Abandoned My New Girlfriend [Ch.6 Final] Non-NTR Story Rewrite [feliporn]

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Overview:
Non-NTR Story Rewrite.
After thoroughly enjoying the artwork of My New Girlfriend, and being equally disappointed with the story, plot and overall writing, I have decided to rewrite the entire story of the game. Once I realized this is a kinetic novel and there's only one plot to focus on, this isn't such a unsurmountable task.
This is a story/writing only change. There are no new assets here, and while story is likely longer than the original, some assets might be underutilized as they might not have fit the new plot so well.
At a minimum this should give you an opportunity to re-experience the amazing art of the game in a different way.
Chapter 0 support only for now.​

Updated: 2025-12-30
Game/Creator: Circle Games
Modder: feliporn
Mod Version: Ch.0.1
Game Version: Ch.6 Final
Language: English

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Any feedback will be appreciated, discussed and likely incorporated.

If you have any editorial input, please share the text, your grievances with it, and what you'd like it changed it to, and we can see how to incorporate it if it makes sense.
 
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feliporn said:
Any feedback will be appreciated, discussed and likely incorporated.

If you have any editorial input, please share the text, your grievances with it, and what you'd like it changed it to, and we can see how to incorporate it if it makes sense.
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It looks like you're planning to turn this game into a full NTS version. If that's the case, please keep at it. I'm sure all the NTS fans of this game will love it.
 
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Imagine being so butthurt over the original plot that you decided to rewrite a game. Peak narcissism.

This will get abandoned the further the original game develops and becomes more debauched and this mod won't be able to rewrite the game without leaving most of it out.

This only goes to show how obsessed some people are and can't let things go.
 
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feliporn

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Gato negro said:
Why are you judging kinks and fetishes? calling NTR enjoyers Retard? Are NTR enjoyers calling nicknames incest enjoyers? or futa? or anybody else? Grow up and Learn to be respectful other ideas Buddy. World doesn't go around your ideas.
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I honestly don't mind the NTR genre, but I am indeed trying to cache in on the NTR hate for some additional marketing.
To prove it to you that I don't mind it: Amber Heard is my favorite cuck queen; at least before the cuck started cross dressing.

Have you actually given the MOD a chance before posting about the title? I'd say that's the minimum when commenting on something that clearly took several hours to do. With no clear motivation other than to share something to other people? These creators take like 3 months to put out a chapter nowadays. And I'm quite confident it's not 2.9 months of working on assets and 0.1 month of coding and story... Otherwise these rewrites I have been hearing about shouldn't impact the schedule that much...

The plan for the mod is to use pretty much all sex based assets in the game. So if there's a scene of Vi sucking black cock while Eric watches and can't stop masturbating in the original game. There will be a scene of Vi sucking black cock while Eric watches and can't stop masturbating in the Mod. The difference is that there will be clear motivation behind things, not "is she cheating on me because I'm asking or because she wants to?" bullshit thoughts or the "I need to take this back into control" followed up by doing literally nothing about it... Isn't the game supposedly for 18+ years old? A 12 year old kid would say something more coherent than these lines...

You probably haven't realized this yet... When the creator first introduced NTR in the game, he didn't do it through MC, he did it through Sai instead. That pretty much says the game is not about NTR... With the story the original game has, if the game was really about NTR, MC should pretty much be Sai, not Eric.
 
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feliporn

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yourmomma said:
Imagine being so butthurt over the original plot that you decided to rewrite a game. Peak narcissism.

This will get abandoned the further the original game develops and becomes more debauched and this mod won't be able to rewrite the game without leaving most of it out.

This only goes to show how obsessed some people are and can't let things go.
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It's the actual opposite. I see so much wasted potential, that I tried to fix it...

Read previous reply, the intent is to use all sex scenes.
The artwork is where the value is for this game, why would I throw it away?

There's like at least 5 top20 NTR game nowadays.
Not that I've played them all, but you haven't seen me complaining about any of the other ones mate!
 
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NTR unavoidable! said:
That's nice, make it hard NTR then. I didn't play og much since it felt soft, let's see some hardcore cuckolding this time. I believe in you. Rewrite the whole game and maybe it will shape you into an honest cuckold.

Good luck buddy.
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That's not really criticism... But, thanks!
 
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2 0 0 4 f o r e v e r said:
>mod named non-ntr shit
>cucks come in and seethe about the mod being non-ntr shit
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what happens to "let people enjoy things" lmaooo
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Do you understand the irony of your post? No one would say anything if he didn't use the hard R.

Yeah, really, what happened to letting people enjoy their fetish without insulting them? He won't get any sympathy from me for being rude.
 
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