My Art - Please take a look

[J0r3ung4rd]

This is the one that im working on right now. I started a x account that i post near daily at least right now its daily. I draw both digital and tradational. This is one of my OCs her name is Diana (Di) Cross age 44. I dont know if its allowed or not but ill put my x link down bellow and talk about the limits of my drawings and characters. BTW if you have advice or any kind of thing to say please do so im very open to every kind of comment

 

[J0r3ung4rd]

X account is FreakyRacc03. There are other posts there if you want to look at. (name only would be more proper ı guess)

 

[J0r3ung4rd]

My extent of fetishes are (things that ı'll draw)
-Incest
-Age gap
-Femboy
-Cheating
-Furry (humanoid- catgirl , catboy like stuff)
-Forced
and maybe other things i really feel like id draw everything right know so yeah

 

[J0r3ung4rd]

Diana (Di) Cross
Age:44
Job: Housewife - Ex-basketball player
Height: 185cm (6"1 near)
Weight: 78~

Mother of 1 (Fenrir's mom which is my other OC)

In a phase of arguments with her husband - Lack of attention (both) , making her leave her job , difference of life style

Tomboyish , Hotblooded , a bit foul-mouthed , sexually depraved(what a suprise) , competitive with her son while they do something physical (bed and sport)

 

[J0r3ung4rd]

This one is (at least that i hope) will be a 2-3 paged thing

 

[J0r3ung4rd]

and there is this one that ive done yesterday its still not finished tho

 

[WispDev]

You might get more traction in the Artwork forum instead of General Discussion. Seeing some finished pieces might also be good instead of sketches, as untalented people such as myself have no idea what to make of art that isn't at least "feature complete". Like with faces and expressions and whatnot.

 

[J0r3ung4rd]

You might get more traction in the Artwork forum instead of General Discussion. Seeing some finished pieces might also be good instead of sketches, as untalented people such as myself have no idea what to make of art that isn't at least "feature complete". Like with faces and expressions and whatnot.

didnt know or see this existed thank you

 

[J0r3ung4rd]

 

[J0r3ung4rd]

Started this will finish tomorrow text reversed kinda messy. Both are male btw one on the right is fenrir and the other is Kai which is my other OC who is a femboy and close friend of Fenrir

 

[J0r3ung4rd]

I draw lot of sketch on paper too as study i have to study a lot more but ı have my final exams coming up

 

[setite]

My feedback? Too much symmetry. It's uncanny. Also, "hard lines" (aka bold black lines for ab muscles) are not how shapes "work" and are distracting. You seem to know this, I think, so it must be a stylistic choice that you're making.
I'm not an artist. I haven't studied anatomy, but my idea of "musculature" is that its definition is best done through a gradient shadow rather than a hard, uniform line. Also, the color of your "hard-lines" can be problematic. There is a school of thought that says "don't make your hard lines black" because pure black rarely exists in nature, it's better to use a very dark blue or purple, the exact color depending on the actual location (inside or outside, light sources in the room).

 

[BradleyCo]

Looks like you're having fun, keep going!

 

[J0r3ung4rd]

My feedback? Too much symmetry. It's uncanny. Also, "hard lines" (aka bold black lines for ab muscles) are not how shapes "work" and are distracting. You seem to know this, I think, so it must be a stylistic choice that you're making.
I'm not an artist. I haven't studied anatomy, but my idea of "musculature" is that its definition is best done through a gradient shadow rather than a hard, uniform line. Also, the color of your "hard-lines" can be problematic. There is a school of thought that says "don't make your hard lines black" because pure black rarely exists in nature, it's better to use a very dark blue or purple, the exact color depending on the actual location (inside or outside, light sources in the room).

Yea i really do use symmetry tool too much sometimes i actually have (for the last one) a non symmetrical pose version i might do that one first. Actually i was going to make it look like abs with shadows after i outlined it but now that you say it i forget i guess. Your last saying is reallying interesting i know you can/should color your lineart but didnt know dark blue or purple ill look into it. Im really glad you replied its really hard to find feedback or talk to this kind of stuff with someone<3

 

[TomoeTheMimicCosplayer]

Too symmetrical. The abdominal muscles are connected to the body with bold lines as if they were glued on, the shape of the abdominal muscles is anatomically incorrect, the connection between the thighs and pelvis is wrong. I used to be like that and then realized that trying to recreate a piece I liked and learning from it is the best way. A solid anatomical foundation is essential; if you don't remember it, you must have reference materials nearby when drawing. This is my current work:

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Even though it's 3D, I also learned 2D drawing, and they both have the same learning curve. Anatomical knowledge is mandatory.

 

[Lerd0]

...i be looking.....

 

[J0r3ung4rd]

Too symmetrical. The abdominal muscles are connected to the body with bold lines as if they were glued on, the shape of the abdominal muscles is anatomically incorrect, the connection between the thighs and pelvis is wrong. I used to be like that and then realized that trying to recreate a piece I liked and learning from it is the best way. A solid anatomical foundation is essential; if you don't remember it, you must have reference materials nearby when drawing. This is my current work:

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Even though it's 3D, I also learned 2D drawing, and they both have the same learning curve. Anatomical knowledge is mandatory.

Thank you for your advice and reply it was helpfull , btw im broke as shit so i pay for your art right now but saw from google images looks really great<3 I feel like i should study more but i dont know if i should stop posting or not

 

[TomoeTheMimicCosplayer]

Thank you for your advice and reply it was helpfull , btw im broke as shit so i pay for your art right now but saw from google images looks really great<3 I feel like i should study more but i dont know if i should stop posting or not

Don't worry dude, AI models are already killing me. I don't make money from them anymore. They are 3D prints. I just use them as a profile page. Keep making your art and posting it, as long as it helps you grow afterward. However, I would never advise you to do them and expect them to help you pay some bills. Just for fun.

 

[Susninjaarc]

Is that character specifically a muscle mommy? cuz other wise there is too much muscle, we like our women with a little belly

 

[J0r3ung4rd]

Is that character specifically a muscle mommy? cuz other wise there is too much muscle, we like our women with a little belly

Yes actually she is. I like muscular , chubby , skinny , slight chubby or any other women too its just this is the one that i wanted to focus on right now