2D My first NSFW art ever.

[WhitePinkman]

I'm an indie game developer and I've been coding for about 20 years.

But recently I really wanted to move away from boring game dev and start making porn games because I love them and play them all the time My favourite games have 2D hand drawn art but my art skills where lacking.

So about a week ago I took a "how to draw" course on Udemy and after practicing everyday this is where I'm at. This is the first time I've shared anything and I think it turned out okay.

I'll be posting a lot more of this kind of thing and gradually turning it into a game.

 

[Alt-0069]

Hello, I will write in french 'cause it's easier for me:

Ton personnage n'est pas trop mal, le visage est vraiment très bon pour un débutant ! Sauf l'ombre du nez, en général elle n'est présente que du côté non éclairé du visage. Si le visage est éclairé de face alors fait les reflets brillants pour donner du volume.
Le nombril n'est pas correctement aligné.
Les hanches sont trop petites ou pas assez prononcées.
Les cuisses sont censées rejoindre les fesses sous l'entre-jambe.
L'ombre sous la poitrine est assez étrange, trop pointue.
Tu devrai faire de minces et petites lignes pour montrer ou se trouve les os des hanches et la limite de la cage thoracique (va voir chez d'autres artistes)
Tes cheveux ont un bon style mais il manque les reflets de la lumière.
Tu devrait aussi faire les reflets de la lumière sur la peau.
Enfin du devrait faire une ombre sous elle afin de la placer réellement dans l'environnement. Elle ne flotte pas?

 

[WhitePinkman]

I will translate to English 'cause it's easier for me:

Your character is not too bad, the face is really very good for a beginner! With the exception of the shadow of the nose, it is generally only present on the unlit side of the face. If the face is lit from the front then make the highlights shiny to give volume.
The navel is not properly aligned.
The hips are too small or not pronounced enough.
The thighs are supposed to join the buttocks under the crotch.
The shadow under the chest is quite strange, too sharp.
You should make thin and small lines to show where the hip bones and the edge of the rib cage are (check other artists)
Your hair has a good style but lacks the reflections of the light.
You should also reflect the light on the skin.
Finally the should make a shadow under it in order to actually place it in the environment. It doesn't float?

Hey. Thanks for the feedback.

I knew something was off about the nose and now that you mention, it totally makes sense.

The navel is actually aligned correctly according the the reference photo I was using, however, I probably haven't drawn the twist in the body correctly. So that's something I'll keep practicing.

Everything else makes sense.
Anyway, I'm practicing everyday so I'll take your advice onboard Thanks again!