VN - Others - Completed - My beloved "Little Princess" girlfriend was already trained. Another man taught her lewd practices [Final] [Atelier Sakura]

Overall vote: 6+

Ok so I'll start by talking about the TL and afterwards about the game itself.

So the TL at first sight i thought it was an improvement compared to the Buka Ore game, but then i realized what the spell was. So jaden was trying to use simple words as much as possible in his editing which comes with some good result, you comprehend single lines of texts easily but also with some bad, like when the situation is complicated you can't use elementary school vocabolary to explain it AND you sometimes get lost in context when multiple lines of text are connected (aka the single text is translated ok but makes no sense in the whole general context).
Was there proofreading/QC done here?
But anyway between the Buka Ore TL and this TL, this one wins overall and if I gotta choose between the two styles I'll take this one.

As far as the game goes there's no really that much to talk about:

The Plus
• loli heroine and AS doesn't have that many of them so it's a thumbs up for me
• aside from being loli she's cute
• CGs are overall nice

The Neutral
• sex scenes some are hit and some are a miss

The Minus
• what I initially thought was the prologue turned out to be the meat and potato of the game, and female POV turns out to all happen here, when the choices starts showing you're already at the ending section. This was a nasty curveball I gotta say ...
• not as short as Miina but really short game nevertheless
• bad endings feels more like good ending and viceversa
• the story itself is bad in its core, the good ending doesn't really have a conclusion, you wonder what was the point of it all, would've been nice to see the start of both relationships but nope the true path of the game just basically tells one stoppage point of a toxic-incestual triangle relationship:
aka when the bf finds out and he accepted to be a cuck until he completes high school, finds a job and starts working to hopefully get her girl for himself

My beloved "Little Princess" girlfriend was already trained. Another man taught her lewd practices, English (Edited AI MTL)

It's a NTR Story, if you dislike this trope don't even waste your time downloading it. I didn't see pictures so I thought it was some sort of broken heroine learning how to love type of story, but it is not, just plain and old NTR.

The translation was ok to good, the story is forgettable but as it is not the main selling point it is passable. What meters are the h-scenes that are fine, the art is alright and the scenes are static. I took little enjoyment from the package as a whole but that's more because I'm not a fan of the genre than the VN being bad itself, that said I could see someone who enjoy it taking a liking to the game.

What's interesting and also a heads-up if you're thinking of downloading it is that after you complete one of the three endings (I don't know if a specific one needs to be complete) you'll unlock the heroine's side of view before the three choices that define you ending, which makes the game surprisingly more competent than I thought it would be.

Just one last heads up that might be a turn off for some people: The game has no happy endings because the heroine is far too corrupted, so if you're in it for the savior complex, there's nothing here for you.]

The Good:

• The translation is good enough.
• I like the main heroine design
• it's a short game and mostly to the point

The Bad:

• Not much development happening here, the heroine is already set to her ending
• Not bad per say but the art is just fine

The Ugly:

• You can't fix her

If you like NTR (You freak!) you'll enjoy this game, for my fellow happy ending enjoyers you might want to keep some distance from the game.