A story with such promise. Beautifully rendered with an intriguing story line. I found this to be an engrossing story at first. Eliza and the MC's love story was beautifully told and explored. It really surprised how much of the romantic it brought out in me.
Then you are forced in to a romance with a pirate who I had no interest in at all. I found her obnoxious. The other LIs are okay but there is little content to get to know them and become attached like there is with Eliza. Then finally united again with our total sweetheart Eliza and she is turned in to a murderous monster. No thanks.
Some will see her as redeemable, but for me the horse has bolted. I would have been more interested in overcoming her bloodlust, not her giving in to it so easily and then trying to redeem herself. Then the murder gets covered up by those around Eliza. Now our growing group of allies are no better than the "bad guy" they are trying to stop. A shame, I had high expectations for this one.
Then you are forced in to a romance with a pirate who I had no interest in at all. I found her obnoxious. The other LIs are okay but there is little content to get to know them and become attached like there is with Eliza. Then finally united again with our total sweetheart Eliza and she is turned in to a murderous monster. No thanks.
Some will see her as redeemable, but for me the horse has bolted. I would have been more interested in overcoming her bloodlust, not her giving in to it so easily and then trying to redeem herself. Then the murder gets covered up by those around Eliza. Now our growing group of allies are no better than the "bad guy" they are trying to stop. A shame, I had high expectations for this one.