VN - Ren'Py - Myth of Slayer [Ch. 2] [Oldcat]

This story has a lot of potential and from what I've seen so far I'm liking the story and it's good and the characters are beautiful I just hope the protagonist awakens his power since I don't trust characters that give power to a protagonist but have their own thoughts and can control the protagonist's body. My only criticism is in relation to the clothes that the characters wear when they enter the portals which are fantasy and medieval clothes and this looks very strange for a game that takes place in the current world, seeing them with those clothes I have the impression that they don't offer any protection to whoever wears them, it seems like they only wear them for style and not for practicality, anyway despite the visual strangeness this doesn't hinder the game's story at all.

Know its early to say that this will be a fantastic game with little errors but overall its breath of fresh air in a plot that has been used many times especially in the anime.
First unlike the mc of mrd, the mc is here feels like a real person and not just like a silent robot who is a shut in.

Second the being inside of you, A trope heavily use in any fantasy media especially in the anime is a breath of fresh air cause even though is a demon lord with immense power he just want peace and just to chill unlike most alter egos who wants to take over the host body. The demon lord and the mc feels like the mc from parasyte which I think is the closet comparison to them.

Third is the girls and the animation which is I think really has improvement from mdr, Although maybe this is an error or a bug maybe But there are times the angle does not Compliment models that much but when it Move on to the next scene they look great Again hopefully it will be polished in the future.

Lastly the story although has been used many many times is still good and has its own twist so it feels like a real original concept.

This is my first time doing a review looking forward to this game progress
Sorry for my english if is bad not my first language

Story 4/5: pretty good
Writing 3/5: few minor errors, but mostly well-spelled and clear writing, but conversations often flow in an unnatural manner.
Renders 3/5: mostly nice looking
MC 2/5: I think the creator overcorrected after the previous mc, making this one the opposite. which also made annoying, boring and very basic. he isn't serious when he should be, whines a lot, doesn't interact like a normal person and has a terrible K-pop haircut.
Girls 3/5: some really good, while others are atrociously bad.
Choices 3/5: to many of the choices are: bad or worse. especially in regards to interactions with Yuka

I was quite disappointed when I noticed this game were made by Lyk4n. this far I only see few promising aspects.

the final score is based on my overall enjoyment, not the average of the scores above.

It's promising, the plot and world building reminds me a lot of Solo Leveling, while the render looks quite similar to a really great game that I like in this site but a bit rougher. I liked Dev's previous work as well (the ending feels rushed tho), so I feel like I can expect a lot from this one.

If there is something lacking, I think the dev need to learn to build up the relationship a bit more first before jumping to a sex scene, it was also one of the things I noticed from his previous work.

Great game, the content is excellent, the render and animation is really smooth, keep up the good work, I am expecting the next update will be realeased soon, hope it will be long enough to satisfy the player, also can you please add gallery replay on the next update?