Ren'Py - My Real Desire [Ch.3 Ep.4 P2] [Lyk4n]

My Real Desire [Ch.1 Ep.3 Part2c]
i am amateur on writing review so do forgive me if there is so many mistake. still this is what i can do for the dev, atleast for now. so in sum:
My second best game so far

1. character
MC is cool, no cringe moment. there is a scene when he is asked to smile, he smile like normal person. i'm so glad. i thought his smile will be weird, it will be really cringe, i've seen too many of that bs. BEST MC HAHA.
the girls are bunch of beauties. if you guys like asian girl, this one is the best place to feast your eyes on. if this one get in to chinese novel, it will be "immortal palace of beauties" or something like that haha. i'm really glad to see rin before im dead, kinda remind me of my dearest friend.

2. story
story is really original, not sarcasm. storyline is awesome so far, not many useless dialog, straight to the point. no f given to time skip, seriously, just skip it if it doesn't important, no need filler. i really like it.

3.grammar
english isn't my first language too, i still get all the point. we can still improve, so there is no significant problem with grammar.
i actually i need to point out that i am really glad lyk4n isn't native, it's really easy for me to understand every dialogue. this one maybe for any new dev , basic english (every day english) is really helpful for non native speaker, so might be consider use this kind of simple/basic english. i believe many ppl who don't speak english very well play this game too. i know i don't have the rights to teach dev, it's just suggestion if anyone offended i do apologize.

4. animation
it's awesome. but at some animation v and p or p and mouth isn't really fit.for example sex scene with rin and few BJ with any girl.i know it might be hard to fix since it's about the detail. but i really hope these get better.

TLDR: this game is awesome, i'm glad to play this. very recommended. definitely the game that you should play before you die.
suggestion:
1. i know this just 1 ch of the game, sorry if i judge too fast. for me MC is badass but kinda passive. i hope he will be more aggresive. if he can become alpha, it couldn't be better. seriously dominate rin please.
2. fix the detail of animation
3. i actually play your other game (PL) too. it's scored 3.5/5 for me. i don't like the story or gameplay. but i like the MC tho.
maybe you can put PL on hold and focus in this game, this one have so much potential.
i am sorry if i offended you. but this one is fuckin gem, i just can't help it. i really hope you can focus on one game, not only i hope for the longer gameplay every update but significant improvement in every aspect.
Hope you can be one of the greatest dev, because imo you do deserve that.


GOD I LOVE RIN SO MUCH

[Ch.1 Ep.3 Pact2c]

** Sleep sex and rape, at least so far, is not what you may be thinking. One of the love interests got drunk with MC and "sleep rapes" him by accident**

I went into this with very very low expectations. Mostly because it looked like a fairly standard romance VN with the usual tropes and cliche personalities. I tend to shy away from romance and look for darker themes in these VNs, but I do occasionally stumble upon a lighthearted story with likable characters that do manage to hold my attention. This is one of those.

The writing is fairly good. It's not enough to really stand out as something special, but there isn't any glaring problems with grammar either. It gets the job done. The story has just enough layers to be interesting. It doesn't lay out all the cards at once and we piece together what's going on with the MC as we play through the current episodes. Another good point about the writing is that sex is handled reasonably and realistically. There is no artificial stairway to heaven that starts with teasing, handjob, blowjob, and finally sex. Also, there are some legitimately funny segments in this game and I always appreciate some humor when it can make it laugh.

The MC is probably the character that stands out here which is quite rare. He is incredibly closed off and aloof, but also very attentive and competent. He even has some funny quirks. We learn a bit more about his past as the story progresses and why he is the way he is.

The girls, on the other hand, tend to be quite a bit more cliche. We got the outgoing nice girl, the seductress, the tsundere, the quirky, the shy, etc etc. However, most of them do have a bit more depth then what it seems like at first glance. They are mostly written fairly well and are quite likable. HS models being what they are, it's pretty much a given that they will look smoking hot if you like the HS style.

The music is done decently. I don't like having a default track that keeps playing in the background. I would prefer no music if there isn't a need for it. The game does switch tracks occasionally to fit the tone of some scenes, so that is a plus.

The reason I took off a star here is mainly because of the point system and gameplay design. I am not a big fan of single variable relationship points in VNs. Especially when it inevitably leads to choices like "Be nice vs ignore her." Those are not exactly choices in my mind. I mean, you could choose not to rack up the points for roleplay purposes, but that basically means we are opting out of content with no replacement scenes or route variations. In these types of games, I will lose interest very quickly unless the plot and characters hooks me to a certain extent. I believe the game does accomplish this.

Another thing I didn't like was the free roaming parts and "interview" segments with the girls where we ask about their likes and dislikes. It felt meta gamey and it didn't fit the personality of the MC to be so interested in small talk like that.

All in all, it was a pretty good start to a romance (maybe harem) story that tries to incorporate some deeper plot elements to keep things interesting.

Fantastic game, the story is very original and interesting, you can sense that there's a plot coming but it's nothing forced or kinda of dumb, the MC is emotionless but as you get to know the story you starts to understand why, i just hope that the MC can express his emotions well and seem like a "normal" guy at the end of this VN.

It has a great amount of gameplay considering the date of the first release

The characters all seem nice and good looking, with their own background and personalities

I don't really like playing games that are made with honey moon models (but i have to admit that games made with honey moon 2 are way better to the eyes lol), but this one caught my attention and i couldn't be happier to give it a shot, really looking forward to it, keep it up with the great work dev

This game surprised me a lot. The protagonist seemed to be boring and a jackass at first, but when he arrived in his new home it seems like he becomes better and it turns out that he has the same personality that tha MC of youjitsu (an anime that i like a lot).

The girls are very hot (specialy Rin), has unique personalitys.

The story, altought it was inspired in the anime, it actually picked my interest because i was playing and takin part on it, so it feels different.

The only bad point, IMO, is that there are currently just a few sex scenes, but i think that those will become more frequent and i don't blame it because the few scenes are really hot.

One thing i liked a lot is that, currently, you dont need to choose one girl over the other, so you won't need to play multiple paths just to see all the content and you still can choose wich girls you'll develop you relationship with.

CONCLUSION: This is a great game and has a lot of potential. I'm gonna follow it to see how it progress.

Sorry for my bad english, i'm not a native speaker.

The graphics and animations are awesome. The characters are all my types, I love it. This game has been on my top list right now. The story line are great, it makes you want to play more on each update, the main character are a really cool person, I like his personality. Good work.

When I started playing My Real Desire, I had a hard time getting any sense of who the main character is, and wasn't really sure I was going to like the game, but the MC's flatness and lack of expression at the start was simply part of some very skilled story-telling, and as you learn some of his back story he becomes a more-understandable character. The characterization and character development in this VN are top-notch, and the laying out of the plot includes several instances of foreshadowing and hints that there is more and more we have yet to learn about these people. Add to that good modeling and animation of sex scenes, and this is really quite a good VN. The text makes good sense, and while, as an editor, I see things that could be improved all in all, I can heartily recommend this to anyone who is interested in an adult visual novel with and intriguing plot, good graphics, and very good storytelling.

I really like this menu, the picture is so beautiful, the texture is excellent.I really like the characters named Rin and eira. Other characters like it very much. Keep doing it and keep following it.

EDIT: Latest update (Ch3Ep1Part1) has given one of the heroines an unfortunate backstory including rape. While that girl wasn't really high up in my list, I can imagine those who like her won't really enjoyed it. Writing quality kinda went down but the plot is still quite interesting to me.

Interesting story with likeable characters and the designs are great. The animation is really nice as well. Loving the concept of the Angels being the conquerable routes. Making it a harem is a plus for me. Looking forward to all the future updates.

Solid writing, great graphics despite the engine used. Really good character design/development. Usually I mute music in these games, but the music in this one is quite good and suits the moods of the different scenes. Very impressed, eager for more!

Not a bad VN. Several different girls to interact with.
MC comes off as a robot, but it doesn't really matter.
The ladies are all beautiful, and there's quite a few of them.

There wasn't any typos that I noticed. The ladies seem to have depth, and each are very interesting. I'm looking forward to where this goes in the future. Keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing.

This is a really really great game. already my favorite game in this site. beautiful renders and smooth animations. Every girl is awesome. Charming characters make me look forward to more update. story is interesting too.

The story seems interesting enough and feels decently paced to get into. I really enjoy Rin's interactions with everyone especially, but hoping a harem route will be available. Finally, a good game after so long. I was getting tired of bad games until I stumbled upon this one.

The graphics are good enough, the characters are likable and do not act out of lust just because of "plot", and stay pretty consistent throughout the plot The story is very well written and the MC is just not a charmer out of nowhere he actually acts like his age and not with his pants

Really loving the girls, the renders, the MC and the gameplay. But I think the story with Rin progressed a bit too fast. I like slow developing and long games more to truly enjoy a developed relationship between the mc and the girls. Some side girls like Elaine are good for quick fun, but main ones should be allowed more time with mc before sex.

Still one of my fave games and I look forward to it eagerly.

So far a pretty good game. The character models are great, with a nice set of personalities going along with each. The story seems interesting enough and feels decently paced to get into. I really enjoy Rin's interactions with everyone especially, but hoping a harem route will be available.

One negative that likely has been repeated is the navigation; during the house roam, it was a bit awkward trying to get everything going. Outside of that though, it's been a solid experience so far, and definitely looking forward to more!

Very fun story so far, lovable characters and all the model are very well made! the protagonist feels like a real person instead of just a man-whore with unreasonable charm, and each of the girls have their own fun quirks.
All and all a fun and enjoyable game.

Finally, a good game after so long. I was getting tired of bad games until I stumbled upon this one. The graphics are good enough, not a masterpiece or anything but not lacking either; the characters are likable and do not act out of lust just because of "plot", and stay pretty consistent throughout the plot (so far). The story is very well written and the MC is just not a charmer out of nowhere (he actually acts like his age and not with his pants), and actually thinks everything he is about to do. You also feel like you're in control, since you actually are presented with many choices throughout the game and not just in the important parts. The story is kinda compelling, this is one of the few games I do read every text that pops up (and Rin's chacarcter is actually kinda cute, first time I've called a fictional charcater that and makes me feel werid, but I mean it, especially in chapter 3)

Props to the developer and this is certainly a game that I'm going to be expecting to see more in the future.

So far the game is progressing very good for the begining and is having a nice potential for this kind of game. For starters you may or maynot like the mc but its funny if you identify yourself as a introvert, the game nicly portrays the everyday hussel of introverts about decision making and gives quite a handful experience even at this stage. I know this is a review for an adult game but yeah the game is quite well written. The update timing are also frequent 2 weeks i think so a lot of stuff in a little time . Adding to my list of games to check in near future

it's a great game and the story is intriguing. while it may look like a cliche introduction,the story is nothing like the cliche and you would be intrigued about the mc's identity because he is simply not a simple person.

Ok I've finished playing and I've got to give props to you Lyk4n, you've gotten really good at developing games and it shows

PROS
-The characters look great, both in terms of design and personality...I think you have given a face that matches the personality to all the characters
-It is nice to see a protag that actually thinks from his brain and not his dick so that's also a plus for me since it's refreshing to see
-The renders of the girls just feel excellent to me...a huge improvement from your part and I'm happy to see that
-I guess why the MC looks emotionless will be shown in the future and I'm exited to see where it goes

CONS
-Though I thoroughly enjoyed the game, the house navigation felt horrible...even though it is currently present for only one part of the game I had multiple wrong presses or didn't know where to go...so you should improve on it

SUGGESTIONS
-Maybe include the navigation like your previous game or anything than this
-Also maybe make the relationship points be seen at any point not just at the end of the chapter

HOPE
-Hope you make us be able to have a harem/date multiple girls as well (why have only one when you can have all eh ) so adding to that
-Hope you don't make any girls path mutually exclusive like having to choose which girl to choose to date between the two or something

And that is all...I have to say I was thoroughly impressed with the content the game currently has and the amount of progress you have made from the previous game to this is really impressive

Just make sure you continue developing both games and don't abandon or keep one on hold...both game have immense potential to be one of the best games on the site

Has potential.

Animations 4/5
Story 5/5
Characters 5/5

This game has a nicely written story, I have no complaints about it. The characters are very well written and the MC especially, is very different and unique. The problem lies in the animations. I've given the animations a 4/5, because they are well rendered and very smooth, but the penis simply stretches and retracts, and never penetrates past a certain point. Found the issue after playing Honey Select 2 a few months ago, it's an optional telescoping effect.

That's my only complaint. Easily a 4 star game with 5 star potential, if the animations are fixed.