the only saving grade for this game is it renders pretty good.
I had to inform everyone is that this is one of these type of "edging game".
So far the content is just 3 blowjobs and 1 lesbian toy play.

Animation and renders - 4/5
Writing - 1/5: All these humors is so corny, mc a bit wimpy, over exaggerating emotion scene, too much unecessary small talks......

Personally i dont like these edging type of game at all, maybe at this progress we'll have some action at 2024.

Version played: Day 7b

Just some quick thoughts, would give it a 3.5 or 7 out of 10 but since only 3 and 4 stars are an option I will leave it at 3 this time.

Story wise I feel like it is quite well done, even if the setting is not that original it's executed rather well.


Visuals:
it's fine, models are not that original, renders / animations are okay but they are definitely the same old character creator creations.
And they really had to use that one tunnel asset that has just been used so many times.
I will say that there is a big improvement between the beginning and later on.

Characters:
I quite like the way the female characters are done, decent amount of variation. The MC however had to have it's cliche comically large cock, I know it's a plot point but it really did not have to be that large, and it's largely a overdone mechanic, that being said this is just a pet peeve of mine.

content:
There are a dent number of scenes, however they are blowjob at the furthest right now, I am personally not a fan of a complete buildup like that, I'd much rather see some sex with secondary characters to mix things up. It's a porn game after all.

Moving out is the type of game I would consider, the perfect type of sex game, other examples include Power Vacuum and the unfortunately abandoned Bad Teacher, games that know what you're here for, they know characters and situations ultimately exist in service of what is erotically appealing and it does it well.

I played another game, the MC fucks a character, but because the game had me interact with half a dozen other female characters and never really built up to this one, I actually felt bored watching it despite how well animated it was.

To give you an example of this game doing it right with light spoilers, one of your "room mates" is lying forward on the sofa playing a video game and wearing a skirt, her ass partially exposed and we get a phenomenal use of animation as you can't stop looking at her ass as she bounces it around in excitement and in her innocence, unintentionally makes a bunch of innuendos. That sort of build up is a 100 times more erotic than just "they fuck"

I am also surprised at one of the reviews saying there is little content, for a game that's only been out for half a year as this review was posted, it has plenty and it's probably the hottest stuff I've played this year.

Great game. Awesome renders, characters and writting. Looks very promising. Hope it won't get abandoned like most games with as much effort put into them.

Can recommend and hope the game gets the support it needs to continue getting updated as often as possible.

Great game! Love the renders, the whole plot and most importantly I like the character development where MC is hung and yet the creator takes their time to build the story.

I absolutely loved the side characters and taking quite fast initiatives to blend with the main story and yet stay unique to their own style

Pretty nice renders but with a lot of flaws

All the girls everywhere have something majorly wrong with them. All of the ones you interact with are gross and all seems to have silly coloured hair, except maybe starr.

There is no build up or tension because (like many games) you can see everything the girls think or do in private, the MC barely gets involved.

There are some ok models in the game (daisy maybe) but it seems you don't interact with them, this might be explained by the biggest issue with the game: you have to play an MC who has serious mental illness on top of already cringy fake-niceness writing

This game looks like fun. Love the premise. Models and art are good. The story is great, at least for me. Just an overall good game. Still low on content, but that will get resolved over time. Fun game - highly recommended.

Rating for [Day 6b].

Welp, this is my personal opinion, but at the moment of the development of the game I like everything. I would even say that I like the developer's way of thinking. I will give it 5.

In terms of:

Story: The vibes of daily life rn, I wouldn't say it's something extraordinary or unique, however I didn't even skip the text while playing (there are some funny moments, but the overall story building is fine). However, at the end of the update, there was a hint of an interesting plot development. The pace of the story is perfect, I don't know if it's worth speeding things up (because the main character seems to have an adult mindset, but at the same time the backstory says that he was cockblocked), so it's up to dev.

Render and Models: Renders look good, it's hard to find something to complain about. The models feel unique, the twins look stunning. Separately, I would like to note the animations, as I really liked them (they look quite smooth and lively).

Language and writing: I will not write much, but for a non-native speaker it is well written.

Music and sounds: I consider this optional, for some people this is a big plus, but I guess most people turn the sound off.

Short summary: I really recommend playing this game. However, some people may be sensitive to game tags. I will not advise the developer how to deal with this, since at the beginning I wrote that everything suits me. The game is very well disclosed the theme of corruption, love it.

P.S. What's funny tho, it's more interesting for me to watch the development of the dev and progress in Daz3d rather than the actual game itself

In terms of: Moving Out [Day7b].

"Give this dev a whole graphic studio and staff to make this game! "

Are you sure you're new to Daz3d, and haven't been training somewhere in the mountains all this time?

I really liked the update, all goofy stuff in the plot and so on. (Some moments look silly, but it makes them funnier). Corruption in the game is top, there are not so many games on the forum with this tag that could reveal this topic so well. Nice Jojo ref btw.

My recommendations remained the same

However, during the replay of the game, I noticed that dev did not finish the other path with Star, which I believe can be considered as little mistake in terms promotion of the game. (I wrote above that this is not a problem for me personally, but many people are very sensitive to this)

I absolutely love the models. Virtually all the girls look very good; the twins are perfect. Renders are good.

But the story is not much to my liking. It's 6 days, and the MC still haven't developed his relationships with the sisters (or anyone else, actually). (I don't count a toilet stall sex as a relationship). C'mon, it's a game, not a historical chronicle! I would start kissing the girls in the 1st day, not the sixth!

Besides, it's mostly about corruption (to the degree that a lesbian slut - I would say - anally rapes that little innocent girl. No romantic path?

I love lesbian stuff, especially in the harem, but I hate corruption, especially the anal one. I'd go all Dexter Morgan if anyone would do that to my sister.

That makes
★★★★★ for models and renders,
★★☆☆☆ for the story.

Still, the developer improves the game, so I want to support his efforts and instead of 4 stars I give 5 as a kind of advance.

My rating for V. day 6b

Story/writing; Good, characters are interesting bit cliché but funny and a good buildup to the interesting parts doesnt try to waste your time and pacing is excellent

Renders/models; Good, not much to say. models look good, environment's good you can see the dev put some effort in to make them stand out

Animations; not that many yet but the ones that are there are excellent

Sound; Good, for most of these games sound is a afterthought not in this game

Minor negative for now is the Main menu is not well readable gray on gray but that should be a easy fix

Conclusion; If u like the tags Definitely worth a try!

I almost passed this one over when I saw the doggie comment in the below review but since there isn't a beastiality tag I decided to risk it.

The story line isn't bad. The writing is okay, a couple errors here and there but I've seen much worse. There is a part where sis is looking for juice where it felt like a piece of dialog was missing.

One downside to me is it's another AVN where the MC has a comically large GMO penis. I'm not sure if it's meant to be a joke or if the Dev was being serious but it looks ridiculous. It's always a drawback to me when the Dev doesn't make the models, male and female, anatomically realistic. They have a big tit and big ass tag, they need a GMO dick or horse dick tag.

Sis Luna takes the attitude thing too far to the point she really isn't likeable. Even more aggravating is the MC puts up with it. There comes a point where sister or not, enough is enough.

Towards the end of this version Starr finds a butt plug and you are given the choice of her figuring out how to use it herself or letting her very pushy friend show her. If you choose to let her figure it out on her own you get a message that the content for that path isn't complete yet and you are forced to watch the other path. Huge mistake, neither path should have been included in that case.

The friend, April I believe, was cute enough but too pushy and it's never good when an outsider make more progress with a main girl than the MC does.

There is a lot of potential here but there have been a couple of missteps already. Have to see where it goes from here.

My Rating for (V0.1 ) is:

Pros:
+ Good Graphics
+ Nice Story
+ Long Release

Cons:


Conclusion:
Like the Story, the story gets off pretty well for a first release
Nice Characters with good Graphics, and I like the way the Story is told, also like the doggie scenes hoping to see more.
Hope the Dev keeps it up, game is definitely worth keeping an eye out for.

Last Words:
Worth the Download.