VN - Ren'Py - My True Desire [v0.3.1] [DTZ Games]

reviewing version 0.1
i see that the story has potential , just i hope the dev doesn't rush it or make it too artificial. the flow of chapter 1 didn't feel very .. real ? the situations were a bit hard for my head to digest as normal events. art is good , there's not much content for now. i think this is the dev's first VN and i hope the story develops to be good and original.

Well there are obviously very similar games but since i can't see any flaws yet i don't see a reason to give it a bad rate. Visuals are relatively unique despite being an AI, writing is engaging and i really like the audio design.

We will see how it goes but currently i am hopeful with what i see.

It's a very good start. I'm looking forward to see the progress of this game. I love the arts and the multiple characters with different kinks. Good job dev.

Just one suggestion: I would add eyes to the MC to make him more real.

A nice game. The best part is the art and the models, they are hot! There's space to improvement, like work a bit more on the narrative, since it's a VN, it's must be the principal part of the game to be at least OK. I see good things in the future if the dev keep improving. In the future I will edit this review for better if things get interisting.
3 Stars, for now.