I realy like long stories, and when it comes all together. what about kinks? sex toys in school? bod mods (piercing, tattoos)?
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I wish there were pauses in the story where I could save the game and continue later.
Will there be more slutty, gangbangy routes for the girl to take in future? She was quite roaring to go full send into that sort of direction, wanting everyone to creampie her immediately was pretty hardcore (and fun) after all.
Like they planned that she'd sometimes go off on her own and just tell him later kind of thing, she could go on to explore her wilder side with many different men, all over town and countryside even maybe.
Will there be more slutty, gangbangy routes for the girl to take in future? She was quite roaring to go full send into that sort of direction, wanting everyone to creampie her immediately was pretty hardcore (and fun) after all.
Like they planned that she'd sometimes go off on her own and just tell him later kind of thing, she could go on to explore her wilder side with many different men, all over town and countryside even maybe.
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Some people didn't like the condom thing very much. Others did like it but explained it as a power dynamic with Kanade holding the power. A power dynamic miiiight be a part of it, I have no clue really, but here is my explanation as to how I think Kanade's actual reasoning goes which is actually really sweet.
You know how some food, while quite tasty, you don't really care about so you sometimes just down it quickly so you can feel satiated? Maybe you're running late on your lunch break and you need to eat fast to be on time. But some food is different. Those select few or single favorite food item? You'd hate to rush it. If you don't have time for it you put it in the fridge until you do have time. Because you want to savor every single bite and sensation. You want to fully finish tasting one section of the food before moving on to the even better tasting other sections. That's kinda like her boyfriend to her.
There's also the special connection she feels. The emotional connection and infatuation you can only feel with the one person you are totally and hopelessly in love with. Maybe even someone you've known your whole life? The pleasure of a raw dick is great and all especially if it's a big and fat one, but ultimately she just doesn't put much value on who takes her first rawdogging or creampie. She doesn't care about other dicks that aren't her boyfriend's beyond the physical pleasure they give her. She considers her boyfriend's feelings of course and she knows the importance society attributes to it, but to HER it isn't a significant event.
But the idea of finally becoming one in heart and flesh? With the person she loves more than anything in the whole world? Not even hindered by the separation provided by the flimsy material that is a condom. Quite frankly the closest you can ever be with your soulmate? It must seem absolutely mind blowing to her. Like, once she has had a taste of that she would fall even deeper in love with MC. That's why she wants to savor the feeling of this stage in their relationship, basically when they're still dating and everything's relatively casual, perhaps not even that different from their friendship before. Or maybe it's just the sheer state of arousal and love she knows she'd feel in that instance that she just straight up needs to prepare her heart for.
Basically like if I had the opportunity to make out with a random hot model, I probably would. But it's just not the same as finally getting to kiss your (high school) crush.
idk
(but I absolutely love this character)
You know how some food, while quite tasty, you don't really care about so you sometimes just down it quickly so you can feel satiated? Maybe you're running late on your lunch break and you need to eat fast to be on time. But some food is different. Those select few or single favorite food item? You'd hate to rush it. If you don't have time for it you put it in the fridge until you do have time. Because you want to savor every single bite and sensation. You want to fully finish tasting one section of the food before moving on to the even better tasting other sections. That's kinda like her boyfriend to her.
There's also the special connection she feels. The emotional connection and infatuation you can only feel with the one person you are totally and hopelessly in love with. Maybe even someone you've known your whole life? The pleasure of a raw dick is great and all especially if it's a big and fat one, but ultimately she just doesn't put much value on who takes her first rawdogging or creampie. She doesn't care about other dicks that aren't her boyfriend's beyond the physical pleasure they give her. She considers her boyfriend's feelings of course and she knows the importance society attributes to it, but to HER it isn't a significant event.
But the idea of finally becoming one in heart and flesh? With the person she loves more than anything in the whole world? Not even hindered by the separation provided by the flimsy material that is a condom. Quite frankly the closest you can ever be with your soulmate? It must seem absolutely mind blowing to her. Like, once she has had a taste of that she would fall even deeper in love with MC. That's why she wants to savor the feeling of this stage in their relationship, basically when they're still dating and everything's relatively casual, perhaps not even that different from their friendship before. Or maybe it's just the sheer state of arousal and love she knows she'd feel in that instance that she just straight up needs to prepare her heart for.
Basically like if I had the opportunity to make out with a random hot model, I probably would. But it's just not the same as finally getting to kiss your (high school) crush.
idk
(but I absolutely love this character)
- Aug 30, 2022
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You know what, AI art in this VN is surprisingly ok-made, consistnent and pleasing to view. The writing is not braindead too. The main feature of this game is that there a literally less than ten games that use/explore netorase with elements like "I do/did it for him, but not for you", power dynamics and all this. But, while the first part of the game was well-made, albeit fast-paced (bonus points for creampie), the other part with Ford factory scale sluttification is a real downer. Like... Just... No. She can have the best of the best! Why fuck with some losers? You know what I mean?
I wish it was less fast-paced, no sluttification (like, really, that half/fake prude image is hot) and maybe add elements like why the love each other, many games lack that aspect. Maybe other secrets with her ex. Or more specials for him, like deepthroat, anal and so on. Otherwise, we will watch your career with great interest.
Also... WHAT ABOUT "THAT" THING?
I wish it was less fast-paced, no sluttification (like, really, that half/fake prude image is hot) and maybe add elements like why the love each other, many games lack that aspect. Maybe other secrets with her ex. Or more specials for him, like deepthroat, anal and so on. Otherwise, we will watch your career with great interest.
Also... WHAT ABOUT "THAT" THING?
- Jul 27, 2023
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This one has a lot of potential for sure. As others have already said a million times, the lack of build up and instant corruption is the big downside here.
Other than that... honestly, after having beaten it earlier and stewing in my thoughts... I'm really looking forward to more.
I love love LOVE how much MC and Kanade adore and love each other. That's a big thing I enjoy in Netorase, when the couple clearly show how much they love each other, and the kink is all about the love. I also really love that MC isn't useless here and sex between him and Kanade is actually really good, and he can make her cum multiple times, especially after the reclamation sex when they get home near the end.
So, yeah, to Fanorase, my only issue is the neckbreaking speed of the build up to instant sluttification. Work on that and slow it down some, and this could be a banger Netorase game that we so sorely need.
Other than that... honestly, after having beaten it earlier and stewing in my thoughts... I'm really looking forward to more.
At first, I did hate that she just easily lets another guy rawdog and creampie her, after her whole speech to MC that she wants to save their first raw penetration for a special occasion that she isn't ready for. But I totally get what you're saying. With anyone else it doesn't matter and doesn't give her the same feeling. But with MC, it's special, and she wants to savor it as much as possible. I'm on board with this now.
I love love LOVE how much MC and Kanade adore and love each other. That's a big thing I enjoy in Netorase, when the couple clearly show how much they love each other, and the kink is all about the love. I also really love that MC isn't useless here and sex between him and Kanade is actually really good, and he can make her cum multiple times, especially after the reclamation sex when they get home near the end.
So, yeah, to Fanorase, my only issue is the neckbreaking speed of the build up to instant sluttification. Work on that and slow it down some, and this could be a banger Netorase game that we so sorely need.
- Mar 20, 2018
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well i left a comment back then, But the more i play the game the more i start thinking of certain issues tho,
Firstly i want to say that the game and story telling is really great but some points not so good...
As other people have said, The point where the female mc goes raw instantly and all slutty feels to rushed...
As some and me as well, I feel like their should be a build up before she accepts doing it raw and then starting go full slut,
I have a few opinions tho, I think that going with the EX BF was a good idea but i think you should make a build up before the MC spectates them, For example he should let her contact her ex and sleep privately and later on she reports what they have done, leaving up to ones imagination on what her report entails, and one of these reports she comments on how they did it raw but it ends with no creampie until the MC hides somewhere to spy on them which the FMC would later get creampied.
2nd thought: Their should be choice of people who the MC would want her to sleep with, Like your typical Neterose hentai games, For example could be another friend, or the janitor, Principal, Black transfer student, Homeless guy, neighbor, boss from the part time job, The bully, You get the point.
Overall the game has potential, it's the road you wish to take.
Tho i wish you goodluck and I look forward In seeing how you flesh out the game in the later future and I wish you goodluck
Firstly i want to say that the game and story telling is really great but some points not so good...
As other people have said, The point where the female mc goes raw instantly and all slutty feels to rushed...
As some and me as well, I feel like their should be a build up before she accepts doing it raw and then starting go full slut,
I have a few opinions tho, I think that going with the EX BF was a good idea but i think you should make a build up before the MC spectates them, For example he should let her contact her ex and sleep privately and later on she reports what they have done, leaving up to ones imagination on what her report entails, and one of these reports she comments on how they did it raw but it ends with no creampie until the MC hides somewhere to spy on them which the FMC would later get creampied.
2nd thought: Their should be choice of people who the MC would want her to sleep with, Like your typical Neterose hentai games, For example could be another friend, or the janitor, Principal, Black transfer student, Homeless guy, neighbor, boss from the part time job, The bully, You get the point.
Overall the game has potential, it's the road you wish to take.
Tho i wish you goodluck and I look forward In seeing how you flesh out the game in the later future and I wish you goodluck
wow this game has a ton of potential i really like the way Kanade and Mc interact with each other and show they have complete faith and love for one another.
however maybe i sound like an echo chamber now with the other comments at this point but i feel like she just goes insta slut mode way too fast. Also the whole making mc wear a condom cause she wants it to be "special" but then goes straight into letting her ex bf and others go raw and creampie her without a care doesn't make any sense to me.
IMO when the game releases fully it will be way hotter if she keeps the condom rule for everyone But the ex bf (secretly) since she clearly feels at least something for him. maybe a scenario where she tells the mc she makes everyone wear a condom but then he spys on her and ex bf only to see them going raw and her letting him end it with a creampie. it would really hammer in the fact she could get completely taken from mc because of his fetish.
however maybe i sound like an echo chamber now with the other comments at this point but i feel like she just goes insta slut mode way too fast. Also the whole making mc wear a condom cause she wants it to be "special" but then goes straight into letting her ex bf and others go raw and creampie her without a care doesn't make any sense to me.
IMO when the game releases fully it will be way hotter if she keeps the condom rule for everyone But the ex bf (secretly) since she clearly feels at least something for him. maybe a scenario where she tells the mc she makes everyone wear a condom but then he spys on her and ex bf only to see them going raw and her letting him end it with a creampie. it would really hammer in the fact she could get completely taken from mc because of his fetish.
- Nov 6, 2017
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I quite enjoyed the prologue, but as others said it ran faster than it should.
Some ideas set some rules, including a x amount of fucks rules, so Yuuji has only so many left (guessing he is the main antagonist)
determine who is the dom and sub, as the GF is trying to please your kink it would make sense for the MC to be the dom so she can't do XYZ without permission including use of condoms.
Are you going to have her stolen away (multiple endings) or are you going to have a happily ever after? If so maybe determine that she uses condoms until she is ready for the MC. In this situation it makes sense if he is the first to cum in her as she wants him to be the first for most things.
Some ideas set some rules, including a x amount of fucks rules, so Yuuji has only so many left (guessing he is the main antagonist)
determine who is the dom and sub, as the GF is trying to please your kink it would make sense for the MC to be the dom so she can't do XYZ without permission including use of condoms.
Are you going to have her stolen away (multiple endings) or are you going to have a happily ever after? If so maybe determine that she uses condoms until she is ready for the MC. In this situation it makes sense if he is the first to cum in her as she wants him to be the first for most things.
- Jan 21, 2019
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10/10 so far, considering its in early stage. keep up the good work!
while I do have feedback, I feel like most people already said this in previous posts, but I don't have time to read pages right now, so I'll just point them out
I understand many of this is pacing stuff, and pretty much shouldn't apply to early development game. but I'd still like to express that as you progress development, what we have here right now should be spread throughout the story. i'd like more things to be added in between the scenes we have now, not just after it. basically, asking for a slowburn.
not sure if anyone linked this before but this game reminds me alot of Blurring the Walls, which is also NTRS and pretty much same plot - couple is partner in crime with sharing the girl, but in the end sticking together through it all.
while I do have feedback, I feel like most people already said this in previous posts, but I don't have time to read pages right now, so I'll just point them out
- would have preferred if the scene where she adjusts her uniform, and they do open relationship to the whole class is at the rear end of the story. still depends on how you implement the classmates, if it's just recurring thing, or each one has a different "kick". it's not like she became a cumdump right there, and she did say one person a day, so I'll understand if it's not in the late game. but i feel "sex with anyone" is towards the end - and we should first do selective/limited sharing first.
- I'd like her to go through less extreme things first. day 1 with yuuji raw sex, although very hot and should still happen, I feel like we can open up our desires more before this. e.g. doing some exhibistionism stuff, and lots of teasing at first. this way, when it happens, it will have bigger kick than current scene, imagine that.
- smh I felt that thing about dating yuuji was out of nowhere. it pretty much felt like she was making it up just because now she knows about your fetish. maybe a hint before you reveal your fetish to her, maybe you guys pass by yuuji and she looks uneasy or something similar effect. very simple, but reinforces that things happened beforehand, not caused by your fetish revelation. something protag can be worried and fantasize about, maybe the thoughts that actually lead you to the revelation.
- one time with yuuji is good, the second one is fine, but I feel like we should not make him a recurring character after this. to me,
more people that's less intimate > less people that's more intimate. I do feel she is still most intimate when with mc even while already doing NTRS (good work with this), I wouldn't want her to be more intimate with yuuji after this. - more discreet exposure. while similar to the first point, this one focuses on her exposure. while her uniform adjustment wasn't that too extreme (or maybe it is?), I feel like she can do this gradually rather than immediate one day she comes to school like that. more of those accidental flashing, or when she's aware, discreetly teasing everyone, maybe some skirt lifts here and there, PE uniforms in gym class, swimsuit in swimming class, etc. more "innocent" but revealing stuff first. make the classmates crave more skin before doing the slut look.
I understand many of this is pacing stuff, and pretty much shouldn't apply to early development game. but I'd still like to express that as you progress development, what we have here right now should be spread throughout the story. i'd like more things to be added in between the scenes we have now, not just after it. basically, asking for a slowburn.
not sure if anyone linked this before but this game reminds me alot of Blurring the Walls, which is also NTRS and pretty much same plot - couple is partner in crime with sharing the girl, but in the end sticking together through it all.
- Jun 6, 2018
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hey fanorase are you planning on making a patreon? love it so far
Does the game has an official page, like the ones in ithc.io, so we can accompany the development of game?
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- May 29, 2020
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Yo! Just got back from a two week vacation, and I'm jet-lagged the fuck out, so I'll be resting for a few days. But now that I'm back I'm gonna keep working on the game! Didn't think much about it while I was away, but I did come up with a few ideas. But I wanna address a few comments first.
And yes, I'll be making NPCs you can let her fuck. Six of those are already in my plans, but I'll take note of the others.
BUT, she won't be stolen away. Everything she does is for her boyfriend. So right now, no multiple endings. I'll finish what I have in mind first before deciding what I should do.
at least that's the plan lmaooo
And yes, I agree on not making the MC feel like a loser. I'm struggling with it, because there aren't any good examples for this specific type of game(!!!), but that's my intention.
No clue when a new update will be. No promises, but maybe sometime in July. I'll be checking in here a bit since this is my first project. I have a better understanding of the more technical stuff in rpgm now, so it'll mostly be on the writing part.
So yeah
Glad to see y'all agree. I find this sorta thing extremely hot, so that's why I did it lmfao. There are a lot of netorase games that have similar lines akin to "my heart's only for you", and that's extremely hot, yes, but I want to take that a step further. I'll be changing and rearranging most of the prologue, but this aspect will still be present.
Big agree on it being rushed. It was my first draft of the prologue, so I needed fresh eyes to see where I fucked up. So I'll be having more buildup there. Interesting idea on the report part... I might make that an option to let her do it by themselves some time later down the road, but right now I want their first time with him together.
And yes, I'll be making NPCs you can let her fuck. Six of those are already in my plans, but I'll take note of the others.
Maybe. Everyone else wearing a condom except her ex is a good idea and I'm planning on that, but I don't think I'll make it a secret. I want this game to be open communication between the couple, with hints of doubt toward the end game. I just personally think them being honest is hotter lol. But I'll definitely consider it, because, frankly, her doing it in secret is hot lmfao.
I see i see, I'll keep that in mind. I'll ((((try to)))) make a system where you can decide through dialogue how controlling you want to be. If you're more dom, you get more options on how she does stuff, but if you choose sub options, she'll decide what she likes (you'll still have options to pick from, just less so).
BUT, she won't be stolen away. Everything she does is for her boyfriend. So right now, no multiple endings. I'll finish what I have in mind first before deciding what I should do.
There will be no hard NTR in this game. There are a lot already out there. I want to see a happy couple for once dammit LOL. I decided to make this game for that reason after all.
And yes, I agree on not making the MC feel like a loser. I'm struggling with it, because there aren't any good examples for this specific type of game(!!!), but that's my intention.
No clue when a new update will be. No promises, but maybe sometime in July. I'll be checking in here a bit since this is my first project. I have a better understanding of the more technical stuff in rpgm now, so it'll mostly be on the writing part.
So yeah
- Mar 15, 2018
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Really enjoyed the game!
Has a ton of potential, played the game this one was inspired by (someone need to translate it!) and really enjoyed the concept.
Im not the biggest fan when the MC has a tiny penis and is useless and made fun of, not really my cup of tea, so this one finally check all the boxes for me, artwork is good, and I really like the look of Kanade, and love me a good loyal slut, that being said i look forward to the updates!
side note
Link for the game
Would like to see some sort of gloryhole perhaps in one of the school bathroom stalls?
Also another thing I wish the other game had was maybe a event where you can be the female mc, would be great if you could have a event or option to roam around as Kanade.
Has a ton of potential, played the game this one was inspired by (someone need to translate it!) and really enjoyed the concept.
Im not the biggest fan when the MC has a tiny penis and is useless and made fun of, not really my cup of tea, so this one finally check all the boxes for me, artwork is good, and I really like the look of Kanade, and love me a good loyal slut, that being said i look forward to the updates!
side note
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Would like to see some sort of gloryhole perhaps in one of the school bathroom stalls?
Also another thing I wish the other game had was maybe a event where you can be the female mc, would be great if you could have a event or option to roam around as Kanade.
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- Oct 30, 2020
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Really enjoyed the game! I can't wait to see what you have in store.
This has probably been mentioned elsewhere, but it would be really neat to see this develop to where Kanade has more autonomy and can start making decisions on what she's doing (letting the MC know of course). I'd find it so hot if there was a way the MC could track her whereabouts on his phone. Would love to see Kanade start spending a night (or more) at a friend's/classmate's house (or even the MC's room) with MC's approval. MC would get text updates of their playtime and could even bring them water/refreshments to keep going. Would love to see a steamy, hot room after a full weekend of sex, and cum stains all over the sheets.
If you've played Ruins of Luxoria, I'd also find it hot for some of the boys to make bets with MC/Kanade that they can "steal her heart" with MC and Kanade both knowing that's not possible. Would be funny to see a rival suitor fuck Kanade for a day or days on end with a big dick, attempt to talk his way into her heart and try to "make her his" only for Kanade to play into it and then jump right back into MC's arms at the end of it and win the bet.
Anyways, food for thought, and thanks so much again!
This has probably been mentioned elsewhere, but it would be really neat to see this develop to where Kanade has more autonomy and can start making decisions on what she's doing (letting the MC know of course). I'd find it so hot if there was a way the MC could track her whereabouts on his phone. Would love to see Kanade start spending a night (or more) at a friend's/classmate's house (or even the MC's room) with MC's approval. MC would get text updates of their playtime and could even bring them water/refreshments to keep going. Would love to see a steamy, hot room after a full weekend of sex, and cum stains all over the sheets.
If you've played Ruins of Luxoria, I'd also find it hot for some of the boys to make bets with MC/Kanade that they can "steal her heart" with MC and Kanade both knowing that's not possible. Would be funny to see a rival suitor fuck Kanade for a day or days on end with a big dick, attempt to talk his way into her heart and try to "make her his" only for Kanade to play into it and then jump right back into MC's arms at the end of it and win the bet.
Anyways, food for thought, and thanks so much again!