The tags are there, the art looks good . But I simply dont judge a game so early in development . Multiple protagonists with branching paths is going to be huge pain , and I wont hold it against you if decide to back down from that. If you want to really flesh out a story dont try to fit it all in one package , have a product out there and split the game in parts or seasons ( summertime saga is struggling with this ) .
Keep at it, you have nice start, youre moving in the right direction and you might end becoming something great!