VN - Ren'Py - Murmur [v0.7] [Devil's Dad]

Excellent Grading Can't Describe it with words Alone Im Highly Intrigued With its Quality of Precision Work Each character has different impression between each dialogs with excellent Word choice As if the Game was made using a Dictionary With Bits of lack of animation it's not perfect nor is it Bad It's in between Both With great Angles
Recommended aswell to not add sound in Sex animation Until you've finally made a perfect sound

You could Either Ask Najar a Great Sex/Hentai Animator and Sound Designer Recommended to check his patreon or some of his pirated works on other Websites all I can say is that They're all top notch With high quality of sound might fit with your game actually
And all of his works had lifelike on them Mostly beautiful

Back to the topic
The Game Had No Problems At all Except the starting Scene with the Onii Chan part Kind of little bit well nonetheless doesn't matter Every aspect of the game are High Quality especially the character model Design which you won't find in other games specially Nutaku most of their Games disappointed Me and even their character design kind of bitsy to it

While this game had an unique character design That is Humongously has a superior a dominant Looks specially Helen and Kate every time I see them they just made me act in a way I've never really expected to be they're just way too much
And of course the same goes for other character

Game Design as well of course It has a beautiful setting for an environment and housing style like a retro one and perfect character placement between the designated Area perfectly thought of and amazing Ui
The developers had a Greatest Masterwork with their excellent mind perfectly planned

The Bad thing is That there's only a small quantity of people That had discovered this work It needs a recognition and proper connection I'm afraid of such great Art undiscovered
Might have a chance of being discovered in the far future and might receive it's Deserved recognition it might be too late by then
Nonetheless this work is going to stay in the internet for eternity


I am Praying for more options to come between the interaction
Excellent

Beautiful game, great characters, animated scenes are perfect, almost real. To see them all, I had to do some saves, so I followed one route, came back, and followed another. Sometimes the best scenes were on a different route than the one I chose. But overall, I'm really enjoying the game.

As of v0.6
Definitely one among top ten games in my list . Renders are great and girls look awesome . Female characters are well written and each have a personality of their own . And a main character who genuinely cares for all the girls which is rare to see these days . H scenes are well done . Music is nice added touch . Only drawback is the updates take too much time but it's okay as long as quality of content remains the same . Definite 5 stars for me . Highly recommended if you love a good wholesome romance story .

This game is so boring, like you wouldn't believe. The pacing is so damn slow and the characters, they look like adults but they act like legit toddlers.
The game tells you you're just some 28 year old dude. Well that might be true. But apparently the game forgets about telling you about your real profession.
You play a fucking Kindergarten Care-Taker for heavily autistic women.
While taking advantage of them. Like the amount of sudden emotional outbreaks and then you HAVE to hug them and that one bitch being "the precious little wallflower" that you have to slooooooooooowly ease into and I mean, SHEESH you need to be slow my friend.
The amount of pouting and emotional moments out of the fucking blue.
Its like the whole game is just you trying to get your dick wet and all you get is "erm... I dunno teehee I'm shy, teehee I'm not sure I trust you enough yet, teehee."
This is basically the whole game, its like the dev sat down one evening and thought to himself: "How do I make the female characters in my game as annoying as possible, as asexual as possible and give them a completely inadequate mindset for their age?"
These girls act to regular male behavior like 12 year old girls that just got into puberty and they constantly have their period.
Who enjoys reading that?! Can't be a man for sure.

Played this game once and i thought I had it reviewed.
Good things about the game:

5GB sould guarantee content.
It has animations
Girls are cute
There are some attempts at making something different.
The Yui part is the best part of the game.

Bad thingsa bout this game:
For 5GB I cant tell its really a big game.
Engine is dated.
Lewd scenes are mostly default animations.
Pursuing girls is mandatory or else Game over.
Girls are every games stereotypes. Wouldnt call it unidimensional, but not a lot of depth either.
The mc is an unlikeable idiot most of the time.
Everything that tries to be japanese, but it isn't (oniichan? really?) moves my hand to my forehead with sudden force.
Default HS looped animations, im tired of them, they suck.


The creator of this game sure have some ideas, I just hope he has the time or the will to represent them fully, insitead of going straight to default animations. The Yui part is proof, even when at the end it goes to the animation. Without that part I would have rated it 1.

This is one of the best erotic games i've played, just wow, the quality of this game is in another level if you compare to other games in here or honey select games. Looking forward to the new updates. (Helen the best)

Murmur is a game that I have been in love with for some time now, and I feel a review is long overdue on my part, so here we are. The first thing that will jump out at you when playing the game are the renders. The renders are high resolution and show serious dedication and love on the part of Devil’s Dad that will become a theme for Murmur as I go on. Some examples of this perfectionism in the renders is just how many renders there are per line compared to other VNs of this type. In a simple backstory dump of a character in a one-on-one conversation with a girl, this game has a new or at least different render almost every line. Other VNs would probably have one or two in the time this game has five. That is a LOT more renders after a couple hours of gameplay. The models, are very well made in addition to the renders, making a nice one-two punch. As someone who has a lot of experience in Illusion game character makers, I can tell these took a lot of time and effort.

The next thing you will notice is the high quality of writing and storytelling. Yes, there are somewhat ham-fisted exposition dumps and weird character decision making, but you are never taken out of the story, and it feels coherent and flowy, which is the most important thing about writing. The UI is well crafted and intuitive, though somewhat standard for Ren’Py games. The girl love/lust tracker is a very nice quality of life addition that I feel should be a thing in all linear VNs like this that simply isn’t. The audio is also well done, or about as well done as you can find in Ren’Py games.

On to arguably the most important part: the sexy stuff. Each scene has multiple angles and a very clear “next” button to stop players from accidentally moving on to the next scene, as well as nice dialogue. Each sex scene has a good number of positions and camera angles. 10/10 on the sex scenes!

Finally, the last thing I need to address is the slow update cycle. Yes, the updates take a while, but what people have to remember is, at the time of writing this, Devil’s Dad is making this game as a part time job, not a full time job due to the lower amounts of supporters he has. If you want the updates to be faster, support him!

TLDR: is good game, nice renders, nice writing, and very sexy.

As it may have been one of the most master piece creation out there nonetheless it's #1Rank on my list
Hi Just another one of those Wandering Crusader that stumbled upon this masterpiece


I had finished the 0.5v of the game and Holy Jesus I've never ever been in my life had I craved something so hard before This.. This is a masterpiece Beyond comprehension And Jesus my most favorite character in this game is Helen and Kate Mostly

I had aswell checked the patreon page And Sought through the Development Stat And Seeing it Literally shakes Me from excitement I can't wait for more Action Between Helen and Kate

Spoilers free:

It has a lot of great aspects, first one I LOVE the facial expressions in the game, from the exagerated ones that Sophie makes, to the ones that every girl does when they are ashamed/turned on.

Second positive point, the story of the game it's a good mix between wholesome sometimes and lewd when it has to be. Not the most touching game nor the most brilliant plot or writing, however all of them are solid good, which not every game of this genre accomplish, as some of them lack of being good/better than average in one of those aspects, yet this one doesn't do so.

Third point, the game mixes various kinks, it's a nice detail when there are different characters, not having all of them except a few with identical scenes starring your average ahegao faces+I'm cumming omg omg omg.

Four point, lewd scenes are good and with good camera angles.

I don't think this game is a solid 5 stars game for this reasons: While Helen and the Shinigami are pretty originals in their personalities, the other ones are not that special, nothing wrong but they are not the most original characters. Renders should improve, they are average good, could be better.
Sometimes you get bored from the long ass internal monologues that the mc has, a lot of games fail in this aspect, one thing is to think, the other one is having to read every thought of the character.

But that being said I rarely think a harem game is even worth of 4.5 stars and this one does it and has originality, I strongly recommend it if you are thinking about playing it. And I think by the time it's done it will be even better.

Murmur is one of my more favored Harem games. It's also on the slower burn of adult VNs. There are lewd scenes, but not many compared to the writing.

It's a somewhat silly but wholesome harem games where some of the girls are facing real personal issues. The shift in tone isn't crazy and gradually makes it way in and out of various emotions.

The writing keeps up with what it's trying to do, and as such, is definitely pleasant to read. The characters are great and definitely make the game engaging.

The presentation is distinctive and well polished. Devil's Dad definitely made MurMur it's own thing. Devil's Doll is a little cutie too.

The animations are top notch, and the different camera angle choices is a nice touch.

I'm curious as to how the love/corruption system actually plays out overtime.

Though, I honestly just want to seem all the girls happy.

Best of luck to Devil's Dad!

Very entertaining so far. Corruption and incest subjects nicely done and the animations/scenes are worth it. Story wise I would give it a 4/5 as some aspects are very expected so far, at least the way it develops, excluding the main plot of how and why the MC is in that situation.

Hope this gets updated soon seeing that it hasn't been in a while. 5/5 for sure

Ah man, here we go with another good wholesome harem game.

Mur Mur has been quite a pleasant experience so far, and I love all the girls in it. Each fit their own categories, so you'll probably like at least one of them.

The writing as been engaging so far. It seems .5 is right before the the beginning of something very exciting.

Devil's Doll is quite cute too.

Well written story that keeps you interested. It's a bit of a slow burn but that makes it all the better in my opinion.

Just wish there was more content, not because there is a lack of it but because I want more.

Phenomenal story driven game that has an interesting plot with fun characters. Art wise, the animation is good and the designs of the cast are all unique and fun. Great experience so far and cannot wait to play more

This game is... strange. From the opening menu graphics and heartfelt music in the scenes, you would think this is a lighthearted, sincere, feel-good story.

However, story is terrible. First of all, the MC is such a creepy and perverted loser that it makes it hard to immerse yourself from his POV. It's conflicting to read some of the inner monologues where the MC seems to have a sense of morality, yet continues to act in a creepy and perverted way.

Then as you meet the other girls in the story, they all seem to act strangely with weird behavior/social problems... Despite this, the girls are sincere and likeable and all have unique personalities.

Lewd scenes happen with little to no buildup, making them feel cheap. MC meets school teacher on the first day, and somehow is giving her a topless massage by day 2? Come on.

This is because of one of the major issues with the story: that the girls start off already liking the MC, despite him having no redeeming qualities. The writing seems to want you to empathize with and pity the MC, but gives no reason to do so. Of course, he also has superpowers to manipulate the girls. Really wasted potential here for character development of the MC. It's like starting a video game with maxed stats and the best gear. This story could have been better if the MC used his new chance in life to redeem himself, which then leads him to win over the girls he meets.

If you can get over the unlikeable MC and not take the story seriously, you might really enjoy the game. The renders are beautifully executed. As others have said in previous reviews, subtle changes in character positions, eye contact, and expressions that correspond with dialogue changes are very well-done. I think the visual production is the strongest point of this game.

I really wanted to like this game, but unfortunately it's just not for me.

The sex scenes are slow but it makes up for it with the story. I was more invested in the story than to quickly get to the next scene. I'm looking forward to the next update.

P.S - please add a gallery, then we can find out if there any scenes we missed.

Thank's for the game, it's really nicely writen.
Sex is a little slow compared to other game, but is realistic.
A gallery would be a nice addition, fan gallery mod only updated for version 0.4.
Can't wait for next update, thank you for your hard work !

As of version 0.5, I can't really find anything bad to say about this VN. Girls are cute, models and general environment is pleasant to look at. Characters aren't nailed to an invisible wall, camera is moving around. They don't stare at you like souless dolls with one facial expression, but showing wide range of emotions, sometimes in one dialog. Characters have engaging personalities and conflict, story is serious enough, but with a right amount of silliness to make it entertaining. MC can make his goal to bild a harem, so if you came for this tag, you won't be disappointed. This is a high quality project and I'm going to follow it with great interest.

the models and animations in this game are AMAZING, it sets the bar way higher than most VNs on this site.

lots of choices, seems like there will be many different scenes and endings depending on how you play, which is great.

oh and shinigami is perfection.. sophie as well.. and the others.. so good..

Version 0.5b Patch applied with walkthrough mod

Drop dead gorgeous models, superb renders, excellent animation: this is a top tier visual package. The developer has paired it with a soundtrack that doesn’t suck, and actually adds to the experience (it got me to wear my headphones and listen which doesn’t often happen). Standard Renpy UI works well with extra save pages and rollback. There are multiple decision points for choosing between love and “corruption” points so the extra save slots will come in handy. No bugs on my playthrough.

Our protagonist is not a douche. He does a noble act and is allowed to escape fate by a Shinigami (Ami), who offers a deal to him: romance a group of girls and their teacher and create a harem or die. As the plot unfolds we discover that Ami is also romanceable as is a later addition to the roster. In order to accomplish his task our MC needs to resolve underlying problems for each of the LI’s and discover their particular kinks.

This is a no grind game. The MC interacts with the LI’s through conversation, dating and sexual activity. It's a slow burn VN, as of version 0.5b most of the action has been oral or manual (although Ami has had penetrative sex with the MC). Pay attention during dialogue, not only does the developer reveal the girls’ characters, the renders for each conversation are marvelous at showing the girls’ changing emotional state.

The developer is doing the harem route before any individual routes so if you really insist on monogamy, you’re going to have to wait a while or stroke out with a bad end. As a polyamorous pagan this suits me just fine, but a mandatory harem may not be for everyone. In the same light, the story looks to be created with the expectation that the incest patch is canon. If the idea of fictional incest with two hot redheads rustles your jimmies, you may want to consider that the real mc is simply occupying the body of the son/brother so there is a question as to whether it really is incest or not. If it still offends you, look somewhere else.

Just a final word on the love and “corruption” points in the game. Love points are just as you might expect, but “corruption” seems a little too extreme for what these points actually appear to do. I’d consider them to be more “lewdness” or sexual “openness” points as that seems to be their function. But as a pagan (all acts of love and pleasure are Her rituals), I actually have difficulty with the concept of corruption, so my judgement may be flawed. You do need both points to be successful in the game so in my playthrough I’m trying to keep a two to one ration of love/corruption to see how that works out.

Summary: Great game, particularly for those who appreciate a real harem story (with some incestual spice).