idkmanerally

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Facts. As a matter of fact, chapter 3 ends with us thinking Maki had just sent our girl a message to send the photographer those sexy pics. Then in chapter 4 Vi just hand waves it away saying they aren't ready for that yet.
this is how cliffhangers always work in VNs!! the next chapter after a cliffhanger starts with "...anyway! moving on!"

because they aren't ACTUALLY intended to tease what's coming next, they're just a way for devs to end the chapter without having to actually write a satisfying ending
 
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yeah i understand.. and the teasing and corruption is arguably hottest thing about this because once everyone is super sluts things get boring.. maybe dev can find some middleground so its not 4+ months for new version that rly only has a voyeurism blowjob scene.. but will see, will wait impatiently for next new version like i did with this lol
As an erotic author (e-books so far) yes, wholeheartedly agree with this statement. Even saw a quote once on a documentary about Pornography in the early days. I think they were talking about Debbie Does Dallas or something, "No one cares about the town slut getting f*cked for the umpteenth time, they are more interested in the novice, the girl next door, taking her first steps into debauchery," I'm paraphrasing that heavily, but it's a tale as old as time.

When I write an erotic novel, or short story, I follow the same principal, so when I see that followed here, I'm in love with the story right away. I actually really enjoyed this Kinetic novel so much, that I'm inspired to try to create one with the artist that I collaborate with on Cover art. Due to time constraints, it might never happen, but if it ever does, I'll probably skip reading the comments if it ends up on here.

As for the title "My New Girlfriend" itself, excellent pacing, great design, decent writing. Author should continue following their plan, not give into pressure from the fans that lack patience to watch the characters follow a realistic path. You don't go from virgin to whore in the span of a day or two, so when I see a novel or game that does that, it's off-putting, unrealistic, and the emotional payoff is weak at best.
 
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