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- Jul 23, 2020
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Honestly all these negative comments are pathetic. its the dudes first release, sure the english and art could be better. but i don't see you guys doing anything better? - good luck on your release dev, keep going and improving. don't be discouraged by negative people.
- i do recommend getting someone who is a native English speaker to proofread your game before each release though.
- i do recommend getting someone who is a native English speaker to proofread your game before each release though.
- May 14, 2021
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really really thank you ! Thank you very much!
- Jan 3, 2021
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Still looks better than AI slop. It might look amateurish, but it is honest about it. That is respectable.
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Wanting to make hand drawn art is respectable. But might I suggest using 3d modeling software(koikatsu) to use as references for your art?
Alternatively, he could use something good looking as a reference to draw from.
- May 14, 2021
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- Dec 7, 2021
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I'll be honest with you, dear dev: It's not good. And it's not just the English; that would be the easiest thing to fix.
That being said I see a lot of potential to grow and wish you luck.
That being said I see a lot of potential to grow and wish you luck.
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At least say what exactly is not good. Like imagine a random person(me) looking at comments to see the critique, thinking if it's worth it to play or not. Pictures - that random person can see on his own, they're in the original post and he already doesn't mind them, so he starts looking at what other people say.
And then he sees "It's not good". What..? What isn't good...? Art, gameplay, writing, scene ideas? Clearly not all of it, since you also say you see potential. In addition, for the dev it would most likely be impossible to improve "notgoodness" into "goodness", so it'll only leave him guessing, instead of answering the problem. This will not lead to any progress, it's irresponsible, and YOU will lead the dev to stagnation. No, you basically lead the whole society to it, being a part of the whole machine of irresponsible critique. Just writing a comment like that you're damaging our civilization. You're sinning. Condemning your soul, and the souls of everyone around. Don't send us all burn in Hell - elaborate..
- Sep 14, 2023
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It's always the lucky old fuckka that gets a VIP pass in most NTR games 
The artstyle tho.. Nobody can convince me that this wasn't drawn by a 5 year old
The artstyle tho.. Nobody can convince me that this wasn't drawn by a 5 year old
- Jul 4, 2017
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There is no need to elaborate other people said it before in this same thread, the art is awful (literally looks like some drew it up in paint and was bad at it ) and the translation is bad. Personally i am not a fan on NTR so i will not give an opinion on the setting and the story but so far this seems just like a quick cash grab.
- May 14, 2021
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Really thanks to you, i likes the way you try to Help me, but i really needs everyone who don't like my game and start to complaint, It's make me know what they want and what they need, so i can improve it
BTW: Really thanks to UmbraNox, i appreciate it <3
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So, just asking, why the cheating tag? In the overview it says he is a wimp and can't confess... So, do they enter in a relationship as the story goes on or not? I am not really interest if they don't, so I just want to know to decide if I will download it or not.