i was hoping for something good, or something at least passable. this is not it for me.
maybe an untrained boy that needs saving pretending to be a man who's supposed to be a warrior, who can't dodge a blade from a woman after a decade of training looks believable for some, but not for me. i stopped at the beginning of the second chapter but from what i've seen, the story just doesn't do it for me. you have a proper explanation of the childhood, sure, but it's done in more of a tedious way than an engaging one. and no, i don't mean multiple choices, i mean engage the readers, make them feel like they somehow are part of the story. make it such a way that makes the readers feel like they are in there, not just some distant observer. i haven't seen/felt any of that here. could be it's just me.
add the magic concept from the mc's early days, since apparently the mom had it, show the training he did for a decade and then show some reason as to why he's a complete idiot when it comes to combat and sure, i'll believe a girl gets within 3m of him without getting her neck snapped and all her bones broken. i've seen boys that are half his size and age able to do it after only half a year of training. so far, the very first combat scene is about as believable as the road runner cartoons.
now for the renders. while the backgrounds and the models are good looking, having 10 shots from as many different angles just to try and emphasize a moment is not a good choice (didn't happen just once). for one, 2-3 shots should be more than enough to show everything. for two, if you somehow end up going through them all too fast, you get motion sickness. that, to me, screams of someone who's doing this for the first time and simply trying to see what sticks or someone who can't decide what looks better and just throws it all in.
overall, just a simple NO from me