VN - Ren'Py - Completed - My Dear Diary: Futa Desires [v5.0] [Sofia xxx]

I've played My Dear Diary: Futa Desires [v2.0] [Sofia xxx] , so here's a review of it.

I found this game to be quite on the average side. It has some good parts going for it, but the story and character development needs some work. There is also very limited player interaction, which also drags down the score. The game would've been a solid 2, if it was tagged as a Kinetic novel. But since it isn't I rate it as a game that believes it has choice, but in reality offers none. That detracts 1 point, leaving it at 1 stars.

If what you want from a game is essentially a porn video with mouse clicks and FUTA content, then this game is definitely for you.

No pregnancy content
The reason I found this game was because of the pregnancy tag I suppose. However if you come here for the pregnancy content, then you'd be sorely disappointed. This game features a lot of talking about pregnancy - well, mostly Noras (the MC), thoughts about impregnating Jin, but not actually any pregnancy content yet.

Kinetic novel - very little player interaction
Although the game is a VN, I would argue that it should have the additional tag of "Kinetic Novel". The reason behind it is, that the choices that is far made has very little to no impact on the story. This may of course change at some point in the future, but so far this is what it is - a novel that you look through, but don't really interact with.

Poor story writing and shallow characters.
I play porn games because they offer a story where I can become invested in the events or characters. To become invested in any such story, some "suspension of disbelief" is necessary. This is something that the player/audience and the developer/instructor create together. The developer must provide a scenario and characters that is at least somewhat believable and the audience must on the other hand buy in on some of it.

I found that the characters in this story are hard to "buy in on". Jin is borderline retarded in my opinion and her perception is close to that of a blind, deaf and lame person. There are multiple times that Jin should've noticed that something was up, for instance when they briefly wrestled or when Jin surprised Nora with morning sex. These close encounters would've been interesting ways of implementing player choice - how do you handle this , how do Nora avoid getting "uncovered" and how does she deal with these situations. Lastly, it would've been a great avenue to develop Jin and Noras relationship.

Nora seems hell-bend on impregnating Jin, which really is the only character depth she has. While you do get some options of avoiding pregnancy, I would much rather have liked decisions where Nora could interact with friends who would give her advice - and where Nora could reflect why she wants this so badly, and why she can't be open about it.

I'm aware that not every porn game needs to be a deep story with emotional characters and whatnot. On the other hand, I personally find very little point in playing games that is a porn-film but with mouse clicking.

So, for those of you just want the summary:
The Good

• The models are a bit lifeless, but otherwise pretty.
• The sexual content is fine, and you quickly get to it.
• Lots of FUTA stuff, and secrecy about it if you like that.

The In-between

• Once you've seen a couple of sex scenes it becomes a bit repetitive.
• Skip is disallowed unless you've already seen the scene.
• The text not great but not completely horrible either.

The Bad

• It is a missed opportunity that the relationship between Nora and Jin isn't developed more.
• It would have been great with player choices in those moments where Nora is almost discovered.
• In combination with the above; Jin seems too oblivious, and it would've been nice with some suspicion, player interaction and character relations development.
• Jin is oblivious to the point where leaking cum apparently isn't a thing because the MC "scoops it out", the smell and so on..
• Only talking about the pregnancy content - no real content yet.
• Very few player choices. Fewer still that has an impact.
• This is an untagged kinetic novel.

[v2.0]
Okay-ish game with good art, decent animations and some kind of plot.

There are several choices and they are pretty simple.

I don't know. A simple mid game you can play once/twice and delete.
Nothing more, nothing less.

So, I'm not sure what the other reviews are talking about, this is pretty terrible. FIrst of all, there is not much to the game. There are a few choices but they change nothing except a few lines of dialogue and only serve as sequel bait. That's not bad by itself. Just saying this is more of a kinetic novel than a visual novel in case you were wondering. That means all there is to judge is the writing and the 3D renders. So how's the writing?

Well, the game boots up and one of the first sentences in the opening internal monologue is the protagonist dropping a trans slur. You might think that because I mention it that immideately biased me towards the game. No, not really. I most definitely wouldn't choose to open like that but hey I know this is essentially a game about rape by deception so I can just rationalise it in my head that the protagonist is an awful person and continue on. The absolutely soulless dead eyes of the 3D model helped in that regard.

Next up we get the set up which doesn't take a long time to its credit and we jump into the first sex scene. Now I was already noticing some poor quality English and a few just bewildering parts of the story, but I was willing to just treat this as fetish fuel and not expect high quality writing, just hot enough writing. Unfortunately the writing takes a fucking nosedive in the sex scenes. The English is bad, the lines that are supposed to be hot are bad, the "passion" between the characters is bad, the anatomy is bad. And no I don't mean a girl having a fully functioning dick in addition to a fully functioning vagina, I mean they spend a ton of time describing how deep or not Nora is inside Jin or when she's hitting her cervix (which comes with a wooden "THUD" sound effect by the way) and all of it sounds horribly clinical at best and actually uncomfortable and painful at worst. I'm not one of those people who need everything to be as real as possible. I've enjoyed some completely unrealistic anatomy like hyper or cum inflation, but it wasn't delivered to me like a poorly translated description of someone operating a piston. There were a few decent lines about the breeding kink but the poor English was killing even that. I was just getting bored. I was bored reading the damn sex scenes!

So what about the 3D models? Well, you see the screenshots. It's okay. Definitely not the worst I've seen by a mile, but far from the best either. It's passable. The poses are very basic and not worth talking about. Some missionary, some from behind action, the spiciest we get is a blindfold and a leg on shoulder position. There are a couple of very forgettable looping animations that feel wooden and basic. Really, there is just nothing here. And that's the best I can sum this up as: nothing worth your time.

A nice combo of dickgirl on female with impregnation fetish.

It's quite short, but still packed with sexy action. Story is fast paced, but not unbelieveable and easy to get into. Idea behind fake strap-on is interesting, sexy and neatly executed. Story develops mostly during sex scenes at this point, and it just clicks.

Renders are, for my tastes, really beautiful. I like facial expressions. Animations are nice, definitely not worst, also not the best - but definitely sufficient in quality and quantity.

Also this is (mostly) a kinetic novel, however I like the micro choices present, circling about MC wanting to impregnate Jin or not. While I definitely won't choose the latter in the long run, I like having the option to see how much the "routes" differ - and there is some spicy impregnation talk present, developing with each further scene.

Definitely 5/5 from me and reaaally hoping for next part.

Recommend to all lovers MC horny virgin futa. There are few such things, I think.
Pros:
Hot blond futa impregnates a hot infantile Asian bitch. Quick introduction. Fresh novel idea.
Minuses:
Kinetic novel. Clearly an easy plot.

A futa tricks her roommate into having raw sex, and fills her with several loads of semen. I'm not sure if the scenario could get any hotter.

The character designs are pretty good, and I didn't pay much attention to any other qualities. A nice little encounter, perfect for a quick fap.

Great game for the short experience and mostly focused on futa on female sex. The choices are not quite 'choices' in a way that affects gameplay but should be interpreted as a mindset as per the writing. That said, the writing for the scenes are great for the involved nature of them and it is easy to slide into the main character's... process.

Good game and solid building blocks for other games.

Well, based of what I see:

1. The idea and/or the concept I liked: the futanari stuff of how hard could be in reality born being one and the relationship what she have with her roommate and all behind of both girls (MC and the Nympho).
2. In this one, having in count (or not necessary) the other two games until this date, I consider the sex scenes in this game repetitive (yet being theses good). I mean, only are like two or three positions and thats all. Later depending of the options what you select only change the dialogue: so you're not gonna get other scene different, only variations in the dialogue.
3. Later renders, scenarios and animations are good enough based of the short duration of this game.

-1
Its ok, but take note this more of a prologue then a complete thing.
With their other works and everything unknown if will get more.
So suffice to say story and bits are Very simple and short.

-1
Also of course not believable both the "pregnant" choices (which are useless here and assume for next chapter) and the fact she can't notice or feel or anything the gallon of sperm, I mean the smell alone would be drastically noticeable let alone the feeling and stickiness and sheets etc...

0/-1
thought of giving it 2 star but since its decent enough looking and short figured it fine.

My review might be a bit biased because I like the kinks but this game is pretty good.
This is SHORT, has almost no "gameplay" and goes straight into sex, play it like you're watching a porno.

Renders: 5/5 ⭐
Nicely done, both characters look super good.

Animations: 3/5 ⭐
Decent, you can kind of "see" the loop because stuff all move at the same pace..

Story: NR/5 ⭐
Feels unfair to rate it for story when there isn't even one, but for what it's worth I think the fake strap-on idea is awesome.

Sounds: 4/5 ⭐
Nice calm music throughout the whole game, and scenes have a great looped audio sounds, realistic enough.

Great Game.. No beating around the bush .. straight to the point . I hope we have more of these short ones and rather than digging around with BS. This developer has put out good games ... I hope more developers go for shoth game like this

The game is a short "VN" without any real choices. So more like a video.
The asian girl is really hot and since only MC is a futa, it shouldn't be a problem for people who don't like futanari content.
The only downside are animations, they aren't very detailed, most of the time picture to picture movement through dialog.