not a bad game at all - could be a 5 star game.
So why did i just 3 stars?
Well, since the renders are decent and the story basicially is nice, i complain about the horrible style of writing.
The developer really overdoes the adressing so that i anger more about the text rather than being able to enjoy the story itself.
In nearly every single short sentence the person speaking mentiones the other by direct adressing.
Example:
- i want to be at your side tonight, brother (or whatever you put in here)
- brother, i want you to kiss me
- oh brother, this feels so nice
- brother, i want you in me now
- yes, like that brother
- i am so happy brother
- brother it feels so good
- i think i am gonna cum now brother
- yes, brother, keep going
- oh brother - this was so nice
......
and so on, and so on - there is barely any sentence where they do NOT direct adresing - this is a complete turn-off (at least for me)
So why did i just 3 stars?
Well, since the renders are decent and the story basicially is nice, i complain about the horrible style of writing.
The developer really overdoes the adressing so that i anger more about the text rather than being able to enjoy the story itself.
In nearly every single short sentence the person speaking mentiones the other by direct adressing.
Example:
- i want to be at your side tonight, brother (or whatever you put in here)
- brother, i want you to kiss me
- oh brother, this feels so nice
- brother, i want you in me now
- yes, like that brother
- i am so happy brother
- brother it feels so good
- i think i am gonna cum now brother
- yes, brother, keep going
- oh brother - this was so nice
......
and so on, and so on - there is barely any sentence where they do NOT direct adresing - this is a complete turn-off (at least for me)