VN Ren'Py My A-rank Witch [v0.6] [Skinny Rat Studio]

[Captain Oblivious]

Good game so far, definitely one of the best AI NTR games I've tried on F95 so far, besides Welcome to Port Haven. Story and pacing great so far, I hope the corruption of Mia remains slow and gradual.

 

[Ass Fan]

We are certainly seeing it slowly corrupt itself.

 

[Harted]

New update is out on patreon.

 

[Ass Fan]

It looks like we're going to see some delicious things in the labyrinth with succubi, this will certainly be the best update

 

[Dimitry710]

A little disappointed with the latest 0.4 update. The NTS and NTR paths, and deciding which option to take is excellent, don't confuse me.
The problem is that the NTR path is so forced that it borders on the ridiculous. It's like, "I wake up at night and suck a carrot off a lizard because I can do that?"
It feels rushed due to explicit content.
Maybe the Patreons rushed it.
I expect that in 40-page manga stories, since there isn't time. Not in a visual novel that can be over 10 hours long to develop something more believable.
Extremely disappointed.
The posion theme is too convenient; it's a wasted resource in Japanese NTR manga, overused.
The posion should be an extra, not turn the heroine into a slutty bitch overnight.
It's too forced.
And being a Patreon doesn't help.
I hope he finally says it was all a dream, so he can develop at least something more convincing.
English isn't my native language, so I'm sorry if it's not entirely clear.

 

[Rat dev]

A little disappointed with the latest 0.4 update. The NTS and NTR paths, and deciding which option to take is excellent, don't confuse me.
The problem is that the NTR path is so forced that it borders on the ridiculous. It's like, "I wake up at night and suck a carrot off a lizard because I can do that?"
It feels rushed due to explicit content.
Maybe the Patreons rushed it.
I expect that in 40-page manga stories, since there isn't time. Not in a visual novel that can be over 10 hours long to develop something more believable.
Extremely disappointed.
The posion theme is too convenient; it's a wasted resource in Japanese NTR manga, overused.
The posion should be an extra, not turn the heroine into a slutty bitch overnight.
It's too forced.
And being a Patreon doesn't help.
I hope he finally says it was all a dream, so he can develop at least something more convincing.
English isn't my native language, so I'm sorry if it's not entirely clear.

I will try to explain her motives to you, as the person who wrote them. (Make a note that this is only the beginning of the story, the plot is just starting to unfold. The main storyline of NTR will take place both inside the dungeon and beyond its walls.)

Spoiler: Plot spoiler 0.4

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[Dunking_Donuts]

A little disappointed with the latest 0.4 update. The NTS and NTR paths, and deciding which option to take is excellent, don't confuse me.
The problem is that the NTR path is so forced that it borders on the ridiculous. It's like, "I wake up at night and suck a carrot off a lizard because I can do that?"
It feels rushed due to explicit content.
Maybe the Patreons rushed it.
I expect that in 40-page manga stories, since there isn't time. Not in a visual novel that can be over 10 hours long to develop something more believable.
Extremely disappointed.
The posion theme is too convenient; it's a wasted resource in Japanese NTR manga, overused.
The posion should be an extra, not turn the heroine into a slutty bitch overnight.
It's too forced.
And being a Patreon doesn't help.
I hope he finally says it was all a dream, so he can develop at least something more convincing.
English isn't my native language, so I'm sorry if it's not entirely clear.

Well, I don’t expect anything worthwhile or top content from this game, the game is average for me and a fantasy game, made inside a fantasy, and there may be many paths there, what is a dream and what is not a dream, but also not reality, maybe the author himself molds and invents and imposes these paths and choices that we don’t like, but who cares.Well, if the author had also made the MC a small penis, but the girl loves big and black penises, it would have been clear that she went to the left to suck them, but at the beginning of the story she is already being passed around, and is already cheating on her boyfriend, at least there would have been a complete cuckold who doesn’t even know that his girlfriend is cheating, or a cuckold who looks at it and gets high from it, it would have been clear, but yours is not clear.

 

[Dimitry710]

Well, I don’t expect anything worthwhile or top content from this game, the game is average for me and a fantasy game, made inside a fantasy, and there may be many paths there, what is a dream and what is not a dream, but also not reality, maybe the author himself molds and invents and imposes these paths and choices that we don’t like, but who cares.

The author said it's a quality NTR, so I can't expect a masterpiece either.
But the story goes from being interesting to a 50-page NTR compilation on "hitomi.la."
The ones where the heroine goes from being a being of light to a bitch in less than 35 pages:
Ayaka ~Stolen Childhood Friend~
Want something with a longer medieval setting?
Boku Wa Tada Futari O Miteiru Dake ~Orc Toubatsu No Shiren~
More medieval:
Netorare Boukensha ~Nora-san wa Aitsu no Seiyoku ni Kizukanai~
As a fan of NTR, NTS, SWINING, Rape, Old Man, etc., etc.
My English is not my native language, so I'm sorry if what I've said isn't understood.

 

[Trickstar]

Personally I'm just waiting for the NTS path, I would rather that we as the mc corrupt her and get her to submit to enemies rather than relying on the dungeon or enemies.

 

[Rat dev]

I'm leaving, it's a shame.
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I hope you have a good time playing other games. Good luck.

 

[Dunking_Donuts]

I'm leaving, it's a shame.
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He's leaving, close the door, I have someone else now, ahaha.

 

[Poundar]

I enjoyed the update and how the NTR and NTS routes were split.

I think one way to address the escalation issues would be to include a small scene where MC is trying to help relieve Mia with foreplay prior to when she finds

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To the author's credit, there is a line from Mia about how MC helps her to relieve the tension, but that isn't shown on-screen. So we don't actually *see* her building frustration as a point of comparison to how easily the other party members find relief. I just think it would help smooth the transition if it's shown in a scene rather than as one line in a monologue.

 

[Rat dev]

I enjoyed the update and how the NTR and NTS routes were split.

I think one way to address the escalation issues would be to include a small scene where MC is trying to help relieve Mia with foreplay prior to when she finds

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To the author's credit, there is a line from Mia about how MC helps her to relieve the tension, but that isn't shown on-screen. So we don't actually *see* her building frustration as a point of comparison to how easily the other party members find relief. I just think it would help smooth the transition if it's shown in a scene rather than as one line in a monologue.

Yes, I understand what you're talking about, and in fact, such a scene is being prepared for the next update. But it will be reinforced by new motives that will be revealed in update 0.5. (I mentioned above that this is only the very beginning of the NTR branch, so I think it's silly to make any overly categorical conclusions.)

Spoiler: Spoiler 0.5

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[FnBAurora]

I'm leaving, it's a shame.
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You already stated your displeasure and received a kind explanation from dev, don't turn this into a show.

Edit: I have also played the update and enjoyed it, i would rather have frequent updates and choices like this one instead of waiting months for "Editorial" level writings.

 

[Anaskm07]

I'm leaving, it's a shame.
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Bye you are not only patron
and i want to say it was ok update. this game's early stage yet. what you guys expect idk fast fuck without story? also maybe update looking short but its only 1 monthly update

 

[Dimitry710]

Bye you are not only patron
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Oh my god, it's 10 dollars, can you buy California? Hahahahahaha I said I didn't like it, but I never said a single bad word to the author. I'm a certified programmer, not a jerk who disrespects others. Relax kid, there are thousands of games waiting for me. Bye.

 

[Trickstar]

Oh my god, it's 10 dollars, can you buy California? Hahahahahaha I said I didn't like it, but I never said a single bad word to the author. I'm a certified programmer, not a jerk who disrespects others. Relax kid, there are thousands of games waiting for me. Bye.

Didn't you do the exact same thing to show that you were a patron except the fact that were leaving? Kinda hypocritical lol.

 

[Anaskm07]

Oh my god, it's 10 dollars, can you buy California? Hahahahahaha I said I didn't like it, but I never said a single bad word to the author. I'm a certified programmer, not a jerk who disrespects others. Relax kid, there are thousands of games waiting for me. Bye.

You can go away mate 10 dollar can't hurt me i'm just supporting dev

 

[Ass Fan]

I want to corrupt her in the NTS route. I don't think it's fair to criticize a route at the moment since the game is very early and there's still a lot to burn.

 

[Bugs Bunny :paranoid]

It's the NTR route, there's no way to complain. I was waiting a long time to see Mia with that dick, now I just have to wait for more. good job Rat dev and good luck in the next versions