VN Ren'Py Ms.Denvers [v0.09 BETA] [Pop Toc]

[Edgar Anal Poe]

From the very beginning I watched this with great interest. After seeing the poll on Patreon, a large red bulb flashing for me. Seems the whole scenario, the spine, went to the hands of Patrons. Seems the dev himself does not know what he wants to show in his game. Does the game have a script, a spine from which branches selected by Patrons can grow? Seems that all key points have been given to Patrons and their money. It doesn't look good or convincing. It never ended well. What's next? Daughters NTR whenever people ask for it? From the comments, you can see the "honeymoon" is over. These are serious questions because I would like to support devs who deserve it, but there is no way that in the current state and without any certainty as to the future that I will spend 25 $ on Itch.

 

[Alea iacta est]

From the very beginning I watched this with great interest. After seeing the poll on Patreon, a large red bulb flashing for me. Seems the whole scenario, the spine, went to the hands of Patrons. Seems the dev himself does not know what he wants to show in his game. Does the game have a script, a spine from which branches selected by Patrons can grow? Seems that all key points have been given to Patrons and their money. It doesn't look good or convincing. It never ended well. What's next? Daughters NTR whenever people ask for it? From the comments, you can see the "honeymoon" is over. These are serious questions because I would like to support devs who deserve it, but there is no way that in the current state and without any certainty as to the future that I will spend 25 $ on Itch.

Very good post.

Agree, common mistake from inexperienced people.

When you try to make everybody happy, you won't make anyone happy.

You must have a story to tell and a framework with very clear boundaries, then you can ask to slightly bend part of the story or underline some other aspect. But it doesn't exist a "community effort" in building a credible story.

I saw this mistake been made so many times creating soulless games.

 

[Deleted member 4420830]

Maybe the developers can photosynthesize food for themselves, power their computers with solar energy, or maybe they don't even have to use computers, just plug a cable into their mouths and provide us with "free" games!
My point is that developer loses revenue because of early leaks. It seems that all the developers don't voluntarily release their games to this site, and he's just humbly hoping that you all will give him a chance to develop them.

 

[Alea iacta est]

Well that update was utterly annoying and depressing, two old frustrated milfs talking about a dildo and that young guy who doesn't want to be here.
I understand why the dev want to slow down with that VN, he seems as depressed and annoyed as this story.
Maybe it was not a good idea to get into that pile of problems it's just making things worse.
Why not making something funny instead of that Ms Denver with her shitty life, shitty work, shitty students. I didn' t even save at the end of this update because i probably don't intend to go on with it.
I don't play VN to be reminded that life is boring, that people are boring and that problems are your everyday burden.

Fucking brilliant post!!!

and by the way.. I agree 100% lol!!

 

[BorgiaBou]

I tend to avoid slow burn games, not into Harlequin romance novels at all, but the dev is making what his patrons want.
So move on if you're not into slow burn games


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Curious how this poll doesn't have a "Fast Corruption" option too so then we can see exactly where is the balance, obviously the devs are first who want that "slow corruption" option to lead...

 

[fishbrain]

After seeing the poll on Patreon, a large red bulb flashing for me. Seems the whole scenario, the spine, went to the hands of Patrons. Seems the dev himself does not know what he wants to show in his game.

I do agree with this. If the developer is just doing what others want then there's no passion and the hopes for it to be completed take a big hit. In my years here you need to have a base story at the very least to build upon and without that there is very little hope for completion. Also why I won't support full time but don't have a problem buying updates if they're to my liking.

If I won the lottery I swear I'd commission an update just with mom and "gene" to mimick Taboo and the finale would be the scene when she wakes him up in the middle of the night in a very.. passionate way. If you like incest and don't know, go watch it, because you're missing out!

 

[Ragnar]

Curious how this poll doesn't have a "Fast Corruption" option too so then we can see exactly where is the balance, obviously the devs are first who want that "slow corruption" option to lead...

It doesn't need it, the rest of options speak for themselves. Bdsm, blackmail, ugly bastard...I will wait some updates because
1st The renders are nice and I want more of Ms Denvers
2nd The poll results 2 and 3 are blackmail and group sex orgy
3rd The game is in early development stages
I get why people want fast content and porn but cut the dev some slack, this is a new game and so far he's doing a good job.

 

[SilentSevenStar]

Nice~

 

[Toxic Mr Masculine]

Let him handle the problem how he wants to

There are 2 ways to go about this
Take some time off
Freshen ur mind and then get back to work
Or
Just ignore the trolls who can't provide constructive criticism

Men don't need to take time off, we work because it's our duty

 

[lockerxx]

the next update will be wanda in the school?
-are we going to meet vicky soon?

 

[Old Dog]

the next update will be wanda in the school?
-are we going to meet vicky soon?

I know one person who we shall be meeting in the next update

 

[HiddenFA]

I don't really know what is going on with this forum (regarding neg. comments and whatnot), but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the game so far. Good game dev! You really know how to make an engaging story.

 

[harloch74]

thanks

 

[AdultFunGamer]

I tend to avoid slow burn games, not into Harlequin romance novels at all, but the dev is making what his patrons want.
So move on if you're not into slow burn games


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fetish: fisting,Urination, big toys,stretching

 

[alexandro1969]

fantastic game

 

[tom882]

I can't open the file, it says it's in an unknown format or damaged, but anyone?

 

[rudy007]

I can't open the file, it says it's in an unknown format or damaged, but anyone?

Try 7zip. If you use it already, file is corrupt.

 

[DashaTaran]

All of the options in that Fetishes poll can make me feel horny, but Slow Corruption?
How about you guys go play AWAM?

 

[Squadblocked]

I’m shocked we didn’t make any moves with the female student. I would've liked if we showed her our underwear under the table or maybe get a good look of her ass or something.

 

[Old Dog]

All of the options in that Fetishes poll can make me feel horny, but Slow Corruption?
How about you guys go play AWAM?

Why?
We get more content and the updates are a hell of a lot quicker with this game