Yeah, looks nice. Let me give you some tips
Watch the finger on the right hand. It goes through the hair. In this situation, you can either change the hand pose or the hair shape.
Click on the Head and go to the Poses panel in the bottom right. There you navigate through the structure and find the child item "Eyes". On the right side find "Eyes closed" and close the eyes a little bit. Because nobody really opens the eyes wide like this.
You could also use a spotlight and point it to your character coming from your camera. In this way you can eliminate the shadows which happen on the viewers side and bright up the character a bit.
You will have to push up the lumen to ~20.000. Ofc this depends on the distance, beam angle etc.
But still it look great for an early work, keep going!
Cheers