VN Ren'Py My New Girlfriend [Ch. 4] [CircleGames]

[DovahKing111]

After playing the game, in many moments there is a feeling that the dev in text leaves himself a reserve for the future in terms of making the game not kinetic, but inserting a choice into it.
"You're pretty sure you won't be jealous, etc." to which MC always replies that "come on, tease me harder, i like it".

I'm not a fan of NTS, i don't like it at all, but i don't tell the dev how to make his game, it's just my opinion and he wrote on the front page that while there is no choice in the game, and it is purely NTS - the keyword FOR A WHILE! If the dev adds a choice to the game after completing the NTS ending, it will be a big plus, the choice can attract a lot of people to this game!
For example, at the moment when Vi invite MC to the mall and Maki offers him to take a photo of her bare breasts in exchange for that he will not go with Vi, the paths can opens here:
- to refuse the offer of Maki: vanilla-love path
and here, depending on the choice, invite Sai to the "show" with you in several pahts:
- let Sai watсh(or not at all) a little time and then banish him away: vanilla path
- Sai watсh for a long time and takes a photo: NTS path
- Sai can do "too much more": cucold path
- agree and stay with Maki: NTR path for Vi, because she will meet Sai in the mall and give him a "private show", about which MC will find out or suspect on "Instafup".

I emphasize once again that this is just my subjective opinion, i'm not trying to influence the development of the game, but adding different paths would make the game cooler and more interesting!

As i already wrote, NTS is not mine, and when a seemingly "good girl" turns into a turbo-slut in front of everyone's eyes, it becomes not interesting.

yup i stopped when Anya starts having thoughts of turning into a slut from being a innocent girl, overnight. so everyone around you is just gonna turn into a deviant slut that wants to bang everyone? lame and boring cuck logic. i tried to give it a chance to see if some girls would be off limits to other dudes and be exclusive to the player, especially those related to the mc, but no, doesn't appear to be heading in that direction....also think they missed an opportunity with Violet with a romance, love path....but the dev needs to corrupt them ALL.....

....she starts out as the sweet, innocent archetype girl and she constantly says things like "i can stop if you don't like it" or "i don't want to upset you. never." and at least many times she always wants to double check with the mc if something is ok for her to do but the player has no control or choice or say in anything so....which makes the game boring as well because it makes the mc feel like he is just blowing in the wind being passive about everything. what kind of man would want his mom hanging around a nefarious slut like sonia who parades your moms ass around town for all the men to see?? and the mc just says "as long as she's happy" lmao, completely fucking useless mc. and i'm sure that is only the introduction of your mom becoming a whore in this game.....the game needs choices badly and split paths love or NTR paths for the girls as some of the girls were actual good girls and it's silly/ridiculous they turn into insatiable sluts....had a lot of potential because of the art and the girls are hot but i'm tapping out of this one..

 

[hayrullahdelisi]

While i always support the freedom of speech, i simply can't understand people who are complaining about NTS game in a NTS game. I mean you can complain about writing, art style etc but complaining about NTS while dev uses the word NTS 3 times even in the description is nonsense to me. Like what were you expecting?

For keeping some characters exclusive stuff, i think i can agree with that. I think dev is playing it too safe to not to piss off fans of specific characters. It is clear all LIs will get NTSed and it is also clear MC will sleep with all of them. None will stay in pure NTS or love path. Anya could stay entirely exclusive to MC while Maki is entirely NTS or vice versa. But it is clear that is not happening. Dev knows if Anya followed love route there would be people who complain about absence of NTS for her and reverse for sole NTS LIs. I think to create a good story you can't give everyone everything, since it makes the game shallow.

This choice of direction makes a linear game even more linear to me, but judging by the number of patreons it definitely paid off for the dev.

One last thing. There are devs who frequently visit this forum and there are ones who don't care about it. This one is the second type. So don't expect anything to change.

 

[CircleGames]

One last thing. There are devs who frequently visit this forum and there are ones who don't care about it. This one is the second type. So don't expect anything to change.

That's not true xD

 

[mistolin]

That's not true xD

omg hiii

 

[CircleGames]

omg hiii

Hi friend

 

[palmtrees89]

I think to create a good story you can't give everyone everything, since it makes the game shallow.

This choice of direction makes a linear game even more linear to me, but judging by the number of patreons it definitely paid off for the dev.

So you're basically saying the dev is trying to give everyone everything, and in the very next sentence you say it's too linear.

Uhh.. logic checks out.

It's a kinetic NTS novel, so yeah it is linear in that sense but CG is certainly not trying to make everyone happy. He's been, so far, creating the game he wants to create. If people enjoy it, cool. If not, also cool. I mean, the game's pretty straight forward since the very beginning, and CG didn't start with 1000 patrons by default.

I feel like the issue people here are having is that they sign up for a game that simply isn't made for them. A kinetic novel with NTS/NTR elements. What it comes down to, imo, is as simple as awesome AI art drawing people towards a game that's just not for them. I don't think there's any rocket science behind this. lol

 

[Klaus Serpens]

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VI's face looks so innocent hahaha in a good way

 

[Sossse]

here´s me just hopeing (copeing) that eric get´s to have fun with anya and his mother BEFORE they get sluttified

 

[hayrullahdelisi]

That's not true xD

Which part is not true? The part i have said people should expect NTS because it is literally in tags?

Or the part where i assume MC will have sex with every single LI and they will all get NTSed? We will see this, and you hold the power over the story. But i guess everyone can see it happening.

Or the part where i said dev barely visits the forum? I think that was a good assumption too since your last comment was on November 14th, three weeks ago.

 

[palmtrees89]

Yes by giving everything everyone you make an incredibly linear story. I already gave an example, Let’s just say you want Anya get NTSed and I want to see them together. If Anya gets both love making scene and NTS scene, we both get what we want in exchange of a story. Because every single character following the same path is boring.

I already said people should be expecting NTS, my point just like others said there is no exclusivity. Not for NTS or for love path.

Edit: Removed cause not worth a threadban. Enjoy your discussions. lol

What you want are different routes, which this is a kinetic novel and as such you just have to ride the train or jump off.

 

[tallman102]

VI's face looks so innocent hahaha in a good way

Yeah,

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[NTRtexts]

I think complaining is a kink/fetish all of itself. It's either people who consumed too much of the media, want the attention or know some people enjoy being called "sick for enjoying NTR/NTS" just like themselves. It's like a weird public service.
EDIT: also, I love that there are no choices. If I like the creator's vision, this way I get more of it faster.

 

[kikomascado]

I don't go on threads of games I don't like to complain about its main themes, but I guess it's not everyone that have the common sense to do so...

 

[ItsNotUs]

yup i stopped when Anya starts having thoughts of turning into a slut from being a innocent girl, overnight. so everyone around you is just gonna turn into a deviant slut that wants to bang everyone? lame and boring cuck logic. i tried to give it a chance to see if some girls would be off limits to other dudes and be exclusive to the player, especially those related to the mc, but no, doesn't appear to be heading in that direction....also think they missed an opportunity with Violet with a romance, love path....but the dev needs to corrupt them ALL.....

....she starts out as the sweet, innocent archetype girl and she constantly says things like "i can stop if you don't like it" or "i don't want to upset you. never." and at least many times she always wants to double check with the mc if something is ok for her to do but the player has no control or choice or say in anything so....which makes the game boring as well because it makes the mc feel like he is just blowing in the wind being passive about everything. what kind of man would want his mom hanging around a nefarious slut like sonia who parades your moms ass around town for all the men to see?? and the mc just says "as long as she's happy" lmao, completely fucking useless mc. and i'm sure that is only the introduction of your mom becoming a whore in this game.....the game needs choices badly and split paths love or NTR paths for the girls as some of the girls were actual good girls and it's silly/ridiculous they turn into insatiable sluts....had a lot of potential because of the art and the girls are hot but i'm tapping out of this one..

I agree with you on almost everything, i wrote that post without finishing the possible content. I liked that Vi teases MC a lot, but didn't cross the line:
- "I even sent those naughty photos to the photographer"
MC heart is beating, he is stunned, then Vi:
- "I was joking, i love teasing you, these photos just for you!"

But Maki take the phone and writes to Vi to send those photos and any other depraved one she wants, it immediately kills interest!
MC thinks that he is deciding something, that he has control over the situation, but in reality everyone decides for him and he’s like that! Lol
Yes, i understand that this is NTS, that’s why i wrote a post about the choice, because the game at first, no matter what is NTS AI, looks good, but at the end of the last update "you" just stop wanting to play it, especially then Anya, after seeing a black dick, immediately turned into a horny slut, although all her life before, she had been a modest, sweet girl!

I concluded for myself that i will not play it for now and if someday the dev adds different paths and choices i'll give it another chance, because it's a shame, it could have turned out to be a really interesting project, but this is just a project for fans of quick corruption and weak MC.
Ok this is their choice, I made my own and i advise to you do the same!

 

[Blades1138]

MC thinks that he is deciding something, that he has control over the situation, but in reality everyone decides for him and he’s like that! Lol

I skipped like half the dialogue, but that's still exactly how I felt about the MC. Even the images are enough to convey this.
NTS isn't really my thing, but I thought it would at least be a proactive choice by the MC and make for an interesting story.
The art and a few hot scenes make up for it so far, but I doubt the intention of the dev was for people to skip the story just to see the good bits.

 

[Dercuillo]

Ok this is their choice, I made my own and i advise to you do the same!

That's the way to go! This kind of AI CG stuff can be fork for an unlimited number of scenario! Shadow of Ambition is the perfect exemple, once you have learned how the AI generation work, the scripting structure can be a copycat of any project and the only important thing left is the writing!

 

[hayrullahdelisi]

I agree with you on almost everything, i wrote that post without finishing the possible content. I liked that Vi teases MC a lot, but didn't cross the line:
- "I even sent those naughty photos to the photographer"
MC heart is beating, he is stunned, then Vi:
- "I was joking, i love teasing you, these photos just for you!"

But Maki take the phone and writes to Vi to send those photos and any other depraved one she wants, it immediately kills interest!
MC thinks that he is deciding something, that he has control over the situation, but in reality everyone decides for him and he’s like that! Lol
Yes, i understand that this is NTS, that’s why i wrote a post about the choice, because the game at first, no matter what is NTS AI, looks good, but at the end of the last update "you" just stop wanting to play it, especially then Anya, after seeing a black dick, immediately turned into a horny slut, although all her life before, she had been a modest, sweet girl!

I concluded for myself that i will not play it for now and if someday the dev adds different paths and choices i'll give it another chance, because it's a shame, it could have turned out to be a really interesting project, but this is just a project for fans of quick corruption and weak MC.
Ok this is their choice, I made my own and i advise to you do the same!

This is the thing i am trying to explain. This game is kinetic, so dev can’t give us choices. Ok, fair enough. But maybe they could give us characters with different paths so we could witness to an interesting story.

I really like NTS, i would love to see unfiltered version of it. But i know there are people who likes more active MC, and i understand it. Technically dev is giving both of us what we want. All LIs get NTSed and MC has sex with all of them. But in reality this approach is only giving us copy paste paths for all characters.

Maki could be entirely hard NTS while Anya is exclusive love interest type of thing. But nope, everyone gets NTS, everyone gets dirty with MC.

Can someone tell me the difference between paths of Ari, Maki, Vi and Anya? They have different physical attributes and different approaches, yes. But in the end MC has sex with all of them and he watches all of them with other men. Maybe if let’s say sharing route for Vi , Love route for Anya, NTS route for Maki and cheating route for Ari were determined paths, we could be talking about an interesting story choice. But no.

 

[ItsNotUs]

This is the thing i am trying to explain. This game is kinetic, so dev can’t give us choices. Ok, fair enough. But maybe they could give us characters with different paths so we could witness to an interesting story.

I really like NTS, i would love to see unfiltered version of it. But i know there are people who likes more active MC, and i understand it. Technically dev is giving both of us what we want. All LIs get NTSed and MC has sex with all of them. But in reality this approach is only giving us copy paste paths for all characters.

Maki could be entirely hard NTS while Anya is exclusive love interest type of thing. But nope, everyone gets NTS, everyone gets dirty with MC.

Can someone tell me the difference between paths of Ari, Maki, Vi and Anya? They have different physical attributes and different approaches, yes. But in the end MC has sex with all of them and he watches all of them with other men. Maybe if let’s say sharing route for Vi , Love route for Anya, NTS route for Maki and cheating route for Ari were determined paths, we could be talking about an interesting story choice. But no.

You know, it would be nice to at least have such an option as you described, that for each girl in the game have is its own scenario, but the problem for many is that this doesn’t even exist!
You were right when you said that all girls have the same scenario. Is this interesting?
A simple choice, even if there were not many paths, but only two paths would make the game more interesting and attractive:
- A strong MC, who fucks all the girls and they love only him, teasing will not change this
- Or as the dev intended, a weak MC (although it seems to him that he is strong) who interacts with girls, but they are also fucked by others
At the same time, we have a choice, you could decide for yourself which of the girls to follow the vanilla path and with whom to sharing path. It was much more interesting!

 

[ItsNotUs]

That's the way to go! This kind of AI CG stuff can be fork for an unlimited number of scenario! Shadow of Ambition is the perfect exemple, once you have learned how the AI generation work, the scripting structure can be a copycat of any project and the only important thing left is the writing!

I don’t know, the dev of the same "Shadows" writes that it takes him a lot of time to code and text. Therefore, his game is purely kinetic, he said that if add the choice and different paths will increase development time significantly.
I’m not a programmer, i don’t know how much time this actually takes.

 

[hayrullahdelisi]

You know, it would be nice to at least have such an option as you described, that for each girl in the game have is its own scenario, but the problem for many is that this doesn’t even exist!
You were right when you said that all girls have the same scenario. Is this interesting?
A simple choice, even if there were not many paths, but only two paths would make the game more interesting and attractive:
- A strong MC, who fucks all the girls and they love only him, teasing will not change this
- Or as the dev intended, a weak MC (although it seems to him that he is strong) who interacts with girls, but they are also fucked by others
At the same time, we have a choice, you could decide for yourself which of the girls to follow the vanilla path and with whom to sharing path. It was much more interesting!

The problem is MC isn’t weak either. Like you said he is getting controlled, but he is also bedding all LIs? Like i said, there could be a balance if dev is incapable of coding the choice system. MC could dom Anya while Maki doms MC. But no, every single character follows the same “We are going NTS but we will also sleep with MC to not to piss harem seekers.”

MC doesn’t have a character, he is just like an enzime for a chemical reaction. There for things to happen.

Like i said, i love NTS. But i would love it if she stayed out of it because not everyone has to follow the same path. Anya going NTS kills the effect off other characters choice of going NTS, because literally everyone is doing it!

Also being able to have sex with every character also kills the speciality of it, if i can have sex with everyone why should i feel the effect of NTS?

But then again, this is simply the path dev chose. It won’t change, and it definitely paid off. I just hope there will be better games (Hopefully SOA) which deal with relationships with more options.