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Adhdclassic

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Mar 10, 2024
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Hello everyone, Creator of the game here c:
I'm here to have a dialogue with you about the game.

I planned to create a save slot for the version 1.2, I wanted to have some feedback first.

For the gaming experience, I initially chose not to add a forward button.
I did this because I thought it was unnecessary...
I was wrong here... (◞‸ ◟)
I'll release a patch to add this feature in the coming days.

About the NTR part of the game (and the tag situation):
As of version 1.0, there is no NTR/NTS content, Even though you can tell which direction the game is heading.
I initially wanted to release the first versions of the game only on Itch.io to get feedback.
I wanted to publish the game on Zone once the story was more developed, And once the features were more polished.
It's a bit sad that I didn't have control over this, but it's fine.

I also wanted to know if you guys are here for the NTR/NTS or the Vanilla.
I want to create an NTR/NTS focused game. But if you really want more Vanilla, please tell me.

I'll read all the comments and reply when needed.
I will try my best to create a better game.
English is not my first language—sorry about that (っ- ‸ - ς)

Have a nice day!
I said this on another game. Every choice NTR game should have 3 paths Vanilla, NTS and NTR. That way you have something for everyone anyone that complains is just doing that complaining to complain. But in the end its your game you do you.
 

kristo0086

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Nov 17, 2021
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I said this on another game. Every choice NTR game should have 3 paths Vanilla, NTS and NTR. That way you have something for everyone anyone that complains is just doing that complaining to complain. But in the end its your game you do you.
It's all utter nonsense. If the developer doesn't have an understanding of what HE wants to do, then the game is over.
 

Kekekerkek

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Aug 18, 2018
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I said this on another game. Every choice NTR game should have 3 paths Vanilla, NTS and NTR. That way you have something for everyone anyone that complains is just doing that complaining to complain. But in the end its your game you do you.
i 100% agree and i feel like usually games that has more path has more depth and more replayability but it's more work too which can makes a dev burnout easily.
 

Suntar

Newbie
Jul 29, 2018
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Would be nice if on the vanilla and NTS path we could get a sexually capable MC. I'm extremely tired of NTR games with a vanilla/NTS path where the scenes with MC are a waste of time because they're specifically made so he fits into the NTR cliche of small dick, quick shot looser.

Have him be a quick shot that doesn't know how to satisfy his gf on the NTR route, no problem. But please, at least give us the option of having good sex with Mio on the other routes. Let MC's performance with Mio be player choice. Then those NTS players that like playing an incapable MC can do so, and the others don't have to suffer through it.

All that's needed for this is a small choice at the end of some scenes in the line of CUM or HOLD OUT. If you CUM, she doesn't. If you don't, you come together. All that's needed is a couple lines of dialogue and 1 extra render of Mio moaning a bit more or something.


I might be jumping the shark since MC does seem to be well equipped at least, but him being a quickshot in the first scene and Mio's response of "it was ok" after the 2nd one have me worried.
Might just be her being a tsundere, but I've seen this trope to often and right now in the game there is still time to implement my solutions. Doesn't even have to be in already existing scenes, just for future ones. MC can suck at sex in the beginning, as long as we have the option to improve him, that's fine with me.
 

Avenjq

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but him being a quickshot in the first scene and Mio's response of "it was ok" after the 2nd one have me worried.
Pretty sure the implication was they had sex off camera a few minutes later ... because you know. Men sometimes need a few to get UP again.

The game shows promise and the devs english is way better than I expected based on the warnings.
Hope the dream MC had in latest update does not happen any time soon... I like it when the corruption is not instant upon seeing a big cock. Gimme some justification for the seemingly loving wife to turn to a shameless cheater. At least for the NTR path. We could always get the hubby knows and pushes her to cheat by rejecting sex with her NTR sub-genre.

NTS could be him wanting his wife to have more fun while he is away working for longer than a week, after he admits his fetish of course and after he discovers he has one.

The Vanilla path could focus on the "breeding" fetish teased in the 1st update with the wife showing her growing belly on stream. (could also be a part of the NTR and NTS paths with either hubby "thinking its his" or straight up no idea if its his or one of her lovers child).

Hardcore humiliation of the "cuck" is an instant nope for me BTW.

Anyway thats what I like. Feel free to do what you enjoy dev.

Wish the "videos" could be read "at my own pace". The skip forward is fine for the texts because they don't go away and pause for responses quite a bit but the text in the videos flashes by way too fast.
Clicking on the screen to proceed the conversation faster would be preferable for people who read fast like me.
 

sbeve_bupkis

New Member
Jan 30, 2024
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i'm not gonna review this just yet because you're making strides with each update, but I like it so far. There's technical limitations sure, but as long as you keep working at it i think you'll bring it in line with people's expectations for the phone NTR stuff.

  • no rollback during videos/calls if you miss dialogue. there's not text box for visual clarity
  • you can't click on still images sent earlier in the chat to view them fullscreen
  • there's no way to advance text at your own pace when doing video/calls. so you're just sitting there waiting
however the premise is fine, the art is fine, keep up the good work and we'll check back later
 

Suntar

Newbie
Jul 29, 2018
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Pretty sure the implication was they had sex off camera a few minutes later ... because you know. Men sometimes need a few to get UP again.
I'm aware, but the focus was on him apologizing for his performance again.
And the question about what Mio liked was also vague. MC might have very well been referring to the sex, but Mio immediately deflected to the filming, avoiding to talk about the sex.

Again, I might be jumping the shark here, with Mio just being a tsundere.
But when NTR is in the game this is very often foreshadowing for an unsatisfying sexlife of the main couple.
 
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Zulfiqar

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Quality stuff so far but man I can't stand dream sequences, I guess it's there to communicate that our protagonist's subconscious desires are twisted and he's a cuck but like that's kinda the whole thing already? You literally have a choice to tell her not to camwhore, lol.
 
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Viviny

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Game Developer
Feb 14, 2025
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Hi!
Yamato being a "quick shot" and Mio not being satisfied at the start was not what I wanted to the player to think (at least here, this early), my bad. I aimed to make Yamato just a "normal" guy in bed. No small/giant dick, Not quick/long time fucking. Just a guy resting some time after cuming. I also stopped the first scene at the blowjob to not rush the player with a long scene at the start.

I'll try to add a flow chart for the version 0.4, making it easier to navigate/replay through the game.

For the pace in video/calls I don't really know of to fix this for now. How it works in code is that the message shows, stay some time (3s), then hide. What happens when I allow clicks? Messages are overlapping...
I could change it to make it works, but I would have to delete the auto text...
I'll try my best to find a solution
 

Sarah Ali

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Sep 14, 2023
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Hello everyone, Creator of the game here c:
I'm here to have a dialogue with you about the game.

I planned to create a save slot for the version 1.2, I wanted to have some feedback first.

For the gaming experience, I initially chose not to add a forward button.
I did this because I thought it was unnecessary...
I was wrong here... (◞‸ ◟)
I'll release a patch to add this feature in the coming days.

About the NTR part of the game (and the tag situation):
As of version 1.0, there is no NTR/NTS content, Even though you can tell which direction the game is heading.
I initially wanted to release the first versions of the game only on Itch.io to get feedback.
I wanted to publish the game on Zone once the story was more developed, And once the features were more polished.
It's a bit sad that I didn't have control over this, but it's fine.

I also wanted to know if you guys are here for the NTR/NTS or the Vanilla.
I want to create an NTR/NTS focused game. But if you really want more Vanilla, please tell me.

I'll read all the comments and reply when needed.
I will try my best to create a better game.
English is not my first language—sorry about that (っ- ‸ - ς)

Have a nice day!
The best bet for you would be to include both vanilla (full story) and NTR (full story) routes at an early stage so that it would cater to both groups of fetishists Otherwise there's gonna be a war in the comment, and you won't like it. Make the routes optional from early story. If they choose NTR route they will have NTR for the rest of the VN, and vice versa. If you're not satisfied with this suggestion, then just make a full VN with either vanilla or NTR and then make your next VN project with the fetish which you haven't covered here
 

Suntar

Newbie
Jul 29, 2018
98
329
Hi!
Yamato being a "quick shot" and Mio not being satisfied at the start was not what I wanted to the player to think (at least here, this early), my bad. I aimed to make Yamato just a "normal" guy in bed. No small/giant dick, Not quick/long time fucking. Just a guy resting some time after cuming. I also stopped the first scene at the blowjob to not rush the player with a long scene at the start.
Hey, thanks for the reply.
I completely understand stopping the scene at the blowjob. Makes perfect sense for pacing the game.
The self-deprecation and guilt is my problem. Maybe make that optional. Instead of Yamato apologizing via text again, give the player the option to apologize, or reference how much Mio seemed to enjoy his oral attention while waiting for his dick.

To answer your earlier post asking for feedback:

I like vanilla+NTS content the most. Basically NTS scene where the two watch the video together, or she shows him pics while they have sex, and they try some new stuff that one of the bulls introduced to them (like the Maid outfit).

Cheating/hard NTR isn't my cup of tea. I do like sex scenes of a girl getting fucked into submission, but I'd rather see them in an NTS/vanilla context.

Most important in a phone game to me is immersion. That's what they're best for. Really like your PoV sex scenes, but MC having a pre-set name is kinda breaking all that immersion again.
 
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Kekekerkek

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not a big fan of "dream" scenes but the updates is still nice, does asking or doing nothing lock us in cheating or netorase path?
 
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