VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - My Ordinary Extraordinary Life [Ch.12] [Cheepshot]

Playing even 10 minutes of this was hard work, that's how bad it is.

It feels like it's written by a 12 year old. The dialogue is so excruciating to read and the characters are like the worst ever. MC be like a permanently horny 15 yo kid who is incapable of thinking unless it's with his dick, but the others are the same, even the Step Mom.

One of his sisters, Karen, acts like she hates him until he gives her money then she's like "Oh I think I love you now"...yep, absolute top tier stuff.
To make it worse, they all look ugly as fuck. I mean the whole family, you don't even want to bed them, I'd rather molest an angry camel....(no that ain't really my kink you idiot)

I really don't know how anyone can enjoy this absolute gem of turd making but it's high up on my list of worst games on here.

Okay, I've wasted enough time on it.

I used to believe that some of the one-star reviews were overly harsh or biased towards a specific aspect of the game. However, now that I've had the opportunity to play the game myself, I can understand why. Personally, I rarely give one-star ratings because I believe a game would have to be extremely buggy, have a nonsensical story, be a complete waste of time, or force unwanted elements that don't align well with the "Harem" theme. This particular game seems to tick off three out of these four checkboxes.

If you prefer a quick summary without reading the entire wall of text below, here it is:

-> The game initially starts as a Harem but undergoes a bait-and-switch, transitioning into NTR from chapter 6. The main character is no longer the main focus, becoming just one of many characters in a story that involves both "plot" AND sexual content.

My Ordinary Extraordinary Life [Ch.10] [Cheepshot]
This game is huge and takes a lot of time.
The H scene renders in the first 2 small chapters are really bad 2 grainy pics, i thought about deleting the game.
But later you see improvment in every chapter and the H-scenes get much more and better renders.
I played for kinky reasons and this game delivers a lot of kinky stuff, i would like some animations, but ok.
The last chapters have a lot of Futa and Lesbian, i would prefer more Lori Bdsm stuff or a few other kinks.

This Game has a really great strenght, tons and tons of slutty skimpy clothing!
I was really impressed.
Not like other games where the girls were allways the same clothes from start to end, no idea where the dev find these hundreds of awesome clothes.
The female voice during sex scenes is very good.

So, nothing for vanilla players
If you like skimpy clothing, tons of anal sex, deapthroat, squirting, bdsm, sharing, Futa, Harem, kinky, demon, centaur, bestiality, fisting, toys, then give it a go.

Sorry for bad english,
This is my first review ever because normally i take games as they are.
Meaning that i dont come here, enter to a page of a game and bash it for containing content that i dont like (ntr mostly) , bad graphics or bad storyteling. Im not looking for a Shakespirean level of plot, just that the game is entertainig.
But when a dev pull a bait & switch is infuriating. I started following the game in chapter 1 and liked the game for what is was, harem incest fantasy.
Sadly, as chapter 4 or 5 arrived, i notice the subtle entrance of some light ntr (not fully ntr because is was rape and lesbian).
But when one of the main LI get kidnapped and start to enjoy the things that are done to her, there is where i say ``WTF ...no no no dev, that bait & switch was ilegal``.
The worts thing is the reaction of the MC to all the things that are happening, like he just do what others tell him, even tho whe start strong in the fist chapters.
Like 99% of the choices in the game are just bait because they lead you to death.... you dont like kissing a girl covered in horse spunk....... well too bad you die if you dont...... dont like your girl to have a lesbo harem and not include you.... well DIE then ... or your girl fucking with a 10ft monster...you get the point.
Maybe the dev just wanna do the game that he want and thats fine, but he could warn players at the start the plans he have so we would not bother to enter the tread.
At the end i would not be surprised is all the LI (who are probably already pregnant with other) just drop the MC and were just using him.
I would personally would like if the dev drop the meaningless choises and let us REALLY choose what we could see (not skip but completely avoid).
Liked this game but would not be finishing it... probably.

My Ordinary Extraordinary Life [Ch.10] [Cheepshot]

Ancient Greek mythology type story mixing it with the present modern lifestyle by switching between both world is something new. The story content is pretty less for now and hope to see how it is going further. Being very little nothing much to comment about the story. Lot of Greek words to get to exposed is something new/interesting.

Pros
1. Little interesting with the incest & polyamorous. Incest approach with mom looks good, so far mom’s reluctance to give-up the morality is nice and breaking the same would be nice.
2. Sound: Voice of females during the sex encounters are nice.
3. Play-ability, performance and grammar are all just OK no issue

Cons
1. Quality of image renders to improve a lot.
2. Missing animations is big loss, feel like reading an adult comics/cartoon.
3. Lack of genuine or more of fictitious for sexuality especially with outside characters so far.
4. Lack of seductiveness in sexual approach.

This offers all sorts of kinks for all sorts of folks. Something for everyone, to bitch about those is silly, you can avoid many of them if you so choose. So if you chose it, that's on you.

Story is interesting, I can visually see a series of this(Though probably a bit more tamed down or maybe an Hentai Anime). But over all, decent story, decent kinks, renders keep getting better for the person(At start, god awful, but kept getting better).

If you over look whole Mother thing(Those who read it, know what I'm talking about). I would give this a good 5 stars for interesting story and concept. But like those who read it & remember that part, it still irks us to no end. Thus 4 stars should suit it.

Those offering 1 stars are just doing so, cuz they got way to emotional over something that costed them nothing. Thought they would do it for the lulz.

I've played some shit games in my time but this one might be the worst.

Here we have some of the shittiest renders on this site, we also have the most useless MC who gives zero fucks about both his sister and mother being kidnapped and repeatedly raped and yet were somehow supposed to believe that this fucktard MC is the worlds savior? Dumbshit can't even be bothered to help his own family from torture and rape.

Eventually he does get around to retrieving his mom after almost a year and you might be hoping this world saving supposed badass would rain holy fire down on the ones responsible for the rape and torture but no. No holy fire, not even an ass whooping just all is forgiven for "reasons"...

What an absolute joke of a game.

Quick advice to the devs out there who has an interesting story idea in mind: If you want to tell a linear story do not put in game options please. "Giving two dialogue options with one of them is always a dead end" is a bad game design. It's a torture choosing the "wrong" options back and forth over the things I don't want to do. Empathize with the players please. Thank you.

I saw the tags of the game and was instantly interested but I still had to stop after a short time.
Sorry but these are terrible dialogues full of cringe out of the cheapest porn.
It seems the MC was intended to be smooth but his flirting is so dumb and worse is the reaction of the woman.

I stopped after the stone old cliche "mom you don't look old" which instantly led for her to become moist...
Come on, it is so boring when every woman instantly wants the dick with no build-up...

The Models look kind of nice but the resolution is abyssal and the actual sex Scenes are boring pictures.

Maybe it gets better after a while but I can't bring myself to play it further.

This is just a rating about what I saw until part of chapter 3. I will avoid talk about the render quality because I can understand the Developer don't had a good pc at that moment, so lets skip to the story, is interesting all about reincarnation, all the woman being trapped and the only salvation is the MC's reincarnation. But what ruins all the immersion and everything in there for me is the way the characters talk, they say "my love" in almost every sentence, all the charecters and even the MC are excesible cheesy. It feels like I seeing a Romeo & Juliet's movie, all the time looks like he is reciting poetry, "My love is so big and unnending that I could die hundred times and always I will come back to you, my love."
I want to puke of how cheesy they are. You could defend this saying that the characters are from a world or time when they talked like that, but the MC and even his mother, sisters and aunt talk like that before recover their memories and even after that they still talk like that, when there is no reason, because they don't live in a medieval time anymore. Lets go with the family, they are all in love with the MC and the MC wants to fuck all his family from the start. Looks like there is no space to make them change the relationship from mom/son, sisters/brother, to lovers. The MC tells to her mother that she is beautiful, and she in that moment start to lust her son. WTF??? If that woman is so easy to please, she should be locked in the house, if a man in the street tell her that she looks goods she will want to fuck him right there.
Edit:
After days without playing, I decided to give it a go again. And I'm less interested in the game than before, you are forced to fuck any girl, if you choose to not you die and clearly thats a "game over", so if you aren't interest in the Police woman and choose to look for her partner, you will die.
It force you fetishes, never ask you if you like footjobs, so if some girl like it you will get one. Other fetish is pissing, I don't like pissing, but here you can choose if you want to do it or not. The trick here is that if you choose to not do it, you will die, so you are forced to do it.
So I will lower my rating from 2 stars to 1. And this will be the last rating, I'm at chapter 4 and I don't feel like torture myself playing a chapter more.

the horrendous low resolution renders
The story started ok but after chapter four it disappeared
The illusion of choices
choice leads to an inevitable game over
you only have one to choose
2 of your main love kidnapped
The mother and from the beginning of the game and MC is trying with her but she wants to have a relationship with him slowly
After being kidnapped, she falls in love with futa dick at first sight
I mean from the first second
And there's a second futa she fall in love with too
This futa is trying to help the mother by saving her
But the mother refuses and prefers to stay with them because she loves them both
And have sex with both of them at the same time
And when she is with her orgasm only from looking at the futa dick
And after the mc saving her
mc wanted to kill futa
She defended her because she loves them
And mc doesn't understand anything
and he NTR'd with 0 input from him
I expect the worst is yet to come
The futa are coming for his harem
He may also be raped

-The graphics improve at a very slow pace, but at least they do
-After chapter 4 the story goes through the drain
-There are no real choices, this feels like a kinetic novel (If you want to continue the story you are forced to fuck everything with a pulse, unless you want to get a game over screen.
-The MC lacks common sense, but that might be due to the overuse of the game over trope. In the beginning of the game it's somewhat funny, but that trope gets old real fast.
-Demi's story arc is unnecesarily extended until chapter 9 and gets resolved in the worst way possible.

Wow the story took an extreme turn for the worse after chapter 5, i first picked it up in chapter 5 and considered it a 4 star, up until chapter 5 the story was pretty interesting, and the sex scenes were varied and good, but i left it for a year, and during chapter 6 we get a huge bait and switch from the Dev, whcih gets even worse in further chapters

2 of your main love interests are kidnapped, and raped repeatedly, (one of them ends up liking it and going along with it) and 1 of your side LIs has the same happen to them, and you're NTR'd with 0 input from you, and this was a huge turn off since it was never put in any of the tags, or in the planned tags, when i first played it (it is there now thankfully). So unavoidable rape and ntr ruined what was a good VN, which was quite annoying since we were given no warning about it, and it was quite good before those updates.

Edited to add: In ch9 one of your LI's is finally saved after almost a year of being a non-consensual sex slave so that's good i guess if your into that. Also I have 0 doubts that as the game progresses there will be more rape and kidnapping of the main LI's

Renders still needing work after so long is a bit ify on if they will ever improve and the drop of two new tags that are known to break games. The NTR tag should have been here from the start or NTR should have been made avoidable but as it stands we have had to watch a LI get forced to fuck someone or die and now they have Stockholm syndrome and that can only go down hill. Player choice is more or less a joke.

HTe first thing that will get your attention when you start the game is the horrendous low resolution blurry renders, with no visible light sources.

The second thing you will notice is some sound clip during the first (FREE WEITH SOME RANDOM CHICK, and totally out of nowhere) sex scene, with a dialogue that is different from the dialogue that the text is showing.

The third thing you will notice is that out of the blue (This seems to be a thing and we are 3 minutes into the game) the mc wants to fuck his mom.

This 3 things are not my opinion, the opinion is if you would think this shit is good enough for you, let me clarify this. As i was saying, this 3 things talk about how there is not writing there besides the story, which i guess is ok, but character development is equally important, and this story seems like an excuse to justify the gameplay, instead of a story with depth, actions and consequence.
Im guessing its gonna be like; you are the descendant of some mage, and you will have some superpowers, thats why you are gonna fuck everyone at will. (i hadnt played the game at this point and its exactly what happens.)Actually the game forces you to fuck everyone, if you dont do it, its game over, so you can only miss very few without said punishment.

In the process of this introduction you get one easy sex scene, which is just some images the poorest quality, even for 2014, and another sex scene which is part of some story, which is the same as a dream.

I think is bad, really bad, maybe if some girl is of your taste you will find motivation. So far you have 2 sisters, one seems to be in love with you and the other one hates you, (yeah, its another one of those).

If you like it, enjoy, i think is trash.

EDIT TO CONFIRM IT:

To finally kill the game you need to fuck everyone in your path, like her or not, or it will be a game over. When i say everyone i mean EVERYONE BUT ALLIE. She will be put out of your path constantly, YEah she is like Liza in BB, and other games that pick some favourite girl and stall their progression totoally outside of the game logic. As I said, this game is trash. Stalling a character could be nice if sex scenes where decent, but is really crappy. The End

Really enjoyed this game for a while, writing isn't great but it felt like there was a good story emerging... Then it was proven otherwise.

A minor irritation is the overabundance of false choices, you think there's a choice but one option leads to an inevitable game over.

Can't lie, I really enjoy this game flaws and all.

Sure some story elements have left me baffled especially those involving Demi and why the MC appears a bit useless at times with regards to his loved ones needing help but all in all it's been a game i've looked forward to every update.

There is a large cast of characters and I really like quite a lot of them even those in the bad guy camp but my fave will always be Jena, the resident shapeshifting succubus girl.

Among the various cast of characters are a Zebra Centaur girl, massive collection of demons, magic users, trans women, BDSM enthusiasts, a beastiality fetishist, some cops and a hitchhiker we drive past several times.

Story revolves around the MC who is reincarnated many years after his death and just started to regain his memories. His job is to rebuild his clan and save them from the hell plane they were banished to by gathering sexual energy.

Most of the women around him are also reincarnations of his lovers who begin to regain their memories as time goes on.

It does have some moments some people here will not like including one of the MC's sisters being kidnapped and raped and his mother being kidnaped and falling in love with her futa demon captor the mother superior.

I can't give it a low score for the parts that baffled me because despite that I always look forward to an update and it's kept me entertained.

Just keep in mind it is not your typical harem game and does have some dark moments. Also the MC is not a jealous person and a lot of the girls also have relationships with each other. If you are one of those that only ever want the MC to be the one having sex, this will not be for you.

Here we are in 2021, a couple of games are making renders in 4K and a lot are making them in 1080p, but this game has its renders in what? 360p? The art is good, but the image resolution is so small that scenes are often blurred, foggy and with overall bad quality. Don't get fooled by the first images of the game, check the last one and consider that the game has that image quality to worse.

I'll not mention the bad story, the meaningless gameplay or the bad writing. Just save yourself some time and believe the other reviewers: this is not worth your time.

The writing is that of a stereotypical porn so just down right awful. The images are also just bad in the beginning they get better but if the dev doesnt want to go back and fix them then the game still loses points for having them. In my humble opinion any redeeming qualities the game has are rightfully over shadowed by its flaws.

(v6.0) Its been awhile for another review but i think this game can use more support:

A game worth of notice,
To start this of, it was difficult to compose myself in the beginning of the game, but becouse of other ratings telling of improvements later on, i endured.
while going trough the story it became more captivating and started to swallow me into the story, that being said, the story is realy worth it, some minor points are the manner in witch most sex scenes ar writen, a lot of them are between erotism and porn. Following the story, those sex scenes would be worth more if they would be of higher quality erotica and les pornlike.

The renders in the first 2 chapters are rubish, from the 3th chapter on they are improved a lot, non the less Karen looks to old even within the story parameters compared to the elders of the story, she looks more like some one between 33-45 instead of 25-30, same go's for her sister that has the looks between 25-30.

The elders (mom's) are realy good.

The only thing i miss here are animations but even without them its a good read.

Conclusion:

• chapters 1 and 2 should be rerenderd.
• The writing of the most erotic sex scenes might profit to rewrite to make it more erotical.
• For the sex scenes where its pure about sex the writing is about spot on.
• The main story is surprisingly captivating, so much that i started scipping sex scenes (reason above) to read the story.

side note:
i gave a 3/5 star rating in genaral conlusion (sex scenes and renders).
the main story deserves a 4 perhaps 4,5/5.

Good work so far, it was a pleasure reading it.

With regards Drainer002