VN - Ren'Py - My Best Deal [v3.5] [Pirot King]

Great update. Love the character designs, great exceptional renders, new updates are available at a reasonable pace, the story is kind of standard for this kind of game, nothing special but not too shabby either. Looking forward to future updates

A game's worst offense is to be boring and this is just that...boring! The intro to this game where you get your first choice is so mind-numbing and long winded, it throws what little interest you have in the trash. The intro plays like a 30-45min kinetic where you're locked into reading so much about people that you don't care about. It's boring. Also, the game forces into certain scenes with no control over it which is a big no. Don't give people the illusion of control in a game about choices.

Pros:
- excellent animations, best part. Honestly, unpack it and fap because the character dialogue will make you fall asleep

Cons:
- long winded
- boring
- forgettable characters

This game is a step down from his previous on-hold title and if he just used these good renders and animations from this game, and put it in Dirty Pool, DP would outshine this game by a mile.

Just crazy nonsense and not a game. A strange family in which everything is good but the son did not want to return. Where in the family of Europeans Asian sisters? they never look like their mother or brother...

Okay so I could only give this two stars and that's only for the renders and animation.
Sorry but considering this is supposed to be a choiced based game it REALLY isn't.
You as a player are forced into every situation without any choice at all your then have to deal with some annoying little d*ck called david who ends up stealing your sisters underwear to then go onto meet some police officer to tell him the deals off?? Ermm correct me if i'm wrong but why the hell would you want anything to do with a slimy little sh*t like this in the first place or go to any meeting you would punch his lights out and take the underwear and go home not follow some hair brained scheme and then want nothing to do with the little shit it just makes no sense at all and this is what makes the mc so weak and spineless? Then agree to help him steal some more to being forced into end up selling your sisters panties anyway wtf in what alternate universe would this happen and then not get choice in the matter is just utter garbage just to help out some little pervert that i'm sure the majority of players will hate and the mc well can't say much about him apart from he is just pathetic! The story is terrible and would NOT recommend this game to anyone as its so unreal it's almost laughable ALMOST. Sorry the way this game is going I can see it being abandoned in the near future due to how bad it actually has got as it started out great. sorry this is just my opinion and I hope the dev can turn this game around as it has potential but needs a major overhaul on giving the player more choices on the story progression and telling this david to f*ck off.

Still in development and very early on, but the game has a great plot and awesome models. Seems very similar to DoD right now, in a good way. Look forward to when this is more complete, but I'm satisfied and I would definitely recommend this to anyone else who likes the tags of this game.

Really well made, amazing writing and history, interesting plot, incredibly detailed and really good made visuals. I'm not that much into incest, so sometimes I find it kinda... odd let's say, I would appreciate a patch or extension on later versions where you can change the relations you have with the characters and stuff. Besides that, really good material. Has a lot of potential and I'm excited to see where it goes.

Didn't expect this after Dirty Pool.

Seems like the devs decided to create a real VN and it is astonishing how different My Best Deal is compared to Dirty Pool.

This is less than a game, more a VN and it is welcomed.

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Story:

So far so good. Still not pretty sure what this is all about, but really intriguing atm. Kinda unique and wicked but not completely bullcrap.
More mysterious vibes than "normal" life events. Western themed VN with a double touch of asia.
"Play" for yourself, you'll not regret it.

Visuals:

Holy moly, fuck my sideways. Most of the Models are also present in Dirty Pool but aren't overused. Background and most locations are just standard assets but who cares.
The Models and the scenes. My Best Deal almost feels like a movie. Models are well edited and the animations and renders. Absolutely high class.

Gameplay:

Mhhhh... None? This really is a VN with zero to no choices that matter. If you skipped one scene, you can unlock it in the gallery. So, there's just reading. No grind fest, just a good story.

Ambience:

Music and locations are well chosen, never gets boring. Scenes not overloaded and enjoyable. As the models are mostly animated, even in idle scenes, it is hard to concentrate on the text so you don't miss any renders.

Localization:

No gibberish, proper and good english. Can't rate the polish an russian loc.

Overall a pretty good experience. It's a VN and not Fortnite.

This game is amazing!

The story is interesting and unique, the renders are great, and the scenes are animated! Not just a few alternating frames to give the slight illusion of animation, actual animation!

Definitely worth the download!

Plot is REALLY interesting with the whole being reincarnated issekai plot and the gods stuff to those who want to know yes you have love related powers in this game most of the time the use of these powers are passive meaning you wont have to make choices or click a button to use them most of the time it happens without you being conscious of it as the mc . The renders/character models are AMAZING. the character models are the main reason why I even played the game. The game has a feature where the character models sometimes tilt their head or blink which is refreshing and surprising. In sum: a better than average game definitely worth your time. Im gonna give it a 5 star rating to help draw more attention and encourage the dev to keep up the good work

First thank you for using SubscribeStar! Finally a game I like that I can pledge to. Now to the game...

The artwork is all stunning, and the small animations during some of the normal dialog are very nice (although I have to admit it creeped me out at first because I wasn't expecting it). For the most part the body designs are very nice and realistic, and there's some good variation.

I thought the story was going to be a little dull at first, but as others have commented, the introduction of the second goddess makes things much more interesting. I like where this is going.

Hope to see more soon!

this game is pretty good so far for the 0.4 version renders are fantastic, animations are great and the story so far is interesting with a few grammatical errors but overall the game is great and more people should try it out

This game is piece of shit. It have boring plot, idiotic motivations, after 1.5 hour I seen only 1 choice, even art look wird for some reason. And what worse of all it doesn't have even drop of humor which I love in Dirty Pool. Just abandon it and return to Dirty Pool!

I don't really review VN , but gotto make an exception for this.
First of all the story wise , there is a great potential on the start here.

The goddess help you get gals plot seem cheesy and perfunctory at first but halfway the plot thickens and the appearance of another (B & D cosplay) goddess suggest things aren't as simple.

Graphics wise , the Goddess Selena is imo aesthetically stunning. I am kinda mesmerized into staring at her moving animation . The mind control goddess is beautiful too but B & D cosplay just not my personal preference.
Mom is literally hot MILF , not the late 20s type Mom. Frankly shes the reason i started the VN. Not a big fan of the twins , it seem to be a "weaker" version of the generic version use by many of the games asian model. Whats "weaker?" I don't know . Just a feel. There's other decent characters , but I don't really feel their impact

Gameplay well -1 star for visual novel . Most choices are don't affect much except different responses but the story proceed same nevertheless.
The only possible impact is there a part where you choose to affect Annie with either power gifted to you by both goddess. Not sure how that affect the game , maybe you gotto choose sides or maybe it doesn't affect anything at all.

Usually VN are quite boring , but this story evolved to be really good. I hope the developer actually follow thru with the story instead of making up a good story plot like LBH and end it abruptly without explaining anything.

Very intriguing story with great cgi and characters. The plot-line seems to center around the dichotomy of control vs love. With some interesting "gifts" being bestowed upon the protagonist. Excited to see how the story develops as the embodiment of the dichotomy potentially faces off with the protagonist in the middle.

Good Points
+ Most of our story feels well written (while some parts crying like ''I'm poorly written!'')
+ Render quality looks good.
+ Animations are well maked.

Bad Points
- Not all of them but espacily some of characters bodies looks little bit un-attaractive. For example: Goddesses dont quite look like Goddesses at all. They not looks mighty or perfect at all. They looks like common/plain women and their body is not looks like goddes at all. And worst part is... They have shaggy tits... Yeah... What a goddess..
- Updates takes to much time and brings pretty little content. For example latest content was v1.7 and we get 67 pictures for this update... 67... LOL
- Some parts of story feels pretty boring and annoying...
- While game gives you feeling ''you have choice of power'' its actualy not like that... Some of choices literaly there for mixing your had and doesn't matter whatevery you done its still ends with same result. Espacily Lin's dream scene is good example for this, there is a lot of choice there but non of them changes result... Yeah... Great...
- Lin's love to Rin is nothing more than annoying obsession... And worst part is like a told we are basicaly cant choice any other option then ''You should be together'' option in her dream... So basicaly whatever we choice its leads same annoying obsessed thing...
- Some girls/women bodies need changes since begining of game but DEV doing nothing about it... Best example is Molly, she have great eyes, face and ass etc but her tips looks shaggy and her nipples are ugly. Its so obvious she needs some change but DEV doing nothing about it...

For The End
I love almost everyting about this game; story, characters, render quality and animations etc... But bad points makes this game poor and sadly this game was better before newest versions...

Excellent quality of graphics. Wonderful erotic scenes. Good story (so far).

Very high attention to the details and top-notch quality overall. It's obvious that the author put a lot of effort to make it great and it's definitely worth it.

Probably the only negative thing that this game is very linear so far. So it's more like "kinetic novel". However it's not really negative thing in that case.

Really enjoyed this release so far, it has fantastic renders and the animation is very smooth, looks very promising. will definitely keep my eye on this one for next update. A very high quality release and already in several different languages.

My Rating of [v0.1] is:

Pros:
+ Great Renders
+ Good Opening
+ Long Game Play
+ Mystical Story

Cons:
- Nothing

Conclusion:

The Game has a Great Crime Opening Story.
Here is a Hot Mom,and lots of sex and story line.
Doesn't get boring for one minute.
The Sex scenes are great and you dont normally see so many in the first release.
A game of my liking.

My Advisory:
Worth the Download

Edited to update my review to the current version 2.2:
I upped the rating from 3 to 4 stars as the game has significantly improved on many levels.
While the story is still pretty much an excuse for the porn, it isn't bad, the girls still look fine and there are some really fine sex scenes.
I also like how the characters of the twins have developed. I ike that you actually have options how to react to the nasty teacher character and overall it feels as if the characterization has improved a lot.
The same goes for the writing in general. This still isn't Shakespeare, but it is way better than in the dev's first game or here at the start.

I wouldn't go for five stars, but the game definitely deserves 4 now, I find myself really keen on seeing how some aspects of the story develop.




Here's my thoughts.

Positive:
-The girls look good. Especially the library girl Annie and Ms. Collins.
-This had quite a lot of content for a first version.
-It's nowhere new story-wise, but it works out well so far.

Negative:
-The renders are not always showing what the story explains. Like in Rin's dream when her hand is inside her pants, but not in the picture, or in the closet, or when we met Annie (she supposedly looks away shyly, but we don't see that and yet later on, we have a render where she does exactly that, so why not use that in the library as well?).
-It's really true that there aren't enough choices, at least we should have been able to decide which dream to visit first (It really mattered in the way, that I found the story less engaging, because I had no actual influence on it).


Apart from that, a few more points.
I'd like me some of that Ms. Collins, she's fucking hot, but not really as her sub. Either consensual on equal terms or the MC being the domme.
Is the BFF actually the douche bag David from Dirty Pool, and he sent the MC a picture of his younger sister?
The gift from the codex is a good method to bring up incest sooner, but I like how the mother feels repulsed by her own actions.
That's what would normally happen in a situation like in the game, so it works.

Yeah, well.... the writing. It's obvious to me that Pirot King isn't a bad writer, so much is evident, even in the English game version, but there are still many avoidable errors.
It has been pointed out, that there will likely be people in the community who would proofread, so it's sad that so few devs seem to be willing to look for them.

The game is a solid effort, with the potential to become really good, but only if the dev keeps at it, provides regular updates with a size that offers enough content. More renders and a proofreader would also help.

Pros:

Great animations and renders

Likable and relatable characters

Characters look realistic (no over the top bimbos or a mother that looks like shes in her 20s)

A solid foundation for a good story, can't wait to see how it plays out.

Cons:

Minor grammatical mistakes which are easily fixable.

Overall
I'm amazed that this is just a first release and by the general quality of the game. Not something you see very often as most first releases tend to be rushed and riddled with errors and mistakes. Also, the renders and animations are amazing, to say the least. Story-wise you can still go in a lot of directions which is always nice. I hope to see a few branching storylines down the road, but for now, all I can say is lots of Kudos to you, my man.

I usually wait for a bunch of updates when playing a game but with this one, I will definitely check back after every new update with this one.