VN - Ren'Py - Natasha Naughty Wife [v0.3] [ArchimedesCompany]

Straight out the gate the sheer size if the download is tiny And the game itself is really good and some nice animations are top notch! Models are original and looks great in-game, So i would highly rate this 4/5 stars

(Review of v0.22)

Wow, where to begin...

1. Writing is real bad and needs proofreading. It's also generally quite boring, I mean sleep inducing level. If this has been now rewritten I don't dare imagining how awful must have been in earlier versions. Character names are mixed up and the names you pick for the MC and her husband aren't used in a consistent manner. As the user is asked for new names, the defaults aren't specified. Off to a bad start if the basics are this bad...

2. Renders are bland, and so are the characters especially up close. I mean, the MC looks OK while talking to Rachel but she looks ugly up close?! Narration/dialogue is not in sync with the scene at times. I'd also replace the model for the husband and his behaviour. Lighting is off as well...

3. Sound is sex scenes should be removed completely, because ATM it's nausea inducing; it reminds me of some awful Japanese games. Actually, I'd remove the sex scenes altogether (at least, those up to the point where the MC goes out for some jogging) and replace them with simple narration because they make the game worse than it already is.

4. Some animations are extremely jerky. A simple 2-frame loop would be more pleasant than this.

5. Narration when there's a time jump between two scenes is done with huge characters occupying the entire screen. Why?

The only thing well done here seems to be the plot, as it brings up a real problem that some couples face IRL, so it's something original at least. But execution and production values in general are poor, I couldn't even complete the game because the more I see, the more defects I find.

v0.1

I know it's early in the game, but liking the progression so far.

Pros
- Natasha is hot
- Decent renders
- Somewhat realistic dialogues
- Direction of the story is promising

Cons
- James/Rachael's one dimensional personalities = pervert / slut wanting to fuck

Looking forward to what's to come, hope it doesn't turn into lazy writing and meaningless fuck fest.

My Rating for this Release [v0.1 ] is:

Pros:
+ Nice Renders
+ Nice Story
+ Easy Playing
+ Hot scenes

Cons:
- some Typo Errors

Conclusion:
Like the renders in this Game and lets you see where the story will be leading too, although there isn't much to do, you see a couple that is having problems getting a baby, and the discussion of how to resolve this, maybe through cheating etc.
The Characters are not Great but good, and the release was long for a version 01.
my rating is based on the Renders and the that I think are pretty good, and I also like the fact that the Dev doesn't fuck around even though it only takes about 10 minutes to play.

lets see what the future brings us here, if it keeps going at this pace it will great fap material.
also I don´t understand how folks can Give a 1 Star rating, this Game might not deserve a four or five star rating...but one Star?...Hell No in my Book.
If I made a Game that would probably get a one star,.
But all I can say is that the folks should try it for themselves and find out themselves and Rate it accordantly, or not Rate at all.

for me well worth the download

i enjoyed this release! art is nice, design of her is really hot and is a fun game overall with potential if dev keep going this way a few things to improve but nothing that the dev cant handle i imagine. Hope to see more in the future

Gave it a go as it was a rewritten/redo release. V0.42.

Content actually worth of a 0.01 release, due to the .42 and the rewritten part I thought, he it can't be that bad, they must of made it better...no.

Story - its fine, and an ok storyline to go with for a fem protagonist - cheating/NTR type title

Narrative - horrible, got a headache by the end of it trying to decipher the sentences. Text box cuts off some of the sentences at times - bad colors and just horrible engrish.

Models are fine, not great but not bad. FMC seems to be kinda hot housewife look.

No choices - its a straight VN

At this point, I downloaded, took ten minutes to get a headache and deleted it while trying to log into my brain to not look at NNW for years to come.

Story/Character:
The story goes Natasha and her husband are having trouble of having a baby. Their rapport and love for each other starts to disappear until Natasha notices men are looking at her and that his husband is turned on by this. It’s a pretty simple story, yet done poorly. It’s poorly paced and there’s real no slow corruption to the Natasha. All the characters in the game are pretty boring and don’t stand out. The NTR is meh, it’s okay at its best. It’s plagued with typos and grammar mistakes.
Content:
Quite a short amount of content, only like 15-30 minutes of reading. The only sex scenes are with the husband and forcefully kissing another guy. Even the sex scenes with the husband are quite boring.

Gameplay:
There is no gameplay, it’s just your typical adult visual novel. The choices are either you follow the cheating or wife-sharing arc. I did the wife sharing arc and it was pretty meh.

Visuals:
The visuals are below average. The wife model looks okay. But some of the guy models look downright horrible. Like the skin tone of their face and match do not match up. It also has poor lighting that makes the characters look worse.

Sound:
The sound design is basically non-existent. No background music. Only really loud moaning on two occasions, that did nothing to add to the scene.

Honestly not a big fan of this game, I understand it’s a game still in it’s early day. But its still quite poor in lot’s of departments. The NTR aspect is okay and is the only redeemable thing about it. Honestly hard to recommend this game to any NTR fan, I think once it starts pumping content and fix up their errors, it can be an okay read.

0.4

Not a bad game. The graphics are a 4. The plot as a whole is a 5-, and it has good potential for further development. The dialogues are decent, there are very hot ntr moments. However, there can be a lot of unnecessary words. At the moment, the vn is rather short, about 20-30 minutes of reading.

Definitely does not deserve a 1 star

As for version 0.4 there's yet not that much content for those looking for ntr. Many scenes with the husband, but only kissing/groping with the others.

By this point the story is set, the characters introduced. Other than that, not much story progress.

About the game:
No meaningful choices. You get to choose the route (sharing or cheating) and to choose some minor things, but beyond that it's just a kinetic novel really

About character models:
- Men's look is pretty much a standard for these types of renders — they look fucking abysmal. Ugly ass mfckas. (not the fault of the dev, just the style of renders)
- Nat is well worked on and is very much distinguished from everybody else (maybe cz everybody else is ugly af)

TL;DR: I'd wait for couple more updates for the story to develop and content to be added. Worth checking out though

**OUTDATED**

Rating: 1/5
Playtime: ~10 minutes
Version: 0.1

The dialogue is riddled with typos and scenes randomly start and end with no clear connection or reason. I think the developer wrote a list of "scenes" he wanted in the game, and just hastily slapped them together. The characters are all extremely flat, serve no purpose, and have little to no development.

The renders are okay-ish at their best, and downright horrifying at their worst.

But hey, maybe the story will make up for these faults...? Basically, the main character Natasha is married to some wimp named Jeffrey (who is present for two whole scenes in the game) who can't impregnate her. She has a crush on her co-worker named Edmund, and her other co-worker Rachel keeps insisting that she have an affair with him (when she's not thirsting over him, that is)

At the end of the game you get a choice as to whether or not to follow Rachel's advice, but if you agree, all it does is tell you that "the seeds of corruption have been sown", and the game ends right there. I actually checked the script files to see if I was missing something, but nope. Maybe it's unfinished or something, who knows.

Overall, I recommend you stay far away from this.