This is a nice starting point, and just needs more content and some gameplay improvements.
I checked the Discord, but seems to be exclusive to Patrons, so hopefully they can see the feedback here.
== Rooms and upgrades ==
Each room should have its own unique UI showing the slots available, making it possible to click and drag slaves and monsters to the slots rather than requiring going to the specific room and drag and drop there.
Here's an example made in paint:
== Content ==
I'm not sure if you plan on adding lolis like in Monster Black Market, but I feel this game could have something unique that game didn't have, which is monster children.
Monsters could have their child and adult form, both capable of breeding, but each having it's own quirks.
Child goblins are unable to overpower adult females due to weakened stats on their own, but they can group up in gangbang animations.
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Child goblins only have 50% fertility, but increase depravity at 1.x the normal rate, with x being the number of child goblins in the gangbang. They cannot be sent on raids, so they are perfect to keep at the burrow to mind break your nurseries.
As for mind broken/max depraved women, it'd be nice to have them be able to serve their goblin masters in the monster rest area with services like blowjobs, titfucks, handjobs, rimjobs, breastfeeding, etc.
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It'd also be great to have depraved birthing sex as well, with mothers so engrossed in sex that they don't even bother going to the birth room and just pop their babies out in the breeding area, then go right back into sex with umbilical cords dangling from their crotch.
== Pregnancy and Birth ==
First of all, props to the work of animating the whole birth scene, but I miss the lack of the umbilical cord stuck to the baby.
It might be a personal thing, but I find it very exciting to see the umbilical cord hanging from a loosened pussy after birth, and it can also lead to erotic scenes like sex right after birth due to depraved mothers as mentioned previously.
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Anyways, back to the game mechanics, the pregnancy and birth system is quite shallow at the moment.
For starters, we need bigger pregnant bellies.
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The current size might be fine for a single goblin pregnancy, but it'd be great to have twin and triplet pregnancies with huge bloated stomachs.
Hazumi and the Pregnation is probably the best game with focus on pregnancy and birth, as well as breast size changes and lactation amount, so it might be nice to reference it.
== Slave Bios ==
I'm not sure what's planned for bios, but I think it'd be fun to have some information about the slaves, like age, birth experience, relationship status(single, married, widow, etc).
It's also be the perfect place to display erotic statistics, like amount of semen in stomach, anus and pussy, sex skill level, current breast size and lactation amount, etc.
First images from Violated Heroine, last image taken from
== Pregnancy mechanics ==
Currently, it's way too simple
In the current version of the game, it's possible to impregnate any slave x20 times in a row, and never require letting them rest, as their HP just gets a bit lower than half, nowhere close to 0.
Besides losing HP during sex due to struggling to fight back, giving birth should also decrease health, with chances for critical damage, where the baby, the mother or even both can end up dead without careful handling as everything is left to autoplay.
== Unique Monsters ==
Unlike Monster Black Market, where we get NPC females to aid us with new functions, the unique characters could give birth to unique goblins, which then fill those positions instead.
Once they hit max depravity, the next pregnancy will lead to the birth of a unique monster related to each character archetype:
Elf Nun --> Goblin Shaman
The goblin shaman has the passive effect of increasing the HP recovery rate in the slave cage, and decreases HP damage taken from giving birth.
Besides this passive effect, the goblin shaman can increase each slave pregnancy chances by carving womb tattoos on them, and also increase other goblin status by carving tribal tattoos, with one tattoo for each main stat.
The player needs to sacrifice monsters / slaves in order to use blood for tattoos for humans / monsters respectively.
Merchant Girl(?) --> Greedy Goblin
The greedy goblin has the passive effect of increasing loot obtained from raids, and increase money earned from selling monsters and slaves.
This effect only becomes available by giving two slaves to serve him in the rest area, otherwise he just stays there as a big fat goblin eating food without doing any work.
Dwarf Girl(?) --> Dwarf Goblin
The dwarf goblin has the passive effect of increasing milk production.
A small goblin that never grows no matter how much milk he drinks. Sadistic personality, treating slaves like cattle, slaping their faces, tits, butt and pregnant stomach as he wants.
Loves to ride slaves like a horse around the burrow to show off.
I don't have any good ideas for the female adventurer and catgirl, so just take the above as reference.
== Market Consumables ==
The market should also offer customization items for slaves and monsters.
Things like hair dye, breast/butt augumentation drugs, aphrodisiacs, lotion, lactation and ovulation inducers, and normal/erotic clothes and accessories.
It should also be possible to increase monster body and penis size, leading to belly and throat bulges during sex scenes.
== Meat ==
One interesting approach from
Let me say it right away, but I'm not a fan of gore, and it was just something that happened behind the scenes in that game, but it was a nice touch that gave the "monster" element while playing and managing your goblin burrow.
It seems impossible to have slaves die as of the current version as they always reach max depravity and stop losing HP from sex, but if that changes in future versions, it might be nice to take the "turn useless dead slaves into meat" approach rather than the MBM version where you put them into a coffin and get to revive them whenever.
I'm not against having an option to revive slaves, likely with the goblin shaman or the elf nun, but the option to dispose of the corpses by turning them into meat would be fitting imo, even more if it's optional.
== Conclusion ==
I could talk about missing sound effects, but I have no idea if it's fine to take moaning effects from other games or from random amateur porn videos, so I wish the team luck in that front.
For now the ass slamming sound is pretty good, but I'm looking forward to other sexual service like blowjobs and titfucks as well.
Hopefully they get included in the future, so for now I'll keep watching from the sidelines and also check on the Discord from time to time.
Thanks for making this game.
Wish you all the best.
I checked the Discord, but seems to be exclusive to Patrons, so hopefully they can see the feedback here.
== Rooms and upgrades ==
Each room should have its own unique UI showing the slots available, making it possible to click and drag slaves and monsters to the slots rather than requiring going to the specific room and drag and drop there.
Here's an example made in paint:
== Content ==
I'm not sure if you plan on adding lolis like in Monster Black Market, but I feel this game could have something unique that game didn't have, which is monster children.
Monsters could have their child and adult form, both capable of breeding, but each having it's own quirks.
Child goblins are unable to overpower adult females due to weakened stats on their own, but they can group up in gangbang animations.
Images taken from
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,
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, and
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.Child goblins only have 50% fertility, but increase depravity at 1.x the normal rate, with x being the number of child goblins in the gangbang. They cannot be sent on raids, so they are perfect to keep at the burrow to mind break your nurseries.
As for mind broken/max depraved women, it'd be nice to have them be able to serve their goblin masters in the monster rest area with services like blowjobs, titfucks, handjobs, rimjobs, breastfeeding, etc.
Images taken from
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.It'd also be great to have depraved birthing sex as well, with mothers so engrossed in sex that they don't even bother going to the birth room and just pop their babies out in the breeding area, then go right back into sex with umbilical cords dangling from their crotch.
== Pregnancy and Birth ==
First of all, props to the work of animating the whole birth scene, but I miss the lack of the umbilical cord stuck to the baby.
It might be a personal thing, but I find it very exciting to see the umbilical cord hanging from a loosened pussy after birth, and it can also lead to erotic scenes like sex right after birth due to depraved mothers as mentioned previously.
Second image from
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(*scat warning).Anyways, back to the game mechanics, the pregnancy and birth system is quite shallow at the moment.
For starters, we need bigger pregnant bellies.
Images taken from
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.The current size might be fine for a single goblin pregnancy, but it'd be great to have twin and triplet pregnancies with huge bloated stomachs.
Hazumi and the Pregnation is probably the best game with focus on pregnancy and birth, as well as breast size changes and lactation amount, so it might be nice to reference it.
== Slave Bios ==
I'm not sure what's planned for bios, but I think it'd be fun to have some information about the slaves, like age, birth experience, relationship status(single, married, widow, etc).
It's also be the perfect place to display erotic statistics, like amount of semen in stomach, anus and pussy, sex skill level, current breast size and lactation amount, etc.
First images from Violated Heroine, last image taken from
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.== Pregnancy mechanics ==
Currently, it's way too simple
In the current version of the game, it's possible to impregnate any slave x20 times in a row, and never require letting them rest, as their HP just gets a bit lower than half, nowhere close to 0.
Besides losing HP during sex due to struggling to fight back, giving birth should also decrease health, with chances for critical damage, where the baby, the mother or even both can end up dead without careful handling as everything is left to autoplay.
== Unique Monsters ==
Unlike Monster Black Market, where we get NPC females to aid us with new functions, the unique characters could give birth to unique goblins, which then fill those positions instead.
Once they hit max depravity, the next pregnancy will lead to the birth of a unique monster related to each character archetype:
Elf Nun --> Goblin Shaman
The goblin shaman has the passive effect of increasing the HP recovery rate in the slave cage, and decreases HP damage taken from giving birth.
Besides this passive effect, the goblin shaman can increase each slave pregnancy chances by carving womb tattoos on them, and also increase other goblin status by carving tribal tattoos, with one tattoo for each main stat.
The player needs to sacrifice monsters / slaves in order to use blood for tattoos for humans / monsters respectively.
Merchant Girl(?) --> Greedy Goblin
The greedy goblin has the passive effect of increasing loot obtained from raids, and increase money earned from selling monsters and slaves.
This effect only becomes available by giving two slaves to serve him in the rest area, otherwise he just stays there as a big fat goblin eating food without doing any work.
Dwarf Girl(?) --> Dwarf Goblin
The dwarf goblin has the passive effect of increasing milk production.
A small goblin that never grows no matter how much milk he drinks. Sadistic personality, treating slaves like cattle, slaping their faces, tits, butt and pregnant stomach as he wants.
Loves to ride slaves like a horse around the burrow to show off.
I don't have any good ideas for the female adventurer and catgirl, so just take the above as reference.
== Market Consumables ==
The market should also offer customization items for slaves and monsters.
Things like hair dye, breast/butt augumentation drugs, aphrodisiacs, lotion, lactation and ovulation inducers, and normal/erotic clothes and accessories.
It should also be possible to increase monster body and penis size, leading to belly and throat bulges during sex scenes.
== Meat ==
One interesting approach from
You must be registered to see the links
was that slaves could die and get turned into meat, and you could feed that to other slaves to mind break them faster iirc.Let me say it right away, but I'm not a fan of gore, and it was just something that happened behind the scenes in that game, but it was a nice touch that gave the "monster" element while playing and managing your goblin burrow.
It seems impossible to have slaves die as of the current version as they always reach max depravity and stop losing HP from sex, but if that changes in future versions, it might be nice to take the "turn useless dead slaves into meat" approach rather than the MBM version where you put them into a coffin and get to revive them whenever.
I'm not against having an option to revive slaves, likely with the goblin shaman or the elf nun, but the option to dispose of the corpses by turning them into meat would be fitting imo, even more if it's optional.
== Conclusion ==
I could talk about missing sound effects, but I have no idea if it's fine to take moaning effects from other games or from random amateur porn videos, so I wish the team luck in that front.
For now the ass slamming sound is pretty good, but I'm looking forward to other sexual service like blowjobs and titfucks as well.
Hopefully they get included in the future, so for now I'll keep watching from the sidelines and also check on the Discord from time to time.
Thanks for making this game.
Wish you all the best.
