Ren'Py My demo game and i need your help

[no im not]

Here is my demo game, it still have any sexual content , you will play as man who live with his sister at old apartment and very poor ,he very good at computer skill maybe hacking some thing. game will focus on love and lust point to decide your sister's action
-First I still haven't thought of a name for the game can you show me some i dea
-Second MY ENGLISH VERY BAD i need somebody write speech of character, you also can create your own story and event don't expect about cash because i have no patreon site. i create game to improve my english and my code XD



My game:

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[anne O'nymous]

Few things :

• define statement is independant, do not put them inside a label ;
• indentation matter and is very important. Yes it works like this, but it's just because you didn't encountered a breaking case ;
• False and True are value by themselves, do not put them between quotes ;
• The
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  statement come with a very handy elif friend, use if instead of multiples if testing different value for the same variable ;
• Stay coherent with your code. Sometimes you indent, sometimes you don't. Sometimes it's a 4 spaces indentation, sometimes 1 space. Sometimes you use elif sometimes you don't ;

 

[no im not]

Few things :

• define statement is independant, do not put them inside a label ;
• indentation matter and is very important. Yes it works like this, but it's just because you didn't encountered a breaking case ;
• False and True are value by themselves, do not put them between quotes ;
• The
  You must be registered to see the links
  statement come with a very handy elif friend, use if instead of multiples if testing different value for the same variable ;
• Stay coherent with your code. Sometimes you indent, sometimes you don't. Sometimes it's a 4 spaces indentation, sometimes 1 space. Sometimes you use elif sometimes you don't ;

i will remake it , thank you very useful btw can u tell me how to use "and if", "or if", "if not"

 

[Deleted member 167032]

Ask around here on F95 for someone that is pretty decent with English to help you for free. Im sure there are players here that will help.

 

[anne O'nymous]

i will remake it , thank you very useful btw can u tell me how to use "and if", "or if", "if not"

Er, I'm not sure to understand your question, so sorry if my answer fall out of the box.

#  Classical condition.
if numberItems == 1:
   "You have 1 item."
#  /elif/ mean that the condition will be tested ONLY if the 
# previous condition(s) are all False. Once again, it's a 
# simple equality.
elif numberItems == 2:
   "You have a couple of items."
#  Test if the value is one of the value inside the given list.
elif numberItems in [4, 6, 8]:
   "You have a few couples of items."
#  Test if the first condition (== 3) OR the second condition
# is True. Will be True the value of /numberItems/ is 3 or if
# the value of /numberItems/ is 5.
elif numberItems == 3 or numberItems == 5:
   "You have a few items."
#  Will be True is the value is less than 15. Note that all the
# previous conditions imply a value that is less than 15. BUT
# you'll come to this test ONLY if none of the previous
# conditions is True. So, only if the value is NOT 
# 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 8
elif numberItems < 15:
   "You have a many items."
#  Finally, if all the previous conditions failed, then it's this
# part that will be played.
else:
   "You have way too many items."