Hello there! Posting a [v0.11] review.
Impressive Asians rendering, I would say they are gorgeous but the FMC look like a bit too much of a doll.
Story wise, the concept is good but I think it's not pushed into the right direction.
It just remind me that every gorgeous girls are targeted by a lot of monkeys... I think the problem right now, is : your power feels just useless, your actions can't be corrected, you can't prevent shit if you made the bad decisions.
You make the perfect run or got NTRed all the way. What's the point of being able to peep into the future then? Well it's a bit early, it's still 0.12. so i think it's not a good idea to say everything is bad.
I find it too fast paced in my taste, beeing able to correct things with that kind of power instead of just choosing if you want to grope them because you are into the future and there is no consequences is a bit wasted?
I like the way how asian culture is depicted, it's really coherent to say it's similar between chinese and the korean one. Anyway, I think we need a relift about the relationships with all the characteres, right now I feel it's a bit weak in the story department... It needs more depth.
I think it's a good idea to tell us more about more the MC feeling, the way he view all those events. And not beeing able to deactivate the NTR scene. He has to questions himself of why the girls behave like that in the future etc...
Impressive Asians rendering, I would say they are gorgeous but the FMC look like a bit too much of a doll.
Story wise, the concept is good but I think it's not pushed into the right direction.
It just remind me that every gorgeous girls are targeted by a lot of monkeys... I think the problem right now, is : your power feels just useless, your actions can't be corrected, you can't prevent shit if you made the bad decisions.
You make the perfect run or got NTRed all the way. What's the point of being able to peep into the future then? Well it's a bit early, it's still 0.12. so i think it's not a good idea to say everything is bad.
I find it too fast paced in my taste, beeing able to correct things with that kind of power instead of just choosing if you want to grope them because you are into the future and there is no consequences is a bit wasted?
I like the way how asian culture is depicted, it's really coherent to say it's similar between chinese and the korean one. Anyway, I think we need a relift about the relationships with all the characteres, right now I feel it's a bit weak in the story department... It needs more depth.
I think it's a good idea to tell us more about more the MC feeling, the way he view all those events. And not beeing able to deactivate the NTR scene. He has to questions himself of why the girls behave like that in the future etc...