Honestly, it's not a bad start and I liked how it started with the MC's life falling apart all in one day. From the moment the MC hits the bar, however, it all goes downhill from there.
I know it's early, but ffs, the MC goes from one failed relationship right into another. I thought it might be more of a "hit it and get it" kind of scenario, but within 24hrs, the MC is right back into a serious relationship with some random hookup.
I love how right before the MC leaves the hotel room, he turns to the reader and says "okay, from now on you will be making the decisions for me" and right off the bat I am like "NO! Don't agree with this trainwreck of idea!" but of course, you have no choice. In fact, you NEVER have a choice. I played the first two updates and there was not even 1 choice. Crazy.
And then there is the whole "Landlady" "Tenant" bs. All the dev has to do to totally make this perfect is to add a sandbox, some point and click to clean up a room or some equally lame task and add a phone that does nothing but texting.
Anyway, I am sure this is going to appeal to a certain demographic, but it's just not for me.