VN - Ren'Py - My Dorm [v0.21.2 S3 Ch.1] [Tropecita Games]

Really enjoyed it has great models and the story seems pretty interesting so far and can't wait to see how it all turns out also love the mom and aunt and cousins and i cant wait for future updates dont really know why the dad left because the mom is hot as hell haha

1.0
Not bad, basic same old story setup, but the renderings are good, while the English grammar writing is fine, the sentence structure is unnatural as soon as you get past the setup stage, But i'm guessing since Spanish is the main language of the Devs, it's understandable, Only bugs me a little bit, but i see that time and effort has been put into this beginning, allot of people have already pointed stuff out in the form and has been responded to by a Dev so im sure things will get better with new chapters. Good luck with the development.