VN - Ren'Py - My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

Chapter two killed the plot and the game for me and a lot of people.
At this point it doesn't even remotely make sense anymore, even for a porn game, that's saying something.
Don"t even waste your time, it's just one of those generic cuck game you played ad nauseam

I don’t usually write reviews—in fact, this is my first one. I did try to write one in the past, but it wasn’t approved. The point is: a game has to be really well made to make me take five minutes of my time to write this.

I’ve been on this platform for 8 years and I use and enjoy it a lot. However, until this game, I hadn’t found anything that made me sit for hours just reading dialogues—sometimes even forgetting about the sexual scenes altogether. This is the perfect balance. The quality of the script, the depth of the characters, and the way the story unfolds show the careful, intelligent work behind it. It’s not a game for everyone, but the joy lies in how this story is told.
Wonderful.

Story/Script: 10/10
Renders: 9/10
Characters: 10/10

Reviewed at Chapter 2. I really enjoyed the first instalment here because the storytelling and "cinematography" was excellent, and I'm delighted to say that the second release did not disappoint. This episode takes a much darker turn, but it also has some really nice moments as well, the setup of which were completely unexpected. This builds on what we already had, with more intrigue, more hot sex, some questions answered, but more definitely asked. The writing and graphics are superb, and there will be a proofreading update to come, I'm sure, it's just time ran a little short coming up to release date this time round.

FIVE STARS!
An outstanding story of psychological and sexual manipulation, and emotional tension — centered on the brutal humiliation of a man in front of his wife, who does everything in her power to protect him, yet ends up awakening a deep, uncontrollable inner slut.

Two unforgettable, mysterious scenes stand out: Vivian’s secret hook up in the backyard — which, I believe, she agreed to in a desperate attempt to shield her husband from further pain — and the night she spends in Christian’s room. Based on the muffled argument through the door, she may have tried to resist… until she lost all control...

Priceless!

She calls it a physical and biological reaction — a way to make sense of what she did, and to excuse the shame.
And then — the return home with her husband: stunning!

Just like the facial expressions, the glances, the unspoken tension when no one is watching — it’s a masterpiece within a masterpiece.

And the pain... it hits you like a punch to the gut, like being run over by a train. A brutal and beautiful NTR story. A true masterpiece. May it always preserve its tension and mystery — without ever giving in.

My Husband's Boss [Ch.1] – A Kinetic Novel That Actually Surprised Me

Alright, I'll be honest — I'm usually not into kinetic novels.
I prefer games where my choices matter. I like having control over what happens to the characters, especially if I get emotionally invested. Whether it's avoiding a bad ending, chasing a lewd scene, or protecting someone — I want to decide. Kinetic novels take that control away, so I normally knock off a star because of that.

But this one? This one changed my mind. For the first time, I'm giving a kinetic novel a full 5 stars.

Here's why:

Storytelling
The writing is top-notch. But what really sets it apart is how well the story is presented. It's not just reading walls of text — it's brought to life with visuals and sounds. When a character does something, you see it, you hear it. It's immersive and dynamic, not just a slideshow.

Characters
These aren't your typical one-note VN characters. They have depth, emotion, and personality. Their facial expressions, body language, and dialogue all come together to make them feel real. You'll laugh, get mad, feel bad for them — or hate them. And that's a rare thing in this genre.

Visuals
While it's not AAA-level graphics, it does a lot with what it has. Body proportions are realistic and appealing. The female lead? Gorgeous and sexy. No over-the-top anatomy — just well-designed and naturally hot.

Scenes
The story kicks off a bit fast, but the erotic scenes are hot. And the NTR? Yeah… that one hits like a freight train. Normally, I'd want to be able to avoid something like that through choices — but honestly, not having control made it more emotionally intense. It worked.

Final Thoughts
I highly recommend giving this one a try, even if you're usually not into kinetic novels.

✍ Personal Note:
I went into this with low expectations because I'm just not a kinetic novel guy. But damn — this one caught me off guard in the best way. The emotional punch, the realism, the presentation… it all clicked.
Still wish I had choices, but hey — credit where it's due.

Updated for Chapter 2:

I hate to lower a score, but without spoiling much...the progression moved along much faster than I had anticipated. . This is supposed to be a five-chapter story, but at the rate things are going, it doesn't seem like there's much room left for that kind of pacing, unless there are some pretty big plot twists in the pipeline. Additional partners were also added to the mix, in a way that felt like more of a detour than a natural progression.

I'm not optimistic that the next chapter will bring back the tension or the believable sequences of events (the way that Vivian's date with Christian ended was...pretty far-fetched, IMO).

Original review follows:

I'm normally not interested in kinetic novels, because the writing really has to step up to compensate for the loss of agency. And AVN writing usually isn't very good. This one is different. The author here either has more life experience than most of the people who tackle these kinds of projects, or they're better at imagining the life of a thirtysomething married couple who are drifting away from each other.

And there's a narrative told in between the lines. That's right, kids, when you have a decent story structure populated by characters with more than one dimension, there become blanks that the reader fills in all on their own. Blanks that they *want* to fill in. This is literally how people get invested in a narrative. They start contemplating what a person meant when they said "this*, or wondering what they were thinking about when they were looking at *that*.

At the same time, the dev doesn't feel the need to slap some text on every render. There's no narrator or internal monologue blathering on and grinding the pacing to a halt. No one is telling when they should be showing, or explaining things that don't need to be articulated, like "Then Bob sat down" when you can already see "Bob" sitting down.

There's actually a moderate amount of visual storytelling, like the wife's tattoos and piercings that suggest a more colorful past. Maybe she feels like her current life is dull by comparison? And just like that, you're thinking about the story. You're filling in blanks. You want answers. You want to see what happens next. You start developing theories about *this* and *that*, and you want to find out if they're correct, or if the the author will surprise you.

Maybe the action got going a little too quickly, before the player could get properly invested. You could argue either way. It might be helpful if we could see a few flashbacks to show how the wife and her husband got together and what keeps them together. That's about the only flaw I see here, and it's subjective.

My Husband's Boss [Ch.1] review

Gonna keep it short and simple and just point out why this one is unique.

I'll start with my only criticism of this VN: the obscene amount of disk space that is allocated to panoramic views of "character experiencing emotions", and it moves way to slowly for my tastes. Still pictures would have sufficed and saved something like 4gb of disk space, but this weakness is fairly easy to forgive when compared to the stuff this dev gets absolutely right.

This is visual storytelling done right. When you can convey a story meaning to a character looking at something, with no text, that's when you know this dev does it right. It's subtle, psychological and resembles high-brow films. So much is said without it being spelled out. Any dev who thinks it's a good idea to accompany a render with the line "she looks disappointed" should study this work of art.
The writing is absolutely top-notch; it conveys what it needs to without extra words and the dev shows a deep understaning of the "cuck" mindset (as I imagine it to be).
MC is a cucked loser, but at the same time compassionate and an all-around decent human being, and more importantly: He's NOT an idiot. The cheating wife is actually trying really hard to be a nice person too, which is amazing character portrayal. Yeah, she's secretly a slut and loves cumming on Chad's big cock, but she hates herself for it and she tries really hard to suppress her instincts. The characters show a beautiful and highly believable battle with suppressed emotions. They behave like real people, in real relationships! The amount of 'porn logic' applied to the story is the absolute minimum required to tell a story like this. Believability is the central focus and the dev succeeds magnificently at it. I'll sound like an idiot for saying this, but it's deep, man.
I'm not a fan of the NTR genre in general, but when characters are this good, anything works.

This one is special and you should try it.

It was a bit short, but very immersive. It's a shame that there are no direct selection items, so it feels more like a short drama than a game, but overall, the content and rendering are great. I hope there are constant updates without stopping.

God damn u know what ur doing SC Stories . You got it keeeep it uppp .
Buildup 10/10
Characters 10/10
Update speed 6/10 not nagging tho
Story n/a but until now its a gem thats for sure.
Developer 10/10 my guy knows how shit is done

Absolutely fantastic storytelling. The show and not tell approach is perfect and the cgs are amazing. Definitely one of the darker NTR stories I've seen in the sense that it feels much more down to earth and really draws you into the story and characters so you feel the impact that much more.

I wish there was a bit more on the audio side of things, some music here and there as well as sfx for the spicier scenes(I know there's some which were fantastic but most of them are silent). The pacing for the first explicit scene happens a bit too fast. Feels a little 0-100 as there isn't enough buildup or context to feel plausible.

Still, amazing VN 5/5 massive thanks and can't wait for more!

Absolutely well-crafted start of a story. Visually it's superb and the narrative is a traditional NTR, however unlike most NTR it's not egregious or caricatural, the characters have depth, and you understand both sides. Looking forward to seeing how this story will progress.

Respect to the developer, for doing this pro-bono and their development skills shows with how well the characters are modelled and animated.

Narratively, this game is one of the best you can find right now. Well, it's not really a game. There are no choices, no real player interaction, no gameplay. But if you're interested in a good NTR story, you should check this game out. You'll find few NTR stories better told than these.
The characters are very well-crafted and believable. The use of storytelling resources is excellent. It uses off-camera when appropriate, silences, unspoken words, facial expressions, etc.
Anyway, if you like NTR, the best thing you can do is play it. Or, rather, read it. You won't be playing anything. But if you like immersing yourself in a good story, you'll enjoy it. A lot.
Excellent work.

First of all thank you for making and updating this game !
What a masterpiece this is... This is how true NTR feels like.Ohh my god it hits like a truck its too good.I mean i dont know what else there is to say other than magnificent...And i cant wait for the upcoming content.
If you are a fun of ntr themed games dont even think about it just play this.

Didn’t think this one would hit as hard as it did. The way she goes from resisting to slowly giving in felt disturbingly real—and hot as hell. It’s not just porn, it messes with your head a bit too. Twisted in all the right ways.

This has gotta be the most awesome shit I've read, as far as NTR plot goes. Usually anything within that genre approaches the plot with either horrible pacing or completely fumbles the idea. I was so drawn in and was so immersed, it never felt generic to me. And then get me started with Vivian's design, it's perfect. Kudos to the dev who made this game. Looking forward to the next updates.
My only gripe is that i hope we get to see the wife's perspective or include something of that sort during the first scene. That shit was too hot to pass on. That would totally up the scale

Let me start of by saying this is a very well made game. The animations are amazing. I just have a huge qualm with the storytelling. In my opinion, the start progresses way too fast. The wife meets the boss that day and in the house tour, immediately has sex with the boss, while still being deeply in love with her husband. There is barely any context to how this situation happened. It is so unrealistic. If she is that in love with the husband, surely she would protest even a little bit before going straight to sex. Afterwards, every interaction between her, her husband and his boss is simply unbelievable. I ended up skipping a lot of it. I'm looking forward to how her relationship with other characters ends up, but the boss story does not feel believable to me. I'd suggest a little more context or just a slightly slower burn for the wife/boss relation.

I gave it a 4/5 rating, as I don't want my review to impact the rating, but I could not, in my right mind, give it a 5/5 (yet). The story could use a little work.

I had already played this game last year, but I quickly got through it, but I really liked the narrative. I played it again and it got even better. The creator of this game is one of the few who masters and understands what eroticism is; he seems like someone who knows the bare minimum about audiovisual narrative. He knows that sometimes suggesting and leaving something hidden is more erotic than doing something expository, it is more provocative than rubbing sex in your face, which is the main problem with most games. He creates a narrative that I think is ideal here and should become a model. Congratulations on the project; if you continue on this path, you will be one of the greats in the genre.

this game is fucking crazy, there's a lot more in the future updates, we can see in the previews of future updates that vivian a good wife is becoming more of a slut, destroying their 22 years of marriage.
actually vivian's husband is the real chill guy or cuck or coward, when i am playing this game i got angry on christian and vivian but this guy still allows her to get fucked by the boss, truely this game is not for weak hearted people or for people how had a very bad past like getting cheated by GF or wife.

This is not a game, this is a work of art. A unique thing, so to speak. The content, the way of presentation, the models, the dialogues are all top notch. Everything worked out - my respects.
A huge thank you to the author!

The only way, this visual novel could be better, is if it was from the boss pov. Anyway one of the best, of its kind. The way the boss can mog the mc, is so satisfying. The poor dude is so terrified, of losing his job, he can not, fathom anything worse, such as losing his pride or wife. Truly good vn