HTML My New Mansion [v0.3] [Kestler Games]

[osanaiko]

Just adding to the "onomatopoeia" words discussion: the "standard" non-word vocalizations in Japanese do not match English. A good example is the one you have been trying with "Own" - I guess that's supposed to be the "moan of pleasure" sound that is normally written in English as "Ahnnn". Real life Japanese girls (not just porn stars) do actually make that sound (ask me how I know lol) but I've yet to hear a native English speaker moan like that.

In short - look up some adult stories/games in English that do the vocalisations and see what sounds are used and how they are written.

 

[Kheldar]

the concept is ok, video in the prologue are far too long.
some mispelling but it's not really a matter for me.

the real downside is it's not a game for now. it was released far too early even for an alpha version. there is no gameplay.
no interaction possible with the girls in rooms. having to go in each room to see if something change or if an event pop and going back to bedroom to advance time is a pain.
i'll wait several version before rating but for now it's not a game is barely an intereactive novel.

sorry for the feedback mostly negative but i think you should keepworking on it a put an other realease when there is something playable and if there is no intention on gameplay maybe add the tag visual novel on it (VN)

 

[Tyrranus]

dats a big file for a thir release man.... gotta watch that bloat

 

[kestlergames]

vids do not autoplay for is it a me issue ? also you probably should space vids with some sort of fade in/click/delayed text gl dev

Not an issue for you. I don't really like things in autoplay. I always disable it in every game I play. If everyone else prefers it, I can change it, no problem.

the concept is ok, video in the prologue are far too long.
some mispelling but it's not really a matter for me.

the real downside is it's not a game for now. it was released far too early even for an alpha version. there is no gameplay.
no interaction possible with the girls in rooms. having to go in each room to see if something change or if an event pop and going back to bedroom to advance time is a pain.
i'll wait several version before rating but for now it's not a game is barely an intereactive novel.

sorry for the feedback mostly negative but i think you should keepworking on it a put an other realease when there is something playable and if there is no intention on gameplay maybe add the tag visual novel on it (VN)

No problem bro! I appreciate the feedback, but this is precisely why I am doing these "early launches". To get some feedback about the content and start fixing things at early stages, because later it becomes much more problematic. I'm definietly looking into putting more sandbox focused stuff. I'm just developing things a little bit and adding a few more characters so i can get a bit of a more solid foundation to start building things around.

Thanks for the feedback! I hope to see you here in the future!

dats a big file for a thir release man.... gotta watch that bloat

I have compressed all the possible videos for now. Some didn't get better results in .webm... I'm trying to keep it small, but I don't want to lose too much video quality. I don't really like minecraft porn, if you know what I mean, lol.

 

[Killer94]

adding a qest tab to see what events are missed or done would benefit this game greatly its annoying that u have to roam every single moment of the days to see what's could be triggered and what not

 

[Tyrranus]

I have compressed all the possible videos for now. Some didn't get better results in .webm... I'm trying to keep it small, but I don't want to lose too much video quality. I don't really like minecraft porn, if you know what I mean, lol.

honestly I think you have 3x as many video files as you need... you could eliminate a few w/o really appearing jarring

 

[aochung]

my take... right now it feels more like a VN than a game. A few name/title choices and 1 path selection. For me, it was frustrating clicking on every room every time segment for many days, not knowing if or when there would be more story. Maybe either switch to VN or add a hint with count down like "3 days until photoshoot" and/or check in with Nina at night. Perhaps those could be in a sidebar tab like characters. And, never thought I'd say this but, maybe too many videos. Vids are hot, but many seem redundant and could move things along better with more description and dialogue.

 

[Luke5260793]

I don't know how to help Alex and Nina. I'm stuck and can't progress through the story.

 

[Danongb443]

Looks interesting and seems like it has some good potential my only "critique" for now would be to add a quest tab or something similar so you don't have to check every room at every hour. Looking forward to future updates!

 

[joryh]

Just adding to the "onomatopoeia" words discussion: the "standard" non-word vocalizations in Japanese do not match English. A good example is the one you have been trying with "Own" - I guess that's supposed to be the "moan of pleasure" sound that is normally written in English as "Ahnnn". Real life Japanese girls (not just porn stars) do actually make that sound (ask me how I know lol) but I've yet to hear a native English speaker moan like that.

More like they sound like they're being stabbed to death. While I like Japanese women, I hate Jvids cause all the women sound like they're being tortured. It is the opposite of hot.

 

[osanaiko]

More like they sound like they're being stabbed to death. While I like Japanese women, I hate Jvids cause all the women sound like they're being tortured. It is the opposite of hot.

Thanks for sharing, buddy, I was fascinated.

Now, what did you think about the game?

 

[kestlergames]

adding a qest tab to see what events are missed or done would benefit this game greatly its annoying that u have to roam every single moment of the days to see what's could be triggered and what not

Hey! Thanks for the feedback. I'm already working on a quest tab. It will be introduced in one of the next updates.

honestly I think you have 3x as many video files as you need... you could eliminate a few w/o really appearing jarring

Hey there! I'll look into it and see if I can cut a few things so it doesn't sound repetitive. Thanks for the feedback

 

[kestlergames]

I don't know how to help Alex and Nina. I'm stuck and can't progress through the story.

This part of the story is not ready yet. It will advance a little bit more in the next update.

 

[Billshwr]

Just a suggestion, you should try get the games on online sites like ‘mopoga’ and ‘gamcore’… could get the game out there more and also open up to mobile players

 

[Billshwr]

Hey there! I'll look into it and see if I can cut a few things so it doesn't sound repetitive. Thanks for the feedback

Also, the beginning dreams/videos are 8ish minutes long… I would suggest cutting this down to save space/download size. It’s obviously not too much of an issue now while the game is relatively small but once you increase in size, a way to minimise the download speed could be useful

 

[Zirenaz]

Page 1 in the book about formatting pictures: Keep the height and width ratio!

And vids with no impact on story that are 5+ minutes long is a waste of our time, and the developers time, time you could have used to actually fill the game with content.

Time to delete this empty shell where is the most used button. First few days and barely anything besides napping!