VN - Ren'Py - Completed - My Dream Girl [v1] [A Dre@mer Studio]

Well...I guess there was an attempt. The renders are...okay. Not fantastic. The main things that bother me the most is this game ends when things seem to just get started. The problem is this game is quite short with very little of any content and goes to "BE CONTINUED ON THE NEXT PART!" and the thing with that is...none of the parts seem to match up with the content baited here. Like the femdom stuff is a joke if you're actually into femdom...so is the NTR. The following games I have no clue if he's following up on those themes or not.

If I can be 100% honest? it feels like he picked some controversial tags but gave them like "1 scene each" to gauge reaction and then jumped into a new game/continuation of the story to cater to the audience he wants to properly hit.

Renders are blah, story is...trying. Writing isn't great. The way it teases and then goes to "next game" cliff hanger is all sorts of shady. It's just a big waste of time to be honest.

I so wanted to like this game, it has a title, it has good graphics, but yeah has a plot hole you can drive a truck through and the most damning sin is not having any sex mc can get involved in. I mean its a year and a half in... maybe a porno game should have porn in it by its 8th release.

So many versions and almost no content. All what you see is voyeur, spying other people naked, one couple having sex, or a little touching. The only moment when I feel that you can see something interesting is when you have to choose between Check on John and the girls or Minna and the boys, and you can't decide because looks like John route is not implemented, and before you have the same problem because you can't "Go with Miss Sweets".
The "visual effects" to me are a bothersome, the MC "scanning" the girls take ages to end and you have like 10 moments like that, without taking account when the nun in the church, the sex scene take a lot of time too, and none of those are skippable.
So like 5 nude scenes, 2 or 3 grope scenes, but those almost don't count because they are part of the nude scenes, 1 sex scene and nothing more.

V0.17 Review -
Seriously this game got to be the worst game that I have played
Game starts with male main character who works as a history professor with an IQ of an idiot in the beginning he looks more like a grandpa though he is same age as his adopted brother and after magic he turns into a handsome young man according to the game ( still looks like an idiot ) and each update he is becoming younger and younger as the game progress in the final update he looks more of a 12 yr boy than the boys he teaches who look like his seniors . I think in the end of the game we can expect that MC will turn into a beautiful baby boy .
Apart from that - the female models in the game look good but they are worthless in the end with that writing and non existent story . Choices are badly done and even with skip transitions it takes too long to skip the screaming and annoying scenes where female characters are introduced . And sex scenes are just voyeur scenes which is boring .
Summary - Horrible game skip this game if you can or you can skip to see sex scenes , oh wait there is none or rather sex scenes involving the multiple protagonists .

As of v0.17
There is not even a single good thing to mention in this game . Renders were average , characters looks are weird . No story , no multiple protagonist , Choices are blocked and annoying music which doesn't fit the game and the writing is bad there is not even a single normal character in the game , in simple all characters in this game are perverts . Most importantly no H scenes for any protagonist .
Overall a disaster with nothing to play for in this game other than watching others having sex or watching them in shower or molesting them in their sleep .

this game has bad scenes, boring story, other than jerking off dick, i did not see any adult content. I can not recommend it to anyone, I wonder how it got on my watch list, i will delete it now and never come back.

Models are awesome! Story ok, can get even better if it has a lot of ntr. Needs more spicy, it requires more kinky shit with those "kids" from the camp and the adults. MC has to become a loser by our choice and PLEASE! PLEASE! if we have choices, let us choose that and don't cuck us with a CG telling "not now". FUUUUUUCK UUUUUU!!!!

Wow. There are a lot of adult games with silly stories but I've never played one quite as stupid as this.

-MC is a middle age history professor who gives all his money to his best friend's wife so that she can force him to do chores around the house to try and get back the money he earned. Why? I have no idea.

- It's established that MC and his best friend grew up together so they are the same age, except half way through he gets turned back into a kid through magic making everyone's memory retroactively change too. So I guess now instead of being middle aged man child he is just a umm middle aged child man? My guess is that because everyone complained about the old protagonist the dev added the magic thing turning him into a child? Who knows. Good luck making that one make sense dev.

- Dialogue is not great but it's passable. "Oh good Sir!" "What have you done good Sir?" "I hope nothing happens to my good Sir!" "I must try and protect good Sir!" etc. There are a few grammar errors and quite a number of spelling mistakes too.

- Not much in the way of lewds yet. One sex scene from a distance between 2 characters that weren't really introduced.

- The changelog says animations added but it's just unskippable single frames, a couple of them have alternating 2 frames like the sex scene. So don't expect actual animation.

So why did I give it 2 stars? Well the character models for the main women are very good. Really that's the only plus.

Magic and titties who could ask for more? Good pics and good story you say. well this game has it. though it is a VN more than a game as there are no stupid chickens to catch. I want to see nakeditity. my word my spelling. not chickens. This VN delivers a very fresh storyline. not the same go to college thing. The VN is just starting so give it a chance.

Pros:
- Pretty good models, they seem natural, the women look well shaped.

- There's some really funny parts with the MC.

- The MC is like a child in a adult body, that's pretty new to me, and I believe situation won't be like that forever.

- Pretty good renders for a start.

- The story is pretty good, it's different from what I usually get to experience, in a good way.

Cons:
- The player can lost in the story of the game, we don't know much about the MC's situation right at the beginning and we have to figure it out during the game.

- There's a lack of content, I really like this game and I wish there were more renders.

- Some people can feel like the choices they make won't really make that much of an impact later on the game.


I give 4 stars to encourage the dev to keep going because some people like to compare the new devs to the top devs making games since 5 years and decide to kill the ability for the new devs to grow and learn from their mistakes.

Can't believe I wasted my time with this. Ignoring the fact you play as a 40 year old dude living with his sister/mom who can't support himself, the game is way too short and has absolutely no substance.

Either skip this game entirely or wait for a complete rewrite.

This is bad...like really bad. Seeing as this game is in early stages, I suggest the dev starts completely over. Rewrite the characters especially the MC. No one wants to be playing a barely functional man child.

Okay, I managed to play about five minutes then I had enough of playing this pathetic loser of an MC.

The guy looks like he's forty, but acts like he is fifteen, he lives with a family, though their relationship isn't explained at all (or tbh, I might have missed it as I was skipping text, because it sucked so badly.)

The renders are not sharp, the lighting is poor, all in all the fkat end of the spectrum.
I could totally ignore that, if the writing and story was good, but sadly the story feels like it has been told a hundred times in games on this site here AND the writing, while not as horrible an Engrish as could be, also just has nothing going for it.
It's awkward, it's boring, it's bland and the dialogues, corny doesn't even begin to describe it.

I admit, two years ago or even just one, I might have given this VN three stars, as there is nothing horribly wrong with it, but 2020, with all these games competing against each other, and with the large number of games with at least really decent writing, this one doesn't cut it. At all.

Both MC's act weird and their is no explanation for it game is insanely short and should have been stated as a demo or barely that I couldn't tell were the game was going at all choices are ridiculous every choice you have would normally get you hit and thrown out of a moving vehicle blue or red good or bad I am confused on how he is a teacher when he should still be in school there seemed to be more errors in the first minute of me reading then in this review which doesn't seem possible I wish you the best for this game but I would have a problem playing this if you paid me to play it but I wish you the best of luck

-like the style
-quality is solid
-girls look good and curvy in a natural and pretty way.
-a bit humour doesnt hurt good job on that.
-a view options which is always nice
even i am not a fan of male protagonists he looks alright but could look either a bit older or uglier/less attractive
- hopefully many naughty sex which i am certain wont be animated but this doesn't hurt the game cause it looks nice, the girls are sexy and just the mc could look a bit older

so my only cons for now are to tweak the mc a bit more into the older/uglier way and that the release version was quite short quantity wise. :/

but looks quite promosing will track it!