VN - Ren'Py - Naughty 40 [v0.105] [After Choices]

Loved the game. I can see it's not been updated in a long time, possibly abandoned... It's a shame. What there is, is the first steps of a good swinging story with also the possibility of a cheating path.

The progression to swinging is hot and the way it affects the dynamics between MC and FMC is pretty good. They take it as a mature couple that was drifting and seems to have found a turn-on, not as adventurous young adults looking for a thrill - which isn't bad, just what most other games in the genre choose to go for.

There are a few short side stories where the FMC is blackmailed because of her daughters' mischief. You can choose avoid these scenes if it it's not your bill, but the writer is non unsuccessful in presenting the FMC as wealthy, popular, highly successful, and sometimes demeaning to others, so, she kinda deserves a few life lessons

Both FMC and MMC can open a path to cheating, but neither progresses to anything more than a kiss or some dirty dancing, yet.

There is only one full sex scene and it's between the couple. After the first swinging, it feels earned and satisfying.

English dialogue and narrations are of heterogenous quality. Sometimes it seems like a rough translation, others it reads just fine. The game would benefit of some proof reading, but I think it will come when it will come, no point in chastising a WIP for not being perfect. Overall, I really like the tone and how the story develops, and give it five starts hoping for new updates that keep up the good pace and iron out the details.

v0.105

I was unsure how to rate the game, I see it somewhere between 3 and 4, but in the end, I felt it was closer to 3* and went with it.

If you've played other projects from this author (both completed and abandoned), you should know what you're getting - a somewhat confusing and unbelievable narrative (probably at least partly due to the fact that the text wasn't written or proof read by a native English speaker) with high quality renders.

This is not a game. It's some twisted and cliche story about a woman who will do everything to achieve what she wants and about her horny loser of a husband. If this was a VN game, the palyer would be able to shape the MCs or at the very least be able to make decisions for them. This is just a piece of meat thrown to players for playtime

amazing renders and story ... swinging route is all i need good job dev ... mc is beautiful i love the renders here and free pass reboot...hope dev wont abandon this game and keep frequent updates best of luck

Even though I don’t think it’s fair to rate a game after only one update, I will anyway, because I can see how hard After choices & whitewolf619 worked on this game.
It has breathtaking beautiful cinematic renders and they give you choices to see different camera angles of the scenes, and also change the lighting if you desire.
So even though there is not much content yet, I do like where this is heading & I can still appreciate and be a fan and help support this great dev and team to reach their goals and dreams.

If I could rate this on render quality alone, I'd give it a 5. Unfortunately, it's seriously let down by poor quality English. At times, I wondered what some of the sentences were actually trying to say. Mostly, I could understand what the characters were saying, but it sounded seriously unnatural.

Having said that, I like that the game shows enthusiasm for itself somehow. You can't help but want to enjoy it. I just really wish the dev would either work with a proper translator or a proofreader. That would improve the game significantly.

Nice start though it has not grabbed me like the start of 'Free Pass', but enough to want to see more.

Characters, still early, the only one that came out as someone would not want to interact with is Rebekah, an unlikeable, spoiled b@tch. Grace and Michelle, still need to learn more about them.

The story very soap opera, less that of a adult game, yet this is only the opening chapter.

Graphics, are stunning, for me, the best I've seen. I paused at the scene that showed Grace's foot on the floor outside the bathtub. The water falling to the floor, the lighting, the everything, beautiful.

Only thing other than Rebekah that bothered me, was Grace's appearance, too much like Grace in 'Free Pass', felt like a recycled character from another game than original.

Looking forward to see what you do with this.