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A very minor bit of feedback I will give to Le Stag. I'm guessing it's a random interlude, but I got the "Hello Pal! I was with your girlfriend earlier" messages from Oliver at Ch25. And then at Ch26, Laura gives the opportunity for MC to say don't go see Oliver again.
If someone disliked Oliver, they may dislike that Laura is apparently seeing him again already, before that conversation. Maybe that interlude shouldn't happen until after Ch26 at least?
If someone disliked Oliver, they may dislike that Laura is apparently seeing him again already, before that conversation. Maybe that interlude shouldn't happen until after Ch26 at least?