I love the idea and I Wish more xj9 art existed but you may want to... clean up the artwork a bit more as you continue. If you can't get better artwork then focus on the text. Text-based games with simple graphics exist and well-written erotica with only a few images might be a good option for you.
I realy like the idea, i like Jenny a lot, but the art ... Sorry brother, I don't want to belittle you or anything, it's just not working for me, if you know what I mean
It needs work for sure, but if you focus on the writing and find some artists to help you/improve yourself it could be good.
watching this thread for now and would love to see more! if you ever need beta testers, feedback or ideas message me.