VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - My Model Daughter Remastered [v0.05] [WickedGames]

Works based on taboo always strongly stimulate eroticism.
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I like works such as AWAM, Mirror Mine, etc.
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Honestly, I misunderstood that Dev abandoned the MDM.
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I can't deny that the development speed is disappointing.
But I'm glad he's moving on.

A review for version 0.5.
Let me start the game by asking - why is the game of this length nearly 5GB? There is nowhere near enough content to justify explain why it's so big.

Pros:
- Great input for relations, age and names
Being able to customize your own characters, relations and such is great.
Obviously, she is meant to be your daughter but regardless good way to get around restrictions and add customization

- Pretty attractive female lead
All things considered, she is very pretty. She's enjoyable to look at.

- Branching paths
I like the fact that the game has two paths. Adds a lot of replay value to the game. Offers a choice between being a complete asshole and a father figure.
The dark path so far has been pretty... well, dark. In its way, it's very realistic. Unforgiving and has actual consequences.
Which is the way it should be.
Lighter path is not yet done.

Cons
- Genetic story
I understand that it's relatively hard to construct a story and justify, why a father would suddenly want to fuck around with their daughter. Sure.
But it's yet again the same deal. Father who has lost contact with their family finds his daughter and eventually makes moves.
Oh no! Surely next plotline for the game isn't going to be the seduction plot, followed by separation since daughter's mother catches up!
The game needs to find its identity... and I do genuinely think the dark/light path separation is a great way to do it.
Unforgiving, dominant, possibly humiliating relation for dark path.
Loving, caring and seductive relation for light path.

- Render quality
I am personally not really bummed about it. However, I do have to acknowledge the fact that the game for some reason has rather grainy and lower quality renders that it actually shouldn't have for its huuuuge size.

- Inappropriate dialogue
Please my dude. Check the grammar. Please don't EVER put 'wtf' or 'lol' into an actual dialogue. Nobody in real life talks in shortened terms.

It is one of the most realistic games! Personally, I like the dark path, but for those who will see the game for the first time, know that there is nude and fantasy content on the other path as well. Good luck to the developer!

One of the generic and boring VNs. Another one of the generic and boring VNs. It almost like some guy learned how to make simple renders in DAZ3d - and that's it, here is your "game". Story is boring and poorly written, sound and gameplay are absent, renders are mediocre, and their quantity doesn't mean much. Why does it exist? Just as an experience project for this developer?
v0.05

Let me start this review of v0.05 off by saying this game has a bunch of potential if it decided to focus down to 2 to 3 paths and didn't split the developers focus so much. But let me get into the issues i had with it. Firstly the game is absurdly large for how little actual content there is. The game is almost 5 gigs which is huge for a visual novel of this length. You'd think the size would be justified by high quality renders but often theyre blurry and not very impressive. The routes lack much content and your actions often have either seemingly 0 consequences or extremes that make no logical sense. The plot is rather generic and nothing we haven't seen before. Character design is rather generic for background characters with the only well designed characters being the two leads. Current Sexual content felt lacking but this could be made up in future updates. Overall id say this game has major potential if the developer put the time into it but right now its nothing special.

This game is a rollercoaster of emotions and expectations. It's really one of extreme opposites:

• Titled and awkward dialogue that's full of grammatical errors, but also has a surprising amount of levity and creativity at times.
• A pretty standard story you've seen a thousand times, that can suddenly go so far off the rails I had to get up and take a break to process what the fuck happened.
• Generic and familiar characters models of average quality used for some characters, where as other characters look fantastic and have a real variety of style.
• Multiple paths that are desperately underdeveloped, while the main path has a significant level of content for a game being developed part-time for the past year.

It's a pretty rough game in places, but also has a ton of promise in other areas. The main girl is probably my favourite D character ever. Definitely looking forward to future updates.

One of my favorite games recently, it fascinates me. Not only does it have an attractive plot, but the model is also very beautiful. It deserves five-star praise. Finally, I hope it can be updated faster

I'm enjoying both the light and the dark paths. Games with diverging storylines are difficult to maintain unless you manage to get them to converge again. I'll be interested to see how you pull it off,

after playing for over 1 hour I have to say first of all the father doesn't have any emotions no guilt no nothing they all feel like robots second we've really seen the same story over and over again it really could've been better

v 0.045

I enjoyed what was there... Meaning that it still feels like there isn't much content.

I was excited at the first but it didn't really come up again, even when it seemed like it would be opportunistic. That's just my taste though.

I think I'd like this more when it's done, unless it goes the fluff route. Meaning a bunch of small detail day to day life without any real plot. Many of these types do that.

Well, I've just finished version 0.045 and I gotta say it's not as bad as I was hoping it would be based on some of the posts on this thread - actually, I quite enjoyed it. The writing is above average compared to the vast majority of VNs out there.

And there's a very realistically portrayed rape scene that will definitely please those who are into it.

Overall I think it's a very promising game, the art and the theme are very much to my taste.

Ugh, where to start with this...


- Very bad and rushed boring story
- Choices that are not choices because "romantic path isn't done yet"
- cringe conversations you would see in a porn movie
- grainie pictures that hurt the eyes (in a remaster? Welp, you know you have done everything wrong, if a remaster has that bad quality.)

I would say something positive to make a good end to this review - but there isn't anything to tell, sadly.

Make your own decision of if its worth the download or not.

Amazing content...cant wait for future updates...i hope there would be more dreams and fantasies with daughter on your future updates please...i love the incest vibes to this game..im a bit of an incest game lover myselt..more power

v0.04

First of all, don't be put off by a few people saying the renders look bad, I'm guessing they haven't played much beyond the very beginning. While some of the earliest renders might look a little grainy at times, it quickly improves to the point of looking very crisp and beautiful. You can tell a lot of effort has gone into things like poses, facial expressions, making scenes look natural and the character models themselves (especially the daughter, god she's beautiful).

The game is still in its early stages at the time of writing this review, so most of the paths don't have a lot going on yet since as of right now, the developer is mostly focusing on the 'Romance' path, but other paths like full on corruption/lust and a mix between love and lust are also planned as is evident by some of the choices presented to the player. Most of these choices have only one available option for now, because like I said, the other paths have yet to be developed.

From what I can tell so far, the story has a good flow to it. It doesn't feel rushed, but I also don't think this is going to be a slow burn. It doesn't take the MC very long to have some "inappropriate" thoughts about the daughter(and vice versa), but it looks like the player will be the one to decide how strongly/quickly the MC will act on those thoughts once development has made some more progress regarding the other paths.

If the developer continues with the same (or even better) quality, it won't take long for this game to become a 'must play' and I would definitely recommend at least giving it a try to see for yourself. While there are a few issues with the grammar, I wouldn't go as far as to call it "Engrish". I've played games that straight up gave me a headache with how poor the grammar was, and this game isn't nearly as bad as some of those. That being said, a few things will need some proofreading and tweaking in the future, but the developer seems to be actively looking for a bit of help with that so I'm hoping the kinks will get ironed out soon enough.

I suppose I could subtract a point until some of the grammar gets sorted out, but because I see the potential this game holds (and because the developer has shown he's looking to fix the grammar with some help), I've decided to just go ahead and give it a 5 star rating.

Current Version: V0.04

My first game rating ever and its for one of the most underrated game I've played! This game definitely deserves a lot more attention.

1. Story (5/5)
2. Originality (4.5/5)
3. Renders (4/5) - Constantly improving
4. Sound (5/5) - Dev takes the time to add sound effects and music!
5. Playability (5/5) - no bugs and game choices are easy to choose if you pay attention to the dialogue.
6. Grammar (4/5) - Constantly improving!

Story telling and renders improve in every version. Although this genre and premise is not new, the story and characters are truly unique.

Smooth scene transition is one of the hidden gems of this game. Like a movie, the Dev takes the players from scene to scene. (unlike how other games do it which is often time kind of abrupt.)

Dev also takes the time to interact with players and take criticisms well to improve his game.

Don’t miss out on this gem and give it a try!

Review based on 0.4:
I waited until now to play, because i have been disappointed too many times by first releases which turned to a mess by second update or which got even abandonned after 2-3 updates. Now i finally tried it, and i just can say:

WHOW - There's a new gem out there.

Even there are not all paths done yet, and therefore you are kind of forced to use certain choices, the game itself is really nice.
The plot setup sounds plausible, and the renderings are well done.
For now it looks to be a new "should have played"-game.
I am looking forward to get more content and to see where this leads

Version: v0.03

This game is still in its early stages of development, but its current rating makes it criminally underrated.

The plot itself isn't the most original, or fleshed out yet, but the developer has done a lot with it thus far. Other than a couple early comments that I found out of place (the daughter with aggressive sexual thoughts about the MC in the opening scene was too fast IMO) the story progression and relationship building has been pretty realistic. The daughter's personality and dialogue is actually convincing as it's written, and the story has focused on the father-daughter relationship instead of other characters we don't care about.

Although it started out a bit raw, the renders in the latest version are spectacular. The quality itself is strong, but it's the posing and facial expressions that are so impressive. None of this consistently flat expression and standstill poses you see in too many other games - there's actually an effort to make each shot unique. The level of detail in some of the shots is better than I've seen in any other games (example with use of shadows). Seems the dev may actually have experience with photography and modeling too.

There's been a good number of lewd's already with a nice balance between not making us wait ages for content while also not jumping into everything too fast like other games. I wish the one dream had more realistic proportions (you'll see what I mean if you play it) but it was still welcome. The daughter character's design is perfect, so I hope the dev doesn't change anything about her moving forward.

Looks like there will be multiple paths developed, with a wide range of options for all tastes and deviants - I plan to play all, from love path to sick sick puppy path. It's still a bit early, but so far this game is Father-Daughter game done right!

The story got better, though for only the dark route. It was great on how what would really happen when corrupting a character, who's very close to you. The consequences really showed in the game, it may feel overwhelming but hey, that's what make a good story then just do this and that then the character forgive you. The sentences improved when I last read them, more fluent to read, and not tongue twisting to say. minor problem is dialogue being said by the wrong character. But overall, really good.

Version: 0.045

Well, maybe its a thing about game concept, these renders seem to have been done in 1 minute. I cant belive these renders took 8 hours.

Story progression is quite easy, is one of those games where the charactrs are biased and pretty muchc inclined to anything.
IT is a preview demo or something cause the actual introduction may be konger then the interesting part of the game.

So, i think this is a Christmas 2024 game. But with this reder quality...

0.04
The fact that being a straight forward game still has more content "outside reality" than in reality makes the game automatically terrible. For some reason you discover somepictures on her phone and there you get to see the girl naked. You can kind of do it when The Mc uses his Xray perfect imagination. You can also do it during a dream where he has sex with her.
A game so straight forward doesn't even need, it could use that production time and include it as part of the reality and the plot just a little later.

But anyway it is done,and like many other games that do this sex in dreams thing, end up being terrible, this one, having a low tier graphics card for the rendering already is at a massive disadvantage.
And since I have already seen the main LI naked and being pounded, and the scene is not good, I dont see this game recovering from this. But i wish for the sake of redheads