VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - My Fucked Up Life [Ch.1] [Ulala Games]

So, over all a good game, just a little choppy. By choppy I mean that the scences move too fast, the self-doubt & questioning is there, but not convincing, the story is fine, the plot is fine, of course, I don't know where the author is going beyond chapter one, but it is a good foundation for a story, just needs a little fixing up. A lot of places this story could go & I would be happy to see them. Good luck with this game, it has great potential.

My Fucked Up Life [Ch.1]

Good game, and one of few really nice dev's here, unfortunately we don't have much of these here.

-Story - The dev is basing in another story, but thank god he is making is own, the chapter one have some really good parts, some shocking, is a good history.
-Renders - The game have some really good ones, the granny, the mom, almost everyone is sexy.
-Sound - Unfortunately at the chapter one there is none, but the game still in development, so let's see.
- Playability - Good one, there is a good variety of fetishes, but since chapter one is not giant, let's see what comes in chapter 2.

In the end, is a nice start from the dev, is his first game, and a nice addition to the site.

For your first game this is very promising. It is also very refreshing to not see the same models from every other Ren'Py game on here. The renders are decent in my opinion (for someone's first game, at least) but the routes might need some tweaking.

Like maybe you should consider putting the NTR routes into one bigger route instead of having one for every character.

Nice introduction , I just wait to see more there are good renders(but they could be better) , story seems to be simple how I like and girls are wonderful I hope there will be more to come and that developer will fix renders and will add some gameplay.