VN - Ren'Py - Completed - My New Life as a Stewardess [v1.0] [Yankator]

Well, there is little text with some grammar mistakes.
And lots of scenes.

It's a kinetic novel, and it's not really long, but not short either.

By the end of it I was outright laughing)

Thanks for the game! (and for the upload)

I have not see the VN that lead into this and I probably will not go looking for it. This was not really good at all. The images were ok, but there were a lot of odd looking characters. There is a basis for a story in there somewhere, but really it is a bunch mediocre sex scenes slapped together in rapid succession. Needs to be slowed down and built up.

Essentially it may be not too bad if porn images are something you are after... although my expectation was for a bit more drama, story, something a bit more engaging then what porn movies usually provide. Thus my poor rating, since it did not meet my particular expectations - and it was a bit short, usually something of this length would be chapter 1 of a story.

Still, if you find tags interesting, give it a shoot it's short and light enough to check it out.

All the low ball, hyper critical, and harsh opinions aside...
I thought it entertaining. If you want to have the same view as me about this little piece of fan art addition, you have to be willing to over-look some of it's inadequacies.
"What inadequacies?" You may ask.
Well for instance one line dialogue, between two or more people, then the scene changes. There is no developing plot, of any kind. I suppose it's really hard for non English, first language people to use proper grammar and spelling. Hell, even some English first language people can't even do it. The dialogue in this...piece, is a rushed, get from point a to b affair, with no story. I was aghast when the term harem was used. This fan art parody could almost be viewed as some kind of satire?

In my opinion this is just a sorry excuse for a sequel regarding the depth and story setup of TAC, same characters, less story, less quality CGs, downloaded it, played it, regretted doing so, sorry to anyone who put some effort to create this

I like this story in general but it does feel a bit rushed. I would have liked to see a little more time taken in some moments. I get this is just a sex story and it gets to the point quickly but having some more time with Anna and Tony in the beginning to introduce them could have been useful. Instead, we just see her fucking her father-in-law right away. It doesn't give us the best impression of her right off the bat. Some more depth on Chloe with her boyfriend could have been useful. Also, why was she surprised when he broke up with her when she told him she was pregnant with another man's child. Most people would be devastated by news like that. Also, some more on the other characters would be nice. For what is it its an enjoyable little romp.

Well, all negative reviews on this VN have valid point. So why rate it 3 stars then, well...
Because of effort... developer spent time creating this. Yes, story is bogus, renders are mediocre, and whole story is paced trough circa 150 images. But here is good part, VN covers most of fetishes, it is complete (not a half-ass demo where characters glance to each other with cliche dialogs), it was given to f95 community for free.

I love the spirit but this VN leaves a lot to be desired. Every character breaks from the original in a jarring way. It is like a rogues gallery from TAC, but nothing else really rings true. Perhaps had this been set as a fevered dream of Tony or Anne, it would be less disappointing. Otherwise, it's just too unrealistic in so many places. The marriages, pregnancies, ahegao (very cartoonish), and almost random emotive changes distract rather than enhance the experience. The central thematic concept of Mircom3D's work is completely absent. I really wanted to like this tribute, but ultimately I'm disappointed.

For future reference, less is more. I don't know what drove some of the developer/author's choices, but it wasn't story or extending the TAC experience. I think if you pared this down by a a quarter or third, it might have actually been more fun.

It's fan fiction. Nothing more, nothing less. It's a trashy head cannon from a fan of a game that the developer has probably lost interest in.

I appreciate the time and effort (and the respect for the source material) that it took to acquire the correct models and create the renders. This game was not a waste of my time and if you are a fan of TAC then at the very least this game may inspire you to make your own.

I think this is Yakator's first game. Considering it is both free and complete, I wish them the best of luck in the future.

Yakator, if you want to make more games, and I think you should, then you must:
1. Work on your writing. I get that TAC includes plenty of build-up, but you're in such a hurry to get to new places that it means nothing when the reader/player arrives.
2. Decide whether you want to be a writer or game designer. I know they're not mutually exclusive, but you shouldn't make a visual novel when a comic does that same job.
3. Either work on your English or find a proper translator. Nothing turns people off faster that having to translate broken English to English.

Finally, maybe all this is nonsense. I'm not a game designer but given the developers tastes, I would rather offer encouragement than scathing condemnation. I think Microm has lost the passion needed to carry on with this project or didn't think through the repercussions of the decisions that they allowed the player to make. So regardless of who it's from, I won't say no to more Anne.

Peace.

Not a game, no choices, just click and watch.
Totally pointless.
Poor translation to English.
This seems to have just been made to list tags, and even then some of the tags (such as rape) are just a half assed single scene.

My Rating for v1.0 is:

Pros:
+ Graphics O.K
+ Story O.K
+ Characters O.K
+ Lots of Sex Scenes

Cons:
- Fast Pace
- Too many Scenes
- Typing Errors
- Senseless Story

Conclusion:
The Story went forward to fast, the Sex Scenes where great, the Game had some typing Errors.
It would have been great if it went a little more in depth in the Story.
The Graphics where a little grainy.
Overall it was a Great Job into making a Game like this, and wish I had the Talent.
If the Game would have went a Little slower, and have had a story that would have made more sense then It could have made a 5 star rating from me.

Overall:
Great first release in a Game that deserves my Respect.

I genuinely mean no offence but this is the worst thing I've ever played on this site. I'm sorry but you've actually got to play it to believe it.

The english is so bad it's kind of funny. I understand obviously it's not the dev's first language but honestly It reads like a Borat script. This can be somewhat forgiven, however what can't be is the direction and progression. It is absolute insanity. There is literally no build up, foreplay, seduction or anything of the sort. It just jumps from scene to scene, with almost no context you're just suddenly having sex and then not and then having sex with someone else. I think I had sex about 57 times in the first 3 minutes.

Again to be clear I don't want to just kill the game as I know first hand these games are difficult to make but this is really a special kind of badly made.

This game is low effort shoverware garbage with tons of typos and horrible writing. Its NOTHING like "The Adventurous Couple". Many of the people even act out of character. There isn't proper escalation or foreplay at all. The tags on this game will seem enticing, but trust me, you need to avoid this game like the plague! No choices, no audio, but bland dialogue and visuals. AVOID.

I was drawn in by the tags but the story seems so rushed and all over the place, it makes no sense. I'm also assuming that English isn't your 1st language since the grammar and spelling are quite poor but if English isn't your 1st language then there's not much you can do about that other then getting a proof reader. If you make another game try and take it slower and not rush it along so much. On the plus side the models are very nice no complaints there.