VN Ren'Py Naughty Assignment [v0.1] [HornyJailProductions]

HornyJailProductions

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Overview:
Your long awaited saturday has arrived, that means that you get to kick back and relax for the weekend, right? Wrong! You have to waste your time working on some stupid project for college. However, not everything is as bad as it seems. You've been paired up with Amy, a cute girl from your class and- What? Her mom is hot too? Maybe your Saturday won't be so bad after all…​

Thread Updated: 2024-05-27
Release Date: 2024-05-27
Developer: Horny Jail Productions -
Censored: No
Version: 0.1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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LGM

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Not bad so far. A few missing periods. A few missing commas. And there's a 'suddently' that needs to lose its 't'.
 

osanaiko

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Not bad at all, the AI for the girls is on point. Story is basic but flows pretty well. Not sure about how suddenly both the girls jump your bones but it's fair enough for a first release.

Some AI image work constructive criticism:
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Anyway, it was a fun 5 minutes. Good luck!
 
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RodgeCF

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I really like what's here so far! A few thoughts:

-This really should be called v0.1, not 1.0. 1.0 = full game in the eyes of most people, and it causes needless confusion.

-The character art looks absolutely fantastic. Love the designs, and the quality and consistency of the AI assets is fantastic.

-With that said, some of the BGs look a little scuffed. I'd recommend img2img for the street BG like someone else suggested already, as well as going in to clean up and fix smaller details that the AI might've gotten wrong (hinge on the wrong side of door, no buzzer)

-Different colors for the character names is fine, but the different fonts are kind of distracting. I'd pick one nice, readable font and use it for all three character's names.

-Some of the transitions are a little awkward. Olivia's chara cg appears twice on screen during the crossfade outside the house, and when you're in the bedroom with Amy one of her chara cgs suddenly switches to another on a different part of the screen with no transition. Also when you follow Olivia to the kitchen, there's a really long pause before the scene change that didn't need to be there. A fade to and from black would've gotten the job done without making it look like there's something missing.

The story's simple, but it works just fine. Both girls are really cute, and I'm looking forward to seeing more!