VN Ren'Py Naughty Neighbours [v0.48] [OuterRealm3D]

[Ozygator]

I said it before and I repeat myself. this guy needs to sit down and write a cohesive story, otherwise this is going to implode in his hands.

He is just improvising scenarios, moving from place to place, it a way it makes no sense and also breaks the story. This maskerade club makes absolutely no fucking sense for a woman who doesnt know what a "spicy selfie" was 2 days ago. But at the same time this woman was doing hot wife stuff and drugs, but then she became a conservative mother who hadnt drink in decades, but then she goes to an orgy club...

Come on! Make it coherent. I dont know who Susan is, you are all over the place. Start with small corruption, small situations, end up with drugs and orgies. This all and nothing destroys the MC and the novel with it, she seems to have no personality at all, just an empty vessel moved around.

Stop and write a cohesive story, stop doing a salad of fetiches all over the place with no coherent storyline at all.

Eh, the game is pretty much already pointing down the typical "whore/slut female MC" role. There are a lot of AWAM fans who want more story, and general fans who like things to make sense, but I would not expect anything other than Susan being degraded and becoming the worst slut possible with the flimsiest of reasons, since it's pure porn logic.

The story is already very poor on the character consistency, but I can see that being 'hand waved' away soon with the justification that she was merely hiding her 'true' nature.

From the start this had strong overtones of the typical corruption/whore/slut female MC trope and it's merely accelerating down that path at this point. Anyone who thinks thee will be any player control to not have her go down that path I suspect will be extremely disappointed.

 

[DurumMurud]

If this is humiliation for the sake of it, pure misoginy, I will not support it obviously.

The novel was about a mother experiencing spicy situations with young and adults when the window of her husband out happened. She was going to be hit by the teenagers, the adults, the neighbours, etc... There was plenty of room for interesting plots and ideas, that end up scalating into interesting sex situations.

Suddenly, she is raped drunk and drugged several times, she is in a sadomasochist cult, and the "fan art" points at pure sociopathic humiliation. Porn is one thing, women love trash talk, love domination, but misoginy is another thing. Im telling you, this is going to implode in his hands, he is playing a dangerous game.

He should go back to the main story, quit this recurrent out of place shit, or leave it as a niche for waaaaay later. When I see Susan picture in the fan art I feel compasion and empathy, and trust me, Im ZERO feminist. Too much is too much, be careful boy, go back to the story and quit this shit or you will end up alone with a very small set of sociopathic followers driving the story to ridiculous places.

 

[McZoy]

He deleted it because it's a bad file. It is incomplete and doesn't contain all the files.

Thanks mate

 

[Bmagada]

If this is humiliation for the sake of it, pure misoginy, I will not support it obviously.

Oh no, not the Misogyny!!!

 

[Bmagada]

Its not a bad game, it's just all tease. It feels like a milking game. Like dude shes the MC, just have her bang anyone.

 

[Taker Fan]

What is the Password?

 

[baka]

Im not sure Im happy with the development of the story. this sect is kind of out of place and too much.
no story of the husband this round, that I think should be one of the main plots as well.

 

[rahulyo]

What is the password of Laptop ???

 

[longjohngold]

Libby is great, but quite a shame her Dad isn't around to fuck her, won't be quite the same kick if someone else is doing it. I'm excited to see what those laptop pics are and if they've already been hooking up. Kelly is an absolute smokeshow too, definitely want to see a lot more of her, preferably without a mask.

What is the password of Laptop ???

Susan tells like like 10seconds before that.



The second one you can't know yet (and doesn't matter).

 

[interested_guy]

What is the Password?

the first Suzie123
.. the second . I'm still looking for

 

[MixQQ]

I do like this game, but ngl, 0.35 kinda dropped the ball... I don't have ZERO lesbian points for no reason, yet the game now forces me into the lesbian kiss... (Even taking out the forced cunnilingus from a woman if I fight, which would be the choice I want to take, but then I can't deny the lesbian stuff again...)

I can live with the Sex-Cult thing, if it is important for the overarching story of how she gets more corrupted it makes sense to have a sort of Game Over if she decides not to go trough with it, but pretending to let the player decide and then force lesbian shit on them anyway is just annoying as hell... so yeah Dev, if you want the story to go this way, give the option to choose the gender of the Dom and make it possible to deny a kiss with Kelly, this part is just shitty design

yea another avn with forced lesbianism.. this is a real fucking plague, this shit has to stop

 

[neronwtf]

If this is humiliation for the sake of it, pure misoginy, I will not support it obviously.

The novel was about a mother experiencing spicy situations with young and adults when the window of her husband out happened. She was going to be hit by the teenagers, the adults, the neighbours, etc... There was plenty of room for interesting plots and ideas, that end up scalating into interesting sex situations.

Suddenly, she is raped drunk and drugged several times, she is in a sadomasochist cult, and the "fan art" points at pure sociopathic humiliation. Porn is one thing, women love trash talk, love domination, but misoginy is another thing. Im telling you, this is going to implode in his hands, he is playing a dangerous game.

He should go back to the main story, quit this recurrent out of place shit, or leave it as a niche for waaaaay later. When I see Susan picture in the fan art I feel compasion and empathy, and trust me, Im ZERO feminist. Too much is too much, be careful boy, go back to the story and quit this shit or you will end up alone with a very small set of sociopathic followers driving the story to ridiculous places.

I think you go a little too far. While I agree that this sudden change doesn't make too much sense regarding the rest of the story, I disagree that is misogynistic. Some women enjoy this kind of kink. The problem is that 99% of devs around here can't or don't know how to describe women feelings with this kink (or women feelings in general). They use porn simplification and all women become turbosluts, for no reason other that their need for big cocks.

You say that this game is about a mother experiencing spicy situations, so why not a mysterious club to fulfill kinks such a bdsm, group sex (specially if she was a hotwife before)? The problem, again, is that the dev introduced this path too early, too fast; and on top of this, he didn't give the option to skip it for now or skip it whatsoever.

But let's be honest, as someone said before, all the signs are their pointing out to Susan becoming a slut (as most of the FMC games in here).

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

I think you go a little too far. While I agree that this sudden change doesn't make too much sense regarding the rest of the story, I disagree that is misogynistic. Some women enjoy this kind of kink. The problem is that 99% of devs around here can't or don't know how to describe women feelings with this kink (or women feelings in general). They use porn simplification and all women become turbosluts, for no reason other that their need for big cocks.

You say that this game is about a mother experiencing spicy situations, so why not a mysterious club to fulfill kinks such a bdsm, group sex (specially if she was a hotwife before)? The problem, again, is that the dev introduced this path too early, too fast; and on top of this, he didn't give the option to skip it for now or skip it whatsoever.

But let's be honest, as someone said before, all the signs are their pointing out to Susan becoming a slut (as most of the FMC games in here).

What happens at the sex cult club, stays at the sex cult club. They wear masks they take your phones and you use a fake name, also no contact allowed with them outside the club. It’s a perfect way for Susan to go there when she’s horny and let her inner slut out and should make it easier for sexual adventures to happen for her with Adam and Libby, Jo, her son, Jin, and the teen who sent her the dick pic

 

[Ragnar]

Love the new Eyes Wide Shut stuff, that's what you expect from a game with a banner like this.

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The slow burn son-daughter insect trope is just boring and trite.

 

[neronwtf]

What happens at the sex cult club, stays at the sex cult club. They wear masks they take your phones and you use a fake name, also no contact allowed with them outside the club. It’s a perfect way for Susan to go there when she’s horny and let her inner slut out and should make it easier for sexual adventures to happen for her with Adam and Libby, Jo, her son, Jin, and the teen who sent her the dick pic

Yes, I think is a good excuse to speed up her slutification.

 

[DunderMifflinPam]

Can you upload the unzipped version 0.40 please?

 

[DurumMurud]

Yes, I think is a good excuse to speed up her slutification.

Basically in terms of writting, it is a MacGuffin. It's something audience dont give a shit about, never asked for it, but is necesary to speed up the main plot, and that is considered 99% of the time bad and lazy writting (sometimes is genious tbf).

The masquerade cult is a very bad MacGuffin. We don't care about it. We didn't asked for it. It moves us away from the main hooks (at this point mainly the kids but I hope more good ones to come). If it ends up with a simple visit, we dont care. Most of us wish we could simply jump over it.

We don't know why that place is special. We don't know why Susan decided to go. We don't know what Susan really thinks and feels about it appart from swallow comments. Susan didn't earned the right to assist. "A random girl in a random store invites another random woman with an important age gap that she just met and knows NOTHING about her, to the most exclusive and dangerous but lustful place on earth", are you kidding?

Come on! cut the shit, go back to the story! Don't incite him to keep with that bullshit, make him a favor and don't clap on that! Don't be a yes-sayer, dont bow to shit! This guy can write some interesting shit with the kids and the neighbours, dont comply to that weird shit. This novel was promising, dont fuck it up.

Anyways, I'm moving. Hope the author realises that this direction is not welcomed by part of his audience, and if forced, it passes several red lines pushing people out.

 

[Geigi]

Porn is one thing, women love trash talk, love domination, but misoginy is another thing.

I agree. Being a girl gamer sucks.

 

[Oberlix]

The patch took a turn in a different direction but unfortunately it wasn't to my taste, I'll wait for the next patch and if it does, then there aren't any other games

 

[neronwtf]

Basically in terms of writting, it is a MacGuffin. It's something audience dont give a shit about, never asked for it, but is necesary to speed up the main plot, and that is considered 99% of the time bad and lazy writting (sometimes is genious tbf).

The masquerade cult is a very bad MacGuffin. We don't care about it. We didn't asked for it. It moves us away from the main hooks (at this point mainly the kids but I hope more good ones to come). If it ends up with a simple visit, we dont care. Most of us wish we could simply jump over it.

We don't know why that place is special. We don't know why Susan decided to go. We don't know what Susan really thinks and feels about it appart from swallow comments. Susan didn't earned the right to assist. "A random girl in a random store invites another random woman with an important age gap that she just met and knows NOTHING about her, to the most exclusive and dangerous but lustful place on earth", are you kidding?

Come on! cut the shit, go back to the story! Don't incite him to keep with that bullshit, make him a favor and don't clap on that! Don't be a yes-sayer, dont bow to shit! This guy can write some interesting shit with the kids and the neighbours, dont comply to that weird shit. This novel was promising, dont fuck it up.

Anyways, I'm moving. Hope the author realises that this direction is not welcomed by part of his audience, and if forced, it passes several red lines pushing people out.

I agree that the writing and the explanation for the club are pretty lame, but it also was with the "corruption" plan of the two "immature young adults" (all the shota thing even). That's why I said it's a problem in most FMC games.

Personally I'm not encouraging the dev to do anything, quite the contrary. I've already exerted that for me it wasn't the time for this kind of path, maybe later. I just answered this other user, pointing out what it seems almost obvious, with the acceleration of her slutification, unless he choose to do as AWAM.

I see that we share some POV regarding this kind of games, do you have in mind one of them which for you is good?