- Aug 19, 2023
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I would argue that graphically (static images) was good and fun, BUT, storytelling was very bad.
Mom is discovering herself with erotic pictures but she used to film porn videos with the husband?
Mom is surprised by teens cocks but she used to go to nudist beach and pose with the cliché black bulls?
Mom is hesitant to touch any other man than her husband but she used to play swinger?
Why when the neighbour showed her porn pictures she didnt remember the ones on her PC? For example... Flashbacks are breaking the mom character too much, I dont know who Susan actually is and Im loosing interest in her, its starting to fall into the Anna or Myriam side of things rather than early Sophia in AWAM (current is BS too).
If author wants to write a STORY, then he needs to take more care about the timeline and her character. If author just want to do a sequence of sex clichés like Project Myriam, then dont waste time with flashbacks and exploring her past. This in between is "meh".
Mom is discovering herself with erotic pictures but she used to film porn videos with the husband?
Mom is surprised by teens cocks but she used to go to nudist beach and pose with the cliché black bulls?
Mom is hesitant to touch any other man than her husband but she used to play swinger?
Why when the neighbour showed her porn pictures she didnt remember the ones on her PC? For example... Flashbacks are breaking the mom character too much, I dont know who Susan actually is and Im loosing interest in her, its starting to fall into the Anna or Myriam side of things rather than early Sophia in AWAM (current is BS too).
If author wants to write a STORY, then he needs to take more care about the timeline and her character. If author just want to do a sequence of sex clichés like Project Myriam, then dont waste time with flashbacks and exploring her past. This in between is "meh".