This feels like a story that could’ve been great but was told the wrong way. The story, the way the kink is handled is all good and the wife is likeable. Sadly it’s just let down by it all having to be done through text messages. It makes it overly repetitive and a little lifeless because everything has to be told in text message form and text messages are about as good for story/novel as telling it through tweets. It just limits how the story can be told, structured and presented. I get the idea behind it but I feel it held this back big time.
I don't really know what else to say about it; good chars, story but dragged down by the anchor that is telling that story through a phone. Really wish the dev had just made a normal VN.
I don't really know what else to say about it; good chars, story but dragged down by the anchor that is telling that story through a phone. Really wish the dev had just made a normal VN.