VN - Ren'Py - My Loyal Wife [v0.3] [NTR MANIAC]

Why would the wife give her husband’s best friend a blowjob when she hasn’t given one to her husband in a long time and has no logical reason to do so? It doesn’t relate at all to the purpose of the relationship between the FMC and the bull, which is to have a child. Plus, I’m sure there’s no man in the world who wouldn’t climax after a handjob at some point. Even if the reason was not reaching orgasm, she could have given a titjob. Why give a blowjob when she dislikes it so much that she hasn’t done it for her husband in a long time? Nothing in this game makes sense—each update is filled with logical flaws

Also, why do we have three NTR scenes on the NTS path? Finger in the ass, blowjob, cum on the face! That’s enough; I don’t even want to talk about the simplicity and lack of tension in the sexual scenes and etc...

But the FMC is really hot. If it ever gets reworked, I’d play it again, and if they fix the logical flaws, I’d give it a high rating

3 stars, because I think it's the dev first game, so I don't want to be too harsh.

Renders are average, nothing really out of ordinary. The girl is cute, but again, quite common really.

My gripe is with the story. It doesn't make any sense, in a nutshell, you share your wife with other men because there's almost no female in the world anymore and you need to "save it". And because of the introduction, there's no build up which is a requirement in an NTR/NTS game.

You feel nothing because there's no attachment to the characters.

You just share your wife just because. No bargaining, no danger, they both accept, just because. It could have been the actual story, where a couple whose man possesses the rarest resource in this new world, struggle against men, his own perversion, and his wife, who is now seen as nothing but a piece of meat.

The game suffer also from extremely short update. The last one, 0.3, was over in 10 minutes.

At this time it's just an average VN. I would give it 3 stars at vest but I'm bumping it up one because of the 1 stars, which I feel should be reserved for broken VN's that don't work or are buggy.

This VN works, the characters models are good and the MC is attractive. The problem is the story is a bit weak atm v.03, it's very basic and average.

To me it would work better as a female protagonist game and get rid of the husband altogether. NTR doesn't bother me at all as I am an adult and realize this is all fake and based in a fantasy world unlike the NTR haters.

Aside from the movie theater scene this is just basic and the writer need to step up.

Good Luck Dev

My Ratings for [v0.3]

Pros:
-Nice renders
-Not boring (Action Starts Pretty Quick)
-Story is starting off good (Different then others)
- Nice Characters

Cons:
-Slow Buildup
- Updates are Short

Must say i like the Story and characters, played a Hentai Game with similar storyline and I loved it, hope this game goes in that direction.
The Updates are short , but regular, the characters are Great and Hot.
If the Updates where longer then I would even give 5 Stars.
The Gameplay is easy and there is no senseless walking around.
Hoping to see more of this Game.
Worth the Download.

Good NTR game. Liking the story and the animations. Hope it continues with the small animation sex scenes. I am enjoying the dynamic between the MC and his wife. I would like the pacing of the story to be more spaced out. Things are progressing in a very fast paced manner. A bit more of a dialogue scenes to establish some chemistry and context between the characters would make the game better.

Good game I hope it continues to improve in all aspects because I see potential to do so especially in the sex scenes where I would like to see very intense sex scenes that will surprise us all to see it.

Poor quality.
Art is average
Plot is rough
Sex is a pure checkbox exercise, no eroticism or whatsoever
Delivery quality extremely disappointing.

I cannot really spend any good word on this game.
Put in ignore list...

It definitely doesn't deserve more than 1 star.
Everything is weak: the writing, rendering, story logic, relationships, etc.
The worst writing I've ever seen. The logic of the woman's actions, which is very strange, suddenly kissed the bull's dick!"

The story’s got an intriguing, unique theme that sets it apart from other games. Sure, there are parts that are pretty funny, and I’m guessing that humor was intentionally thrown in there to lighten things up a bit. At least it helps the game stand out from the usual stuff. I can’t really predict where the story’s heading, but I think I’ll choose to trust the dev for now.

I first checked out the game’s initial version but decided to wait until the second one came out before dropping a review. And I gotta say, I was pleasantly surprised. You can tell the dev is really putting in the work and improving. The render quality? Honestly, it’s pretty damn good. Everything looks polished, and the visuals definitely help with immersion.

Gameplay-wise, I haven’t hit any bugs so far. It’s also obvious that the dev has worked on their grammar seriously, the first version was a mess on that front, so I’m glad they tightened that up. It’s those little things that make a difference.

All in all, I’m enjoying what I’ve seen so far. Here’s hoping the dev keeps pushing forward with the updates and doesn’t disappoint us with future releases.

The writing is the worst I've seen in any of the many games in this site, and games with poor writing are the majority, so that's saying a lot.
If you have the mind of a 12 years old, that's to say, you don't care about the writing and all you need are, at best, average renders to fap then by all means go ahead and have fun with this one.

I like it and it has potential. Renders are okay I can see the dev is improving himself. Story is triggering some new kinks for me. I can only see it getting better.

Story has some funny parts, but I believe they were done on purpose. There is a big difference in the dialogues between v0.1 and v0.2 and you can tell he is trying to get better at this.

This is by no means "good." I'd probably rate it 2.5. But want to counteract the other negative review here. This is hardly close to the worst games on the site. Is it the first game he's played on F95Zone? This game is par for the course on quality here, so you've really got to grade with that curve in mind. Especially in the NTR genre where the quality is particularly bad.

I'd rate this better than at least 65% of that genre on here. That still doesn't make it a good game. But when "A Wife's ____" and "___ Phone" carbon copy sorry excuses for games on here are pulling in 3-4 stars, an average 1-star rating here is more than a bit unfair.

Some may find and love this one and give it ratings that are entirely too high. At which time I'll adjust mine. There are possibilities here on this game to improve though, so I don't want to see it with a 1-star death sentence right out the gate.

The animations and renders are poor. There are hardly any side characters side characters. Hardly any interactions with your 'wife', choice mechanics are barely present there is misplaced dialogue, the and the content and story is unbelievable and offensive. The worst thing I have ever played.