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Yep... the Developer and time travelers since IT'S NOT IN THE GAME YET.
Use the search next time before asking questions might save you a lot of time and looking foolish.
I used to like this game. The reason I'm using the past tense is because I'm skeptical about whether I will continue to like it in the future.
As porn gamer, I have a intuition that the Dev definitely designed the story with three main corruption arcs in mind 1) Jo's story, 2) Mike and Adam's story, and 3) the VG club story. However, the issue is that these three story plot shouldn't progress separately—they need to intertwine organically for the narrative to have meaning.
For example, while progressing Jo's story, it should naturally tie in with Mike and Adam's story (like how the MC discussed Adam's masturbation during a car ride with Jo—that was a good setup for later). Or, if the VG club mission involves something perverted, then Adam, Mike, or Jo should be connected to that mission in some way. If the stories are interwoven like this, it would result in more exciting episodes and fewer clichés.
I was sure the Dev had this in mind and would use 1, 2, 3 in this way, but my expectations are gradually being let down. Especially with Adam's case—I was looking forward to episodes where he and Mike team up, but instead, the game only hints at Mike's involvement while Adam handles things only himself. This leads to a boring, cliché, and sometimes nonsensical "sex education" or sudden, unrealistic physical intimacy that feels out of place.
I'm okay with the weak depiction of sex scenes. I'm okay with the poor in writing. I'm even okay with the corruption progressing too quickly and lacking coherence at times—that’s all within the boundaries of what you can expect from a porn game. But if the aspects of the game I considered its strengths don't shine through, all that will remain are the cons .
I liked this game, and judging by the developer's update speed, I think they are diligent and hardworking. However, it's also true that I'm becoming more and more concerned.
Once again, every story needs to connect and build upon each other, creating episodes in the process. That's where true fetish content is born. If the game fails at this, it will only end up with its flaws on display.
As porn gamer, I have a intuition that the Dev definitely designed the story with three main corruption arcs in mind 1) Jo's story, 2) Mike and Adam's story, and 3) the VG club story. However, the issue is that these three story plot shouldn't progress separately—they need to intertwine organically for the narrative to have meaning.
For example, while progressing Jo's story, it should naturally tie in with Mike and Adam's story (like how the MC discussed Adam's masturbation during a car ride with Jo—that was a good setup for later). Or, if the VG club mission involves something perverted, then Adam, Mike, or Jo should be connected to that mission in some way. If the stories are interwoven like this, it would result in more exciting episodes and fewer clichés.
I was sure the Dev had this in mind and would use 1, 2, 3 in this way, but my expectations are gradually being let down. Especially with Adam's case—I was looking forward to episodes where he and Mike team up, but instead, the game only hints at Mike's involvement while Adam handles things only himself. This leads to a boring, cliché, and sometimes nonsensical "sex education" or sudden, unrealistic physical intimacy that feels out of place.
I'm okay with the weak depiction of sex scenes. I'm okay with the poor in writing. I'm even okay with the corruption progressing too quickly and lacking coherence at times—that’s all within the boundaries of what you can expect from a porn game. But if the aspects of the game I considered its strengths don't shine through, all that will remain are the cons .
I liked this game, and judging by the developer's update speed, I think they are diligent and hardworking. However, it's also true that I'm becoming more and more concerned.
Once again, every story needs to connect and build upon each other, creating episodes in the process. That's where true fetish content is born. If the game fails at this, it will only end up with its flaws on display.
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Well said. I totally agree as the storyline progression just seems all over the place, jumping into the sex club story arc full throttle and out of the blue while putting the existing Adam/Mike and Susan arc on almost complete hold for two releases now really created a disconnect from the overall project for me. Hopefully the dev will refocus on the elements that got us invested in this game to begin with rather than continue to introduce new and unrelated arcs and characters with no rhyme or reason... a trend that's proven to be the downfall of many games of late.
As someone who likes producing story lines and comics myself I know how hard it can be to maintain core focus as the creative side of your brain is always in full gear but it's vital when creating a project to create a plot/story line BEFORE beginning the creation process and sticking to it. Failing to do so merely creates a jumbled mess that players/reader/fans cannot follow and erodes fan support quickly.
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What's pathetic is someone who spends five years as a member and hasn't spent two minutes learning how to use the search function to find the answer to a question that's been asked and answered repeatedly.
The dev making every situation with the mom is crazy and made her seem like a wetard/simpleton is hilarious
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I swear the dev of this game has a hidden poop fetish lmao..
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Well another example the dev really does have a poop fetish lol..
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I swear the dev of this game has a hidden poop fetish lmao..
