The renders are at best average, and the story, how to say that, very poor.
There is not depth or originality in the characters, no fun in the dialogs or situations.
The story is from the MC POV, but sometimes not. You have to make choices. Most of bad choices lead to game over.
The "gameplay" (if we can speak about gameplay in a VN), or the branches are so obvious.
Let's say, that it is a good start for a first developpement .
I hope you will achieve better. Try to work on renders first, and in the process think about spicy situations and try to build a story around. Maybe, read about, how to tell a story.
I'm sorry but I didn't like it
There is not depth or originality in the characters, no fun in the dialogs or situations.
The story is from the MC POV, but sometimes not. You have to make choices. Most of bad choices lead to game over.
The "gameplay" (if we can speak about gameplay in a VN), or the branches are so obvious.
Let's say, that it is a good start for a first developpement .
I hope you will achieve better. Try to work on renders first, and in the process think about spicy situations and try to build a story around. Maybe, read about, how to tell a story.
I'm sorry but I didn't like it